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I am wondering if the author has forgotten and moved beyond this story. It may be time to label it "Abandoned."
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I was totally shocked. Superman raised his legs up and presented his bare ass for Lex to fuck him. Wow! Well, Clayton found a way and substance to confuse them and release their inhibitions. The result was amazing. Lex topped a willing Superman Clayton thought he escaped without leaving a trace since he thought his substance wiped their memory. Clayton did not count on the activities being recorded on tape. Lex will have a leather daddy he knows take care on Clayton. Clayton will be punished! This is worth a positive review. Ready for a new Superman--Lex Luthor story in a while?
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Superman and Lex In: Unexpected Discoveries
akascrubber reviewed Ticklishboy30's story in FanFiction
Both Lex and Superman are surprised to learn the other is ticklish. A third party intervenes and torments them. How they handle their tormenter and each other will be amazing and revealing. You might be shocked--or not!-
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Madam Woo centered Hugo and calmed him. The Bride appeared fulll of righteous fury over Dottie meddling with her friend. Hugo brought up groundhogging as a method. The Bride knew about it and had used it to win over husbands Hugo was not sure what to do. The Bride wanted to fight her. Hugo felt he would be trapped by Dottie and her agents. Madam Woo said he has to beat Dottie by going into the far past, not in the 1950's. She said he had to go back to 1836 before this all started. He had to win Stoker over and teach him how to groundhog--what ever that means to him I finally feel relief. Does Hugo have a real solution? Will the pain in his head subside?
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Thank you for this charming, testing and pleasing chapter. I was has fearful that disaster was awaiting them at every juncture. But, they made through another day. Zeke was turned around. The house they watched was clearly a trap. Joey was something special and darn insightful.. They made real love before sleeping. Tomorrow they can face their problems anew. But they will have great memories from today.
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Will You Bite Me If I Ask?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Will You Bite Me If I Ask?
Vince is going to continue being a guardian, He is going to help Theadore and Jack. Theodore needs his pack lands back. Danny thinks he has said goodbye to Vince. “But it looks like I’ll have to work hard to bring everyone together. Wish me luck.” “Good luck, Vince,” Danny said right away, reluctantly letting go of his friend. For the strangest reason, he felt like he was saying goodbye, and not only for a few hours or a day. I hope the next chapter answers what happens to Danny, Ryder, Thedore, Jack and Vince.- 32 comments
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What is Clayton's end game? Does he want more than making Luther suffer? He can relish ticking Lex for an extended time. But, eventually he must leave. How will he be safe when he leaves ?. What can Clayton do to be safe?
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Will You Bite Me If I Ask?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Will You Bite Me If I Ask?
Danny willingly accepted Ryder's bit. They bonded and a new chapter for the pack opens Vincent opened up to Danny and told him what he knew at the point.He had been Danny's guardian and now he is Thedore's. He is still trying to understand what is going on. He and Jack are connected to Theodore. His pack lands are hidden. What might happen to Theodore and his pack are not yet clear. So, next time, I hope things are better settled.- 32 comments
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This was so painful. I like Hugo and Jimmy did for a while until he decided they were not boyfriends. Jimmy had too much baggage from his sick dad. The story about his manipulated therapy was awful. Jimmy had reasons to not trust In the end after a sad unwinding, Hugo moved on. Jimmy needed more time and the help of good friends to mature and find new strengths. I want to keep on reading to see what happens to Jimmy.
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Chapter 5- Home Sweet Home
akascrubber commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5- Home Sweet Home
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Hugo arrived at Madam Woo's guest house in great distress with a serious migraine. Madam woo realized Hugo's mind had cave in on itself Dottie and her team had laid a diabolical trap. A complex array of facts were devised to overwhelm and confuse Hugo with too many possibilities for Alec's location. She intended to paralyze Hugo and force him to make a mistake when he returned so he could be captured. Alec was placed in a secure anonymous, hidden location with armed guards. Dottie told him about her plan to overload and confuse Hugo to help him make a fatal mistake. Dottie knew Alec would be helpless and could not warn Hugo. Can Madam Woo help Hugo find a solution to his mental overload? Dottie will not be counting on Hugo getting help.
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The Best Breakfast MeetIng Ever (Guest Prompt #2)
akascrubber commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Best Breakfast MeetIng Ever (Guest Prompt #2)
Who cannot absolutely like the end of the short story?. Will and Danny are together and planning a vacation. They no longer have a job rule conflict. I did not notice or miss the use of "I.' I -
All three should have had life vests. It is standard practice. I went to Boy Scout camp for several years and always was required to wear a life vest when I used a canoe. It was a required safety practice. Not having a life vest set all three up for problems. Brad brought the gear so he was at fault. Brad likes to wing things and sometimes his inadequate care/preparation can hurt. Well, they survived. Lyn got to see Brad naked and got a hug from Brad that Lyn thought made Alexander see him as pitiful. Lyn still misreads Alexander and his feelings for him. He is going to continue misreading Alexander for years.
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Jeremy's birthday is also a national holiday that remembers the attack on Pearl Harbor. Jeremy is only thinking about himself and whether or not others are congratulating him. It fits his normal outlook. Working on the Travis home redecorating project should give Jeremy something positive to consider that will build Jeremy's self-worth. He might also consider asking Marc for an art work for Travis's home. Travis did like the art work created by Marc now in Jeremy's home.
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Well, Canuk----Mark is a crafted literary wizard. we gratefully see how powerful his mind in these stories. He can surprise and will lead us eventually into a solid conclusion after puzzling us.
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Yes, this new evolution of the plot against Travis is bewildering. Fellowes has been sending out false data. He and the law firm are central. They are controlling the gang in this new understanding. “I think the only thing that is reliable is that the law firm knows about Big’s problem. Anything else may be dissimulation,” JP said. “In that case, we need to look at this in an entirely different way,” ....Will remarked We are not yet told what than is to stop/impair/destroy the law firm and the trust aimed at Travis.
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We have learned the Hugo and Alec are unique. Pairs have not stayed together in the time streams. She is facing something new and is not prepared for it. Dottie does not realize what Hugo can do by carrying out repeated tries. If he is threatened, he can activate his watch and retreat and take a break before trying to secure Alec once again. He is dedicated to find Alec and should succeed. Remember how Bill Murray after a multitude of tries turned into an accomplished piano player and beloved figure in that town. Bill Murray got what he wanted. Alec will also achieve what he wants plus maybe get revenge on Dottie.
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Joel told Celia about his old school and team mates....“I don’t want to walk up to people I’ve known my whole life and see that they know and hate me,” I whispered as another wave of tears blurred my vision and I blinked and let them fall. “It doesn’t have to be the truth; they’ll all find the reason they need.” That line is pretty much outed himself to Celia along with what else she has figured out already. She encouraged Joel to take his time and to give others a chance,..".you will find people that accept you, not all kinds of people think the same way.” Joel is still worried and has been crying. He was willing to go with Gavin and Davin to their home. Now he is going to be in a new environment. He has taken clothes to use in the hot tub to ease his aching body and is going to be given beer. I am looking forward to finding out what happens. Will Gavin and Davin pump him for more info? What else might happen?
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Jimmy--The life you have lived has been so challenging and you came out of top and did not let people or incidents drag you down. Your dad was so abusive and did not give you a strong foundation to grow upon and left you with issues for therapy. People you met along the way hurt you or gave you reasons to grow better or serve as hard and maybe better lessons for life. I am glad you found sex fulfilling and sometimes educational. Enough good people were drawn to you to help you out. You had to be a compelling, engaging guy. Vinegar Joe Stilwell, A US Army General who advised Chiang Kai-shek in China during WWII, had a favorite phrase which was "Don't Let the bastards grind you down." You did not let that happen to you, too. You have impressive ability to write about your past without being consumed by it. I am sorry to read about your train accident and need to use a wheel chair. I am now using a cane and sometimes a walker. We adapt and move on.
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Henry Reed may have heard some hints in the past 40 years where Alec is being hidden. Leaks about a kept guy might become known as time passes and the need for continued secrecy seems unwarranted My guess is that Alec would be housed near DC to be pulled in to the White House when Hugo is found --like at a military base such as Fort Meade or Fort Belvoir of maybe at the FBI training center at Quantico VA. A trap too obviously suggesting where Alec is kept might be devised in a location in DC proper.
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Henry is the key fulcrum point for Alec.He has explained the time situation and recurring limits to Hugo in clear terms. Hugo will come back every year at the same point and have a week to get Stoker back. This time Hugo returned 40 years after they met President Eisenhower. Mr, Reed or Henry as he wants to be called now played a movie on tape for Hugo. They both watched Groundhog Day so Hugo could see what he could do. He could repeat himself each time period until he got it right just like Bill Murray did in the movie. Dottie and crew would be expecting him and have set a trap where she expected him to look or where the false clues on his location were disclosed. She had made sure Stoker was really hidden But Dottie did not know where Hugo would first return each year in the same time period but she would be waiting at her trap. But, she may have not seen Groundhog Day. Hugo now knows he has an infinite number of times to get his efforts right to find a second watch and recover Alec. Hugo , I am sure, will be determined to succeed. I hope Alec has kept his spirits up and is looking for Hugo to return. Alec must have sought to be busy and physically active. His captors will have wanted him to be cooperative to aid their plans for Hugo's use.
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Joel was gracious enough to ride Raven and he survived. Now he has to make a school decision. He does not want to attend his old school and face the students and rumors. Surprisingly, his dad thought he would be still playing on. his old team His coach will miss him. Celia said she and Trace can arrange for him to go to a new school with her son. Will he be asked to play baseball at that school? Joel has accepted an offer to stay with Gavin and Davin. Their parents will not be home. Davin said they have a hot tub and beer. This is a recipe for mischief and loose lips. Will Joel say too much or do something he will regret? Let us see what happens.
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Umbridge deserved what she got in the Forbidden Forest. The centaurs got their revenge. Dottie is going to regret what she did to Hugo and Alec.
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Jimmy, You meet such interesting people and learn from them as you evolve. What fascinating experiences. The public sex shamelessly told. Your expanding and contraction relationships amaze me. I love that you keep those you care about near to your heart and them feel good about you as you both move on. I am especially impressed by your interaction with Professor Michael. He was taken with you, studied you, set you back on a path for your educational life and set good examples in the classroom that guided you later. You make me want to learn more about you and the key people in your life.
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Hugo returned the mirrors and shouted that he wanted to go back for Alec. He heard the music to Hallelujah playing as background. He saw and new it was his devil tormented him. He argued with the devil and was rebuffed. If he went back the men in 1953 would drain him dry and destroy him. Hugo was willing to go back and find Alec--who would be used as a way to force Hugo to comply. The devil told he could only go back a week later in 1953. Hugo will surf the streams to end up finding Alec. The devil is going to see Hugo in action. .Also, the devil said.... "This is really going to be interesting isn't it? I get to watch you go insane. Beautiful really... how does it go... you do it to yourself?" What a shocking end of this part. It is devoid of realistic hope for a good outcome.
