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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Ohh ----A wonderful time for two boys while it lasted. Sorry, they could not commit. One much later regrets what could have been. He misses the path not taken. It is a tale that rings true to many of us....
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Yes, I did enjoy Evan's and Lucas's story. They started as serial friends at the lighthouse talking intermittedly while Evan unsuccessfully tried to write. Slowly, they blossomed into real friends who enjoyed spending time with each other and Evan muse sprang forth enabling him to set prose to paper. They were complete sharing each other's company.
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    Chapter 19

    You led us to the next cliff--now in the old city, the territory of the stalkers. Kate says she cannot protect Hugo and he is on his own, still injured but determined to save his Stoker. Kate thinks this is the only place Stoker would be--in this nest. Gulp--A perfect set up for more injury and potential death or a repeated cycle of fear and anguish. Hugo..."felt a final pang of fear, a primal terror that was worse than any physical pain." They stepped into the dark and .... Both Kate and Huge must rise to the occasion. I hope Hugo can find and save Stoker !
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    Chapter 32

    Andrew is not going to be a CSIS puppy for long
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    Chapter 31

    Poor Yanni....
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    Chapter 18

    Hooray! The Canadian force took down the kidnappers. The kids are safe.
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    Chapter 9

    Will is really going to need Andrew more and more
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    Chapter Seven

    Life is a roller-coaster for these two. They keep moving and getting away. Both realize they are better together. D is going to teach Joey to read and get him a dog. He wants them to live together. They get a motel room and begin to have some form of sex which is al knew to Joey. His cock is thrilled But, they wake up in the morning and D sees a state trooper outside looking at his car. They move out through the back window and run and run. looking over a a field they see an old couple looking over a disabled old truck. Joey thinks he knows what the problem is--an overheated radiator . Joey helps fix the problem and the couple offer them a job on their farm, Joey and D need to hide and this is a needed short term solution.
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    Chapter 21

    Rikard is continuing to play havoc and not tell others of his intentions. Arcanis has been destroyed and upset at least Darien's plans and the effort to destroy the Asmus hedgehogs. One failure leads to more problems.
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    Coffee

    So..."Luther’s prank that destroyed Richter’s treasured coffee beans" These civet coffee beans meant a great deal to Richter. I am looking forward to how they became treasured to Richter at the academy.
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    Chapter 18

    Topher Lyndon your writing ability and speed amazes me. You seem to be able to cover widely different themes and avoid being repetitive and upsetting people with different cultural or political viewpoints. I am very interested in seeing how you advance a story with Enrico and Xue now in business for themselves. They can be very focused and deadly.
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    Chapter 18

    What an ongoing catastrophe beyond Hugo's and Alec's comprehension. Sinjin at least seems to have led then far astray and set Hugo up to be killed The Bride saved Hugo and thought Sinjin was crazy. “Sinjin and his damn aggregate bullshit.” She tsked aloud. “Listen, I think the fastest way to get yourself killed around here is to listen to him. He’s a crazy old man, sweet, but nuts." There are stalkers out there and maybe going after Alec. Hugo wants to go after him. It has been a week. But he is still too injured to move. We know when he can, Hugo will go after Alec. Maybe the Bride can give him some advice. Surprises pop up and let's hope Hugo finds a way to reunite with Alec and flee the citadel.
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    Chapter 10

    Things ended softly. The group of kids moved out for the most part. Only Joel, Davin and Colt were left sleeping in the truck bed. colt's girl friend left disappointing him. The fight and mention of a gun did not bring out any serious discussion. Davin wanted Joel to go to their school. Surprisingly, Joel had not thought that far ahead. But, he began to think it would not be a bad idea to get a fresh start in his senior year. Looks like Colt is straight, and Davin does not have a girlfriend. They will wake up in the morning no liking the rough time sleeping on a truck bed, But, they will have a safe time reporting to Celia and Trace with no beer breath, It may be the calm before the tough discussion when Joel's hurt knuckles are seen, He needs a story or maybe should come clean, Maybe any fallout from the fight among the schools will take a few days.
  14. I totally enjoyed this story. I was challenged and worried by all the bad actors with evil intent. Trying to steal a nuclear submarine, blow up innocent people, attempt to cause nuclear disasters, murderous spies, and also face bloody internal bureaucratic fights impairing national security are only some of the issues to be faced .Andrew and Will Carter are central , helpful an skilled players in the drama. It is a worthy read with suspense galore.
  15. I love it. Jamie and Hearst finally got together. They are going to be boyfriends and living together and making love as much as possible. Their inhibitions are being released. What a wonderful resolution.
  16. What a shocking intro to a blood thirsty torturer and killer and a easily seduced playboy! I am looking forward to seeing how this develops
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    Sam finished digging the grave for his parents and took the necessary time to cry and release his sorrow. The village healer attended to him and gave him proper healing substances The villagers helped take his parents to the grave site and bury them, It was a fitting time. The chief said some very inspiring words. “As we say farewell, let us remember Joefre and Sophie not for the tragedy that took them, but for the admirable lives they lived, and for the fine, brave son they raised. Let us carry forward their legacy of love, kindness, and compassion, and let their memory be a guiding light in our own lives.” I think Sam can move on now. What will he do?
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    Chapter 17

    Thank you for the happy, very revealing interlude. They arrived in Birmingham in 2010 during a joyous Pride festival. Same sex relationships were displayed as normal and welcomed. It took the two a while to accept what was going on but they the kissed and danced. Drinking some coffee and a doughnut gifted to them they soke honestly and finally called each other Hugo and Alec. They saw what was possible for two men in love with each other. But, time marches on--They were taken away to soon face the citadel, but this happy memory will stay with them.
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    Chapter 12

    Vargan has a new dream . He pictures himself as the new emperor. He will use Dareis Monteilon to assist him. Chancelor Berron has found his oath to the darkness has come due and he is terrified. A grotesque man has appeared and demands his help. He wants Governor Dareis Monteilon and his two boys, and then a certain boy - Josel Sandkan. Poor Zdain and Josel are in grave danger from Renn and the grotesque man.
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    Chapter 38

    What a very successful conclusion ! MI5 and skilled military and other actors took down the foreign bad guys with precision and stopped foreign goverments from gaining a nuclear detinator. Seeing Sir Edward smile and gloat over Defarge was priceless The foreign agents made payments to people they did not realize who would benefit. Enrico and Xue earned their significant ill gotten gain . We learned they are going into business for themselves. Enrico made sure a very large payment was made to Ezra that will insure his happy future. Sinclair landed in South America tied up by Xue. Enrico bribed the police to believe Sinclair was a pedophile and now he is destined to be placed in a nasty prison and given very bad treatment by those who hate child predators. Sinclair may well lose his life before his lawyers can try to help him. Will and Andrew and Jacob are returning to Canada. Will wanted to be certain Andrew will be taking his Navy uniform with him and maybe for some mysterious personal fantasy play. Thank you for a wonderful , well told yarn. The end was very satisfactory. I am looking forward to your next Carter story.
  21. So painful and relentless--All seemed lost as Brother Mathias attacked. He had to get close and end them. He moved into the birthing room. But when Lucien as born--light filled the room and a new power transformed and cleansed everything--Brother Mathias failed and fell back--He was disoriented and without followers--Marie could not forgive him for what he did to her mother and slit his throat. They are free and healthy. The new Lucien shines and displays his power. A bright future lies ahead for him.
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    Chapter Six

    “I don’t just want to save you, kid. I want to keep you. Feed you. Wash your hair. Watch you squirm when I talk like this.” His voice dipped into a growl. “I want you to be mine. I want to teach you everything you never got to learn.” “That’s what I like about you best,” D murmured. “That I get to be your first in everything.” They kissed and Joey was transfixed Unfortunately, they were found sleeping by two killers in a motel. D found hard and ended their lives, Vinnie is after them. The drove away and found new clothes at a Walmart. D knew they had to change cars. He selected an older model but was unable to break into it. Joey came into his own. He was able to break into theb care and wire it to start the engine without a key. Now they arevon the road to South Carolia to get Uncle Leon's box of date to uncover the mob and help them stay safe. This path they are following is very dangerous. They are going to need lots of luck.
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    Chapter 16

    “Wojciech-cun, you’re destined for something, a destiny you have selected,” he touched the box, “and when you are ready, I know that you will take the steps you need to fulfil that chosen destiny. You are not a burden to him, but a purpose.” Hmmmm Hugo, the lore master, is on his way with Stoker. Danger awaits. He will face physical challenges in their next location. Finally, he accepted a sword to protect them. Sinjin advised Hugo and wants him to return to him when his next task is completed.
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    Chapter 37

    Everything happened so far--things fell into place--Andrew is safe and on land. He had great conversations with Will and Sprog. Salvage operations are underway on the sub. Templeman recovered from the shootings and talked to Enrico or now Alejando who is soon going to melt away. He gave out info on his computer and targeted as Sinclair as the big boss and Jared as the financier who knew about the money and is a target for death by Sinclair. Sir Edward with Templeman and MI5 are back in operation. Defarge is sidelined and wounded. Sinclair bought him a yacht. However the battle with Defarge for control is moving still into high gear. Sir Edward is ready. You took us through the issues with speed and did month get us lost . We are left with admiration and happiness at the outcomes. Like-life things are not resolved and details are left undone. Sinclair is removed as a cancer. Enrico is free to take on new opportunities. He will still likely target his enemy, the US. Will and Andrew also must be open to move back to Canada when the time comes holding their heads up high. Thank you.
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    Chapter 3

    Gabe won his game with his best friend Justin. Justin knew something was bothering Gabe. The team victory dinner did not shake Gabe who was attracted to Justion. Gabe was in the closet in a funk. But, he returned to thinking about the man he met last night at a gas station. He was unnerved by him.
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