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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    Well done! Part realism, part fantasy Andrew Carter was told to fuck off--but I am sure he will not. Maybe, his help might be needed? The four boys are in love and are consummating their relationships and are moving to Australia to continue their high school education They will have a challenging complicated future and I look forward to reading about it
  2. Maybe Granger can find his next ship to command at the dockyards and St Vincent will owe him a favor after his help at the dockyards
  3. Juno--Elizabeth Danfield ?
  4. This tale has more twists and turns, For now, Will and the family are free from involvement. The Ortega family is behind the efforts. They are =mae they did not get to buy Buck Industries and hate Travis. The FBI is on them. Fellowes works for Ortega. They want to push Petrovic out Someone named Juno is the snitch on the Ortega family and their people I think Will and his family/friends need still to be careful. Happy Thanksgiving. You did not leave with a real cliffhanger and that is something to value.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    Renn has met two men who might show up later and injure him or more : Ytter Kazerbol and the upset Mungo Zdain is totally submissive to Renn who uses him as a fu..toy slapping and rough housing him using degrading names. Zdain thinks he deserves this harsh treatment. His father despises him and thinks he is defective. Zdain accepts this terrible label and receives BDSM pleasure from Renn. Renn is on the lookout for the meaning of the red comet. He hopes seers and wise men on the Misty Isles can help.
  6. Another reason to be thankful on this holiday, George was at his best! Granger and Daventry teamed up with the PM and foreign minister and it worked out as Granger predicted, Daventry will be the ambassador to Spain and Granger will make the introductions, Granger demanded two things as his price to help them and it involves the Navy. They agreed but told him he had to get the agreement from St Vincent. Granger got St Vincent to give Weston commend of a frigate and to promote Kingsdale to Commander and give him a command. Granger wanted a frigate to take him to and from Spain commanded by Weston. He is being given the Belvidera which is wonderful homecoming for Granger. St Vincent had two requests for Granger and he agreed, He will help him looking over the shipyards when he finishes his duties--and seeing a child is born--and will spy for the navy on the ships in three Spanish harbors, So it seems favors are asked and exchanged to the benefit of all...
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    I hope Will can realize something is not right and Andrew is acting in a very unusual manner. He needs to get help for Andrew who might have even more extreme mood swings. Will might feel things are unnatural. Might Andrew tell him he is on medication to help him calm down and it is not helping him. The DG should be calling or seeing Will immediately to relate what Yani has told him. The head of CSIS should realize the mole is going to hurt Andrew without knowing what the medicine is, It description is not yet known so that is a direct clue it is malevolent.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Helen and Rick made progress in the case against. Shae and Jimmy are together and safe. Jarvis had his hearing and was denied bail. Those connected to Javis gave away their identity. Jarvis looked fearful of the assistant commissioner and two thug like coppers with him. Rick tracked down a young man, Casey, who knew Jimmy and Shane and spilled the beans. The wo hugs wwer enforcers for Jarvis and the assistant commissioner was a client who liked kinky sex with the boys roleplaying with him as the headmaster using corporal punishment. Now, Rick needs to keep Casy safe and h get his testimony on the record. Are there any other high profile clients that might interfere? Is Jarvis in danger from being killed in jail ? Epstein in the US supposedly committed suicide awaiting sex charges.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Bravo--Well Done So many heroic actions--Enrico was impressive and all of his new family acted effectively and responsibly Wolf was painfully taken out and left penniless. They left in the plane minutes before the Canadian authorities arrived to arrest the bad guys. Is Brian free of CSIS control? It is wonderful to hear that they all will continue in new stories
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    So explosive--Andrew is so wound up and intensely suspicious. Will and even Jared do not suspect Andrew is drugged and not fully in control. They are thinking conventionally. I hear things are going to get worse. Yani has or will inform the DG. The DG needs to act fast. He has to inform Will and find out from him and those around Andrew how Andrew is doing. His unusual behavior should be identified. The regular CSIS doctor should check on Andrew and suggest changes and new med. The mole cannot be allowed to hurt others like West. She is a malignant cancer.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    Silas may not be a politician, but he is directing and building up one that will argue for Will's removal and then his job in Parliament and the Conservative Party.,
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    Ok, Joel is a teenager with hormones and likely mood swings and uncertainties. His sexual desires and interests just might have been unlocked and raised to a new level by his mutual masturbation with Davin. Will he regret playing with Davin? It seems not so far. He was turned on tonight by Davin's actions and gladly kissed him back. It was all so new and had to feel great. Davin could be enough for him. He has given no indication that he wants to open up and "play the field." He noticed physical, appealing things about his agriscience teacher and even Roy. He can believe he can notice guys without wanting to have sexual relations in the Clintonian sense with them. Joel may also be naive enough to not realize his gazes longer than normal will be noticed by other males. He might consider Colt's raw comments at dinner were just wrong and not showing his true feelings. Will Colt's remarked close up Joel's admiration of males he likes? I do not know. Maybe, he will need to hear from Davin.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    “El Coyote has come to collect his due.” And Enrico is going to make the Wolf pay. He might be left behind badly hurt awaiting CSIS or RCMP capture. It looks like Enrico will be able to take his son and friends away in his seaplane and get the vital medical help Alex needs in time,
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    Andrew right now is a weapon of mass destruction. He is chemmed up and paranoid and needs professional help very fast to recover his balance. The DC needs to step in. Yani has or will give him the facts and the destructive efforts of the mole to act. She has seriously impaired Andrew on purpose. He has taken half the bottle of the poison "Andrew sat at his desk, but his posture was wrong: hunched forward, rigid, his fingers drumming a frantic, silent rhythm on the mahogany surface. The small bottle of Lisinitor pills sat next to his keyboard—half-empty."
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    "Thorpe chuckled, “shortest premiership in the history of Canada, you were determined though. Do you think there’s a plot against you unfolding in the wings here? I doubt it, there isn’t a politician in the country that wants your job right now.” Is not Silas Abernathy working behind the scenes to push out Will and replace him after he is destroyed by his handpicked Conservative Party leader?
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    So, Joel agreed to be a traitor and is joining the baseball team as a shortstop. He had a simple, non-painful talk with Coach Finn. Joel wants to be number 0 Life at home changed a bit for Joel. Colt spoke out saying Joel had the hots for his agriscience teacher Braden. He outed Joel to the group around the meal. Only Lacey and Gavin do not know Joel is gay. Davin said it did not bother him and Celia hugged him for being so accepting, Later Joel and Davin kissed passionately in his bedroom. I do not think they can keep their relationship secret for long. Finally, thank you for this early chapter. Happy Thanksgiving
  17. akascrubber

    Realities

    So weinerdog---If Brad is in on Lyn finding Luke giving him a blowjob, does he want to encourage Lyn to offer him a blow job, too?
  18. akascrubber

    Realities

    Lyn is incensed about Luke blowing Brad and confronts him in private. Luke admits he hss been blowing Brad for a year and he considers it just fun. He considers Bella has gotten into his life so he is returning the favor. Luke feels no guilt. Lyn cannot believe Luke. ut, Lyn will not tell ella and thinks Luke and Brad should tell her, Lyn is told another opinion by Luke that confuses him. Luke is told ..."You have zero reason to be jealous of me because of Brad.” “That’s what you think,” Luke threw at him." So, Luke thinks Brad has unresolved feelings for Lyn that Brad so far has hidden from him Is this matrix of feelings connected to their fight/breakup at the end of college that Brad's parents mentioned? I can see Lyn confess his feelings for Brad and run away from a shocked Brad who did noy have time to process what Lyn said. Brad had to see himself as straight for the sake of his future. Can Lyn stay silent? Will he talk to Alexander for advice?
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    You painted a picture of impending disaster with no ready solution for Will Carter The media led by the charges of Caleb Henderson and thinks Will Carter must behind Peter and Matt being hidden. Mel, frustrated by the Colonel's stonewalling thinks he is lying and will increase his efforts to hide the military coverup. Mel is not hopeful. She is going to call Will. "The political crisis had become utterly personal. The moral authority of the government was hemorrhaging, and the crisis room, filled with the noise of collapsing faith and fear, desperately searched for a solution." The situation will improve markedly in the near future. Caleb Henderson is going to meet with Will and confess about his role helping Silas carry out his nefarious plan with Matt and Peter. At some point, DG is going to tell Will about the new doctor mole that is planning on hurting Andrew and West.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    So far so good.... Helen and Rick cleared out the legal hurdles and have Shane in protective custody. The two crooked cops showed up but missed them and they got away to a safe place in the area. Rick will take Shane and Jimmy farther away to keep them out of the reach of Jarvis, Rick is taking them to the home of Martin's parents. Rick is once again to go through Martin' stuff looking now for any clue that might relate to the new murder. Helen and Rick are still tasked to see that the new float is ready for the parade.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    Very Exciting action--The armored Land Rover held up as they faced the first trap. The vehicles trying to hurt them are taken out. Kenny and Alex are learning and winning. Now, they are facing the dam and Wolf's soldiers' perimeter barrier. Kenny used the automated heavy rifle to aim at Wolf and a guard forcing them to duck. They have shocked them. But, how are they going to get inside the dam? How about more diversions from Enrico and Steve becoming more destructive on the server farm and Wolf's AI? Can Kenny find a hidden road that will let then travel inside the dam and link up with Steve and Brian and Enrico?
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    Good News--Progress Yani isolated a cell phone inside the CSIS HQ in a wrong place. This cell phone was reaching out to Silas Abernathy. He found out it was the doctor supposedly sent over from the PM's office to analyze Andrew and West. With his team's help he found out such disturbing details that he called the head of the CSIS to report another mole. Yani learned the doc was not assigned by the PM's office, but her orders were falsified. He also had to have found out how hurtful the drug she ordered Andrew to take. She will soon be arrested and held in a secure facility and interrogated. Andrew will be taken off his destructive drug. The last main mole may be taken out. Silas Henderson gave a strongly critical report on TV about Will and corruption. He accused Will of hiding Matt and Peter from facing serious charges, But, leaving the studio Caleb went into a restroom and threw up. He knew he was lying and that Silas was behind the kidnapping. He had crossed a line and was sick at pushing his charges so far as requested by Silas Abernathy. Caleb decided he needed to clear his conscience. He made a call and asked for an appointment to see Will Carter. There are more reasons to see the corner being turned. Mel has chewed out the colonel who replaced the dead general and wanted to know where Matt and Peter are, He said he did not know. She was furious. Mel is going to bump up the problem to Will to get him involved before the military closes up tightly. They cannot hide from the PM, can they? Finally, it seems Peter has found a way to reach West by using the internet capabilities of a game handset. Their guardians messed up and did not see this loophole. Let us hope Peter and West can find a way to point out their location. Silas probably thinks he is on track to destroy his enemies and win his battles. He had no idea his efforts are going to begin to fail spectacularly.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    How about saving his partner in the dam, Steve, who is playing havoc with the data servers and Wolf's AI ? They need to escape with Enrico plus Alex and Kenny who are coming to the dam. There is room for many to be heroes.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    The attack by Alex, mission commander, and Kenny, tactical accountant, is beginning. They know their mission and know where to go. Alex has 12 hours to operate charged with drugs until he crashes badly. They are armed with the right tools. Now they must successfully get to the dam, get inside to the server farm and notify Enrico's people where they are so they can damage it somehow. They all must escape from the dam and they will be extracted by Enrico's men. This is a very delicate operation facing committed, trained forces. They are on the clock. They are going to need lots of luck. The Wolf's men know they are in Radisson. Hopefully, Enrico can distract Wolf's men so they can enter the dam and find the server farm. It is going to be fascinating see them in action.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Your comments about Will finding a way to hold his head high and confidently finding his solution through this mess is encouraging, I had been seeing disaster and a very sad story happening. I will be looking forward with great interest to your plot development. Soon people in the US will be celebrating Thanksgiving. Having to read a depressing tale now will be so out of sync with the times.
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