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Chapter 12: Silent Witness
akascrubber commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 12: Silent Witness
Don't stop..... I am betting Mason wants blow job from Eli who cannot say no. He dreams of sucking Mason off. Given Eli's track record I can see him being used one time and maybe ignored until Mason has a dry spell with the girls. But maybe Eli will be so talented that Mason will want repeats. -
Hugo rejected the object offering the possibility of severe devastation and temporal crisis. He did not take what Sinjin offered him. He needed to find another way Hugo returned to the mirrors and Thomas , the fiddler. After reflection, he asked Thomas to help him see into another person's soul. Then, he asked Thomas to show him Billy, who was just crying after learning his last parent, his father, we killed in WWII. So what will Billy help Hugo learn to better help him fight Dottie and bring Alec back?
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Duncan's ending and passing was so touching. Jimmy endured as he always did. Wil helped Jimmy be made anew like that broken plate. Wil and Jimmy got very close. That overnight experience in the so very cold bus shelter had to be a test of stength. As for their intimate connection--it was strong emotionally and will become stronger. I cannot see Wil staying, I assume they have more to grow. I appreciate Wil's influence on helping Jimmy write the first two Carter stories.
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Both Hugo and Alec are going to be understood as forces of nature. Alec has now been seen as one with Hugo coming up soon They were shocked that Alec was not a drooling idiot. They do not know he will keep learning and trying to get out. Plus, he has a goal and wants to know about 1981. Just a minor point--A US Marine installation would not be located by Mount Ranier, WA. Its presence would raise questions. The area is near Joint Base Fort Lewis a huge Amy -Airforce base for the West Coast. Then Army trains in this area. The US Marines are located very far south at Camp Pendleton, CA.
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Scary cliffhanger--Charles has been stunned and kidnapped. No one saw his disappearance by a robot. I am ready for Book II
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But, they need ideas to turn things around. Maybe we will see your ideas in the next chapter or two?
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Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Jack is a doctor. He will know his maladies and wrong-headed addictions, if any---like alcohol, drugs, sex, etc. He could have checked himself into a private clinic to recover. I think state medical associations will recommend places for doctors to get care. Treatment can last many months. -
To Bond with an Alpha
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in To Bond with an Alpha
And so this tale ends on a high note Danny and Ryder mated and completed their bond Danny traveled to his office to tender his resignation. Kat was rightfully terrorized and will now be overworked Ryder and Dnny are going to care for each other and their pack Thank you for this interesting, eventful, positive ending story Only the final chapter as epilogue remains- 24 comments
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Love admitted--Duncan told Jimmy he loved him and Jimmy admitted he loved Duncan, Duncan said he had a month to a year to live. All treatment efforts had failed. He had to be crushed but he accepted his fate, Jimmy was giving him new meaning. I feel for Duncan. My chemo succeeded and I did not have to face the choices he did, They have precious time to meld and to express their love.
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Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Another curve ball in the plot to hurt Travis--It is now thought that Petrovic will be killed by unknown enemies and replaced with Fellowes. This indicates a big vulnerability if it can be exploited. But, any enemy of Petrovic will be killed or be killed themselves. How can the mob's problems be used to destroy the law firm that is going after Travis? Can Fellowes be discredited and can he made to look incompetent to Petrovic in the process? They need to do more strategizing, but another family problem has come up. Jack has taken a leave of absence from his job and disappeared. Will Jake or someone he designates try to find Jack? This effort by Jack was planned since he clearly left his job letting his employer know. -
10 years--10 years Hugo kept returning weekly and knew the characters in detail. Hugo was at peace with his efforts and not mind numbed out of sorts like Dottie thought he would be. She just saw one week passing and did not see Hugo's repeated trips back learning more each time.. They were at a stalemate and Dottie was very upset at her inability to win. She ordered Miller to follow Hugo back when he time travels and hurt him very badly so he will give in when he returns to Dottie. Stoker was incensed. I expect he will tell Hugo what Dottie's sick plan is when they next talk by the mirror. I hope Stoker can reach Hugo in time. We still do not know what Hugo's strategy is to save Stoker.
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Let them enjoy their time here-They will later meet with Riley and plan the Ohio trip. Darius can call Nina and get her reaction to what Riley has proposed. But for now and maybe longer, Joey is the good luck charm Darius needs. Their efforts in Ohio are going to be fraught with danger. I bet Riley will have FBI agents trailing them as backup.
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Alexander agreed to go to Bella's party to meet her friends who want to see him. Alexander told Lyn he will get his pond of flesh and fuck him, He also told Lyn he will stay until Lyn makes a decision--but Lyn does not know what Alexander is meaning Bella askes Lyn to talk to her brother about becoming a lawyer. It is a lost cause. Luke does not want to go into law. Bella just wants him to do something that will make her and friends be impressed. Brad comes out and wants them to go swimming. Lyn objects thinking Bella will be mad. But,Aalexander sees them and finds out they are going swimming. Brad and Alexander have a starring contest and Aleander decides to join them leaving Bella in the lurch. Once again, Lyn is oblivious to the power dynamics I can see a silent to vicious contest going on between Brad and Alexander over Lyn. However, Alexander can feel assured he will ultimately win when he gets Lyn in bed. Brad is not going offer Lyn sex, I bet.
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I had to look up...Baby No-No Moustache Man So in a TikTok video a baby cries when seeing his dad without a beard he used to wear. The shock of a surprising bare face was stunning and fearful So---Hugo will have to shoot first before Dottie realizes he is present. I hope he can find a way to surprise her. We will see what you have actually conceived as a way for Hugo to win.
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Say--Could Hugo shoot to kill Dottie and then her agents will fade away?
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And the strip tease and connected action would have been on tape for viewing over and over....to distract the agents from being bored watching Stoker just sitting around not being interesting.
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I am just blown away by Duncan's strength and determination. Jimmy was his true focus. He knew he was going to die and wanted to live his final days/week/ moments with Jimmy. Richard was there and Jimmy thought Richard put Duncan's ex-wife up to the birthday party to hurt Jimmy--unknown to Duncan-but was thwarted by Duncan's decision to make Jimmy his priority. What a statement....."....Jimmy remembering a man that had changed everything for him and wasn’t afraid."
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So it will be time for both of them to jack o... as Hugo becomes naked ? How does this action help them figure out how to defeat Dottie?
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Maybe we might find out about some of the strong characters in later stories , but longer located at SunnyHill.
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I like your ideas drpaladin. You are changing the paradigm of a simple standoff with Dottie having overwhelming force. To go along with your chaos ideas--Hugo can wear a protective mask can set devices that force out through the ventilation system a great deal of a powerful sleeping gas to disable Dottie and her crew. Hugo would know how to use the ventilation system from his abilities.
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It is clear Joel is not going to make any intimate move on Davin. If Davin wants Joel to be more that a basic friend, I think Davin is going to do more than randomly touch him. Davin might start by again massaging his sore shoulder and let his hands wander to see how Joel reacts
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But, Richter had a wife as required by his society. Will we find out more about her?
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Oh My--Duncan and Jimmy connected intimately. Duncan wanted to protect Jimmy, but he was sick and dying of some not disclosed illness, Jimmy tells this story candidly and clearly to Will who is deeply touched and they kiss. Will learns about Duncan, Richard's controlling behavior and Jimmy's bastard dad who had him committed at 13 because he wanted him out of his new and better family. It is no wonder jimmy has valid problems and needs real, supportive friends.
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Hugo is going to learn how to fire the Glock. But, he will need a strategy to defeat Dottie. He needs to find one. Can he study past gun fights or combat instances or spy novels to get ideas?
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Joel kept his secrets. Nothing happened to push him to be more open and he was very conscious of not drinking too much beer and losing control. Davin did not puh for answers. Joel was aware of every touch Davin made. It all seemed innocent. The only suggestion Joel got was to come to their school and leave his old one. Joel knew his move would raise questions he needed to answer. Gavin left to be with his girl. Davin and he spent some time in the hot tub and then fell asleep at the movie started. Joel might as well have stayed with Trace and Celia. He did learn about the lonely family life of Davin and Gavin. Their absent parents were only home 3 or 4 times a year. They really did not know their kids, Davin cannot wait to leave, I can see Joel sharing that feeling.
