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  1. Brad and Jake are mixed into a very dangerous project with Petrovic who is marked to be killed. It turns out Petrovic's family no longer supports him over Fellowes. Petrovic added new information on his way of going into hiding. There is no trust on Travis. It was made up to get leverage over Travis. Fellowes is bringing the Serbian gang into league with a Mexican cartel. This cartel is fighting another one known to Brad. As things move along, Brad and his family could be drawn into a cartel war Petrovic gave Brad a flash drive with data, He told Brad he cannot reveal he has this flash drive. The remaining issue is removing any info on Big killing a guy. Could the flash drive help out? Brad and Jake need to read the flash drive and talk to Stef and JP for advice. BTW, Will is handling his Harvard education very well. He expects to earn a 3.95 and soon get a blow job from Preston!
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    With the Harvest Guard SUV rapidly fleeing from the house, the House's internet signal should no longer be blocked. Alex can transmit the formula when he is able. The threat to the world's food supply will be ended.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    So, I assume the tone will change soon. The time for healing will be short. The handpicked by the Order and Silas Conservative leader in waiting will arise in Parliament to claim the opposition mantle and shake things up.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Well, the drone was a deus ex machina. That device saved the day for now, What a very smart and extra capable AI machine. But, Skinner has escaped with Brian. I hope the police find them soon. Deus ex machina is a Latin phrase for "god from the machine" that describes a plot device where an insoluble problem is suddenly resolved by an unexpected and contrived event, person, or divine intervention.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Bravo--You gave us an eloquent, solemn, touching and worthy funeral honoring Bob Weston and transitioned into a hardy, robust, normalizing and healing traditional Canadian athletic experiences on ice. Good memories were made concluding the whole experience. Tommy skills were challenged on his skates with his coach, and the others were tested in a great, fun hockey game. I admire and salute your skills and insights in composing this needed and powerful chapter
  6. So Noah and Shi, one of the triplets, had a safe time in bed clothed. They did not do the Hokey-Pokey, So far, so good. Little mam Brody, shocked the crowd saying he had talked to a long dead multiple series Grandfather Tristan. What bis arresting is that family members know about this Tristan. Have the elements of ghosts and magic listed as part of this story now brought into the story?
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    Mel survived the horrible attacks with a painful leg injury. An old monk found her and took her to his abode/research area. She was told the Redeemers took the 4 youths to their temple. Mel is unable to save them. She decided she needs to tell the Duchess who might use her influence and money to free them. The monk has given her steps to follow o reach the Duchess. Mel will begin her journey soon. Things are problematic and there is no way to know if Mel can get what she wants.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    It is not easy to get things done without being interrupted. Shane finally talked and spilled the beans on Jarvis. He signed a written statement. Helen wants to get him away from the hospital and anyone trying to mess with him. I hope he is not killed or kidnapped before Helen can act. But, then they were ordered to go to the motor pool. They found out they were tasked to develop the department's float for the Mardi Gras parade. Helen called some friends to help design the replacement. They will need more help to rebuild the float. Alexis from the cafe is dead. They found him in the river. Helen and Rick will be checking this out.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    It's a standoff. Brian's life for the key. I assume he will hand over the key for Brian's life after making a copy for later use,' The Harvest Guard not being stupid will burn the house down to destroy any copies. Alex and Julian will be searched to find any more copies.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    There is not enough coffee to solve this problem quickly
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    I think Sarah is with West checking out Julien at the PM's residence --they flew by helicoper--and likely trying to figure out how much he knows and if he could compromise the Order. She was not mentioned concerning the attack on the killers. I assume Andrew will not let Sarah know about the takedown and anyone spilling his guts.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    The government needs to keep acting fast. The Order will move to hide and destroy links. Will Carter's forceful speech to the nation told everyone including the Order that Bob Hesston's killers were found and justice was served. Will was powerful and conveyed how serious he and the government are going to insure all those involved will be found and also brought to justice
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Awesome--The ex-military killers were found fast and three were taken down and the final one who was the intel element was captured with his comm/spy material. He promised to tell what he knew when captured. Let us hope Yuri, the killer team intel expert, has vital, insightful information. Normally, information is compartmented so one group only knows the minimum necessary to function. The military calls this "operational security." We will find out if Yuri knows too much and the government can develop real intel to go after the Order.
  14. Lots of interesting conjecture about motives and actions around the key blow job and fucking. Some, I think are on point., I hope our dear writer will give us more direct thoughts from the four on what has been transpiring.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    Of course, Sarah will let Silas know what she learned from Julien and they will set traps for CSIS, not knowing Andrew is onto them. Andrew is not going to be willingly caught. I hope Silas is instead caught leading the spy effort and will at some point mistakenly reveal the other key players. Maybe, Yani can get into his communications system and listen into him. He might also hear that Silas was behind the killing of Jane. She also gave out details about the Father's parents radio or secure phone system when she was in their home when she was in Louisiana..There could be enough possibilities for Yani to crack the Order's electronic wall.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    Where will help for Brian and Alex be found? Any new support will be unexpected , very surprising and needed soon. My initial hope was that that the RCMP in force will arrive after being alerted by their source in the high school. The other possibility is that that the text Alex sent before things got really bad would result in more effective fighting forces from his father to defeat the Harvest Guard.
  17. Cane 23 The blow job Luke gave Brad was a defining and clarifying moment. I find your interpretations of the actions and motivations of Brad, Lyn, Luke and Alexander are very convincing
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    "Andrew nodded at her, leaning in. “Let’s see if our little piece of cheese draws out our little mouse.” His eyes swept over the Command Center, as the careful eyes of the Internal Affairs agents watched as well. While Operation: Fancy Feast unfurled, Operation Whack-a-mole was lurking, ready to pounce on the spy inside." So, Andrew is hoping Lefevre 's unexpected and volunteered actions will activate Sarah who will see him soon and she will by her following reporting will reveal to them more about the Father's network. She, hopefully, might feel a need to contact and warn Silas and give away operational details and priorities. I am still concerned that key vulnerabilities about Will might be leaked to Sarah by Lefevre.
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    What heart throbbing action ! Brian and Alex took Julian Lawson with them as they escaped from the Harvest Guard thugs/killers. They used the Ranger to flee in traffic until they had to run into a construction site to hide. But just as it seemed they would be found, Brian said it would stay behind and take the three on so Alex and Julian could flee. Alex left with Julian and put him in a cab, but returned to help Brian, This situation looks hopeless. Three huge well-trained brutes against a hockey goalie and a soft, probably not well trained to fight high school student. They are going to need to be rescued, or they are facing great bodily harm. Where are the Mounties when you need them?
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    A new crisis or opportunity. RCMP Julien admitted to Peter he knew dirt on Will and had for weeks but had not told anyone. He found he liked Will and his family and could not hurt them. Peter contacted West at CSIS HQ who is arriving by helicopter to question West in the hopes of turning him and getting eyes into the Father's operation. The only problem is that Sarah the political threats person is with him and is going to be soon with Julien. Will she hear about Will's mental health issues? Sarah isa hard core mole for the Father and Silas. How are West and Andrew going to handle getting information from Julien while not having Sarah destroy their operation? Are they going to assume she is the mole inside CSIS and feed her false plans?
  21. It was shocking--Lyn was taking a run looking for Luke and found him giving a blowjob to Brad who was enjoying it. This is what Lyn dreamed of doing to Brad in college and now Luke got to do it Lyn was very upset and returned to his room and took a shower while trying to hit the walls hurting himself. He was confused and hurt. Alexander asked him what was wrong. Lyn thinking more made a decision. He asked Alexander to fuck him raw. Brad and Luke enabled Lyn to be ready to take the next step with Alexander
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Helen and Rick met Shane, the injured prostitute beat up by Jarvis, in his hospital room. They offered to help him, but he was resistant and feared retaliation by Jarvis who said he had friends in high places. Shane was told by who he thought were two cops who visited him earlier that he was in trouble. Helen assured him he was not. Rick sat next to Shane and made the pitch that they could help him and with his testimony and one from another young man , then Jarvis could be put away. Shane agreed at the end to help. He also is going to need protection. Helen is going to be checking out who was getting into her case. It was troubling.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    OMG--Brian and Alex fought the snow, broke away from their attackers with a car ride from Kyle and eventually ended up in an Ottawa bus station finding the lost youth who was fleeing to Toronto. But, as Alex went after him, two menacing hulks appeared on the opposite p[latform looking for Julian Lawson. They were going after the target. What can Alex do? Julian sees the evil men and is scared. Time for some luck and a distraction?
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Note: It seems the plans Silas announced earlier---in the Prologue--have changed. Hesston was to have a natural looking death. The Order would not be connected. The funeral would be used to identify the new youthful conservative party leader. Prologue--"Silas walked to the phone, his gaze distant, already orchestrating the logistics. "Start drawing up the guest list and the security manifest. I will ensure the death is quiet, definitive, and seemingly natural. The Lion of Winter falls quickly, clearing the path for the new Conservative champion."
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    OMG--The brutality and direct kills so efficiently done revealing it was an assassination was shocking, This terrible act will have a powerful impact on the political leadership, the media and the public. The Order has become a terrorist organization. The two RCMP officers guarding Bob Hesston were quickly killed by men moving around the fishing boat. Bob Hesston stood tall and faced his killers as he was shot. He was confident and did not back down. He was a true hero This attacked was meant to convey a message-"The timing on the heels of his public defense of Prime Minister Carter. The messaging is clear, Director. This is retaliation. It has all the hallmarks of a reprisal execution. The objective is to terrorize the political spectrum into compliance with the Order's agenda." Andrew is directing the investigation. It was clear the assassins had military-like skills and possible experience. It will be a matter to be included in the ongoing CSIS analysis The government's political leadership was secured and protected assuming danger is still possible. Will was taken to his official residence and went to the three boys. He moved close to Tommy and sensitively and compassionately told Tommy that his grandfather had died. Jacob supported Tommy. All three boys are a solid team that will support each other. Will was a perfect healer
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