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Pentatonix - Hallelujah (Official Video)
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We are told...."Hugo and Alec must navigate a world of anachronistic warriors, sadistic machine hunters, and enigmatic guides. They are on a collision course....." This is a challenging, very readable story of two main characters taken out of their time who grow beyond their original views of their boundaries and to become obviously close and to bond and to need to be together. We see them traveling through time facing unusual challenges, beings and some who want to use them. Be ready to be surprised and captivated by what you read.
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OMG--Hugo had to leave. He was the only one with a watch. He was the most prized because of the knowledge he could deliver. Alec asked Hugo to go on his own. He would seek a watch later. He assured Hugo he would not forget him and he would find him. Their situation got worse as tghey were planning what to do. Alec did not have a watch.The FBI showed up in force in the bar to take him and Alec. Dottie was with them and must have taken them to this place.Alec fought them off to save Hugo but could not impair all of the FBI men and was taken down and severely hurt. He would be arrested. Hugo used the watch during the fight and are now he is separated from Alec. Dottie did not see Hugo leave. She will be mad. Alec begins his trek to find Hugo What a cliffhanger!
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Five years later--- Azula and his people are prospering--But-- They are looked upon by other powers as a prize to claim or re-claim. Azula is going to be asked by his council on what is to be done Raith has been so upset and distant with his wife. She gave him drugs twice to force him to make love to his wife and she bore two children separately. He could not forgive her actions. Now back after a long tour of the border he met his wife, He would not take any drink from her. She poured tea in her cup and her son asked for one, too. She immediately became distressed and died quickly. Their son who drank little of the tea was knocked out but not dead now. Healers were called. Poison in the tea was found and some medicine was given to the ill young son who hopefully will recover. Raith has locked the house down. He will follow up investigating Rassa who was mentioned by his dying wife. Raith does not know Rassa is a spy for his wife's evil father and intended to poison the prime minister when he visited Raith. Raith's wife overheard her father's plans and she was killed before she was able to tell her husband. I hope Raith exposes the murder plot and gets justice. At least the dangerous Raith must die What a nest of vipers!
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Family Is What You Make of It
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Family Is What You Make of It
Jamie and Hearst are really good together and they are committed to each other Hearst told Wen... I’m the only guy who can call himself an expert on Jamie Wicklow, drummer extraordinaire, the best drum teacher in the world, and also the most gorgeous barista in a one-thousand-mile radius.” Jamie return home after his tour with food for Hearst. He took off his shirt and Melinda thought Hearst should worship his body. Hearst thought about it and said he needed to start licking his chest--mmmmm They have such and easy and comfortable way about their relationship Thank you for this compelling tale.- 8 comments
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sorry-- repeat comment
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I vote for EPIC as long as Ray and Gab survive and help the others regain their proper roles. I do want Valerius to turn into ashes.
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I vote for EPIC as long as Ray and Gab survive and help the others regain their proper roles. I do want Valerius to turn into ashes.
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The battle was intense and brutal between shifters and vampires. Lord Valerious overlooking the battle was disturbed. He no longer felt certain of victory. Rafael was fighting with deadly force in the midst of the carnage.. “This is pointless. A victory of ashes. Stop the fighting. There is a better way.” What is the better way? Will both leaders fight in single combat till one wins?
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So, we now hear the story of Jimmy's troubles from winning the national literary prize. What a mess. He was so young. Now he is older with new friends. Hugo and Sareena offered to help him. He would go to class with Sareena and slowly feel out going back to college. Jimmy stepwise recovered and began his new educational journey
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What a mess. The phone calls have been listened to and false data was given to the cops g fingering both D and Joey. The cops know they are going after Leon's information on the gang. D even thinks they are being watched now in the beach house, 'They need to think up a new plan. D is still sure they need to secretly get what Leon hid. Is it possible to not be caught and killed? This is serious and very dangerous.
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They know what must be done in this bizarre respite location and have been able to come to grips with what is happening in the Tides of Time. Some travelers are leaving and others remain. I expect they will find two people who see their watches as curses and want to give them up. They might start with people who seem to be near in time to this present and may want to stay here. Good Luck! I expect Reed with stay behind to do damage control and stop any current problems from Hugo's and Stoker's trip.
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The Three Amazing Vampires
akascrubber commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in The Three Amazing Vampires
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"The Cookout (Part 2)"
akascrubber commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Cookout (Part 2)"
Whose heart cannot melt when facing a young, handsome, very sexy and smiling Brad Pitt--mm? He would win hearts and willing partners. -
I am sorry your other books are not in libraries crvboy.org has several of your works listed alphabetically under authors. You are listed as Lyndon, Christopher
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A sharp cop or maybe agent would have a second gun on him. I am interested into seeing what Reed likes. The Colt 1911 would have been out of date in 2025. James Bond used the more compact Walther PPK pistol
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I bet Reed kept his 45 in great condition and would be ready to use. The weapon had an effective safety, too.
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I like a long story--Plese do not go off base as Dr. Who has gone. It has lost its fan base.
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They need to flee and find that spot in New York. Hopefully, they can find two people who willingly give up their watches. Reed knows they must leave this time and is helping them as long as they leave. I have used the Colt M1911 as my side arm in the US Army. It useful at close range carving out body parts and not accurate at longer ranges. It does make a scary loud sound. It is a carnage weapon. It was developed to destroy Huk rebel forces in the Philippines in the early 1900's--hence the Colt as named 1911--who would he hopped up on drugs and stage attacks on US soldiers. The old US revolver had no effect on people in mass attacks. If Stoker shot Reed's body at a close range he would die within a short time.
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What an interesting date. They both gave their all and really began learning about each other and liking each other. Jimmy is very thoughtful and open about their developing friendship. Sex was not the end game this first date. They would last for a long time. "Just know that there was love there, and it came not in a rush of clothes and hurried passion. It would never have survived that. Wil and I discussed that the other night, had we jumped into bed, we’d have never lasted the week. It was a slow burn, intellectual, calm, and intense, like he was."
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Jimmy did work his magic and convinced a straight guy to give him a date and they must have clicked. There is something special about the evolving Jimmy. What a happy transition for Will and Jimmy !
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The empowered Stoker can stand up to Agent Reed in close quarters, I expect. Reed does not know yet about Stoker's new abilities
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Wow--J Edgar Hoover wanted them and had them arrested at the Smithsonian. The were placed in a cell in the FBI building. When agents appeared to take them to Hover. Stoker decided to take his Aggregate which gave him highly skilled fighting abilities. Stroker knocked out both agents and they fled the building with Hugo knowing its internal plans. Reed found them leaving the building and offered them a ride. He decided at this time not to kill them. Stoker's new abilities should continue to come in helpful.
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Please write with the dynamic covering your friends and partners you feel bests helps us understand you as you develop.
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What a charming story full of learning, growth and goodwill. Hugo is fascinating and more than an athlete. He really saw Jimmy as he is and wanted him and then to fully enjoy gay sex. They were splendid and brilliant and surprising. Finding out they separated on good terms is the best news. Jimmy is so young, and he needed Hugo as a good friend and best type of caring role model. "Hugo was the direct path to Wil. Without him guiding Jimmy to something better, Jimmy would probably still be lost. Gratitude for that crazy, geeky-jock boy—well, Jimmy never forgot." Now, please let us find out about Will.
