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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Dottie with 50 gun carrying agent. One holding a gun over Stoker's head. How can Hugo get Stoker away safely? Hugo has an unsolvable puzzle. Even repeated attempt will burn out his sole and he will still lose.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Doctor Krisa--I am impressed by your educational achievement
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    When you return after a well earned rest, I hope will find out that the supposed trap Dottie has sprung on Hugo by seeing Alec hanging from his noose will fail. Hugo and the Bride will have travelled multiple times and can arrive before Alec tried to put his neck in the noose and flee. We may also find out what Dottie and Hugo have done to Dottie and her agents so they cannot stop Hugo.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    Please do relax and find peace. You have been exceptionally productive and busy. We all will understand your need for a break,
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    So as you say...."But it's a story about what Trauma does to a person. And those moments, however short, that give us connection." This is a tough read. Jimmy has lived through so many problems and problematic guys. Richard in Toronto was a horrible abuser and predator who lasted too long. He captured Jimmy and Marty found Jimmy and saved him. But, Ben saved him from being broken in Ottawa. Their relationship could not be normal. They kissed passionately, but wonderful Ben stayed a virgin and Jimmy did not give him up. This relationship is worth more development, please.
  6. Tate is surprised finds out he is potentially going to be a powerful wizard and he also finds out he has a strong, handsome muscled body. The catch is he has to find a gay bottom and have sex with him before he turns 19 or he will lose all his power and good looks. Tate and his aunt are now on the lookout for a gay partner for Tate
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    So, Stoker contemplated his death and was on a mission. He just knew Hugo would come for him they were united by love. I believe he knew he was being observed in some way, He arranged his shoelaces into a hanging device to look like he was committing suicide. Stoker wanted to provoke his guards and draw them out. Seeming to hang himself was his way to assume control. He knew he would not be allowed to die. Has he learned anything from Hugo's multiple past incursions in 1836? Of course, I could be making the wrong assumptions. We will find out soon. In a new time, The Bride, Kate, and Hugo were beginning a training session. She gave him a detailed description of what was going to happen next. Hugo was astounded at her knowledge of movements and forecasting ability. She would train him to understand how to find and defeat Dottie and her agents and then save Stoker. They would undertake multiple trips and piece together a complicated, layered plan "So that's how we're going to get Stoker back," she said, her voice a low, fierce promise. "We're going to use this." She held up her watch, its face a swirling vortex of light. "We're going to run the same loop, over and over, until we find the one perfect moment where Dottie is vulnerable. We're going to learn her every move, her every weakness, her every blind spot. We're going to learn the names of her agents, the location of her trap, the exact moment we need to strike."
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Clayton's underwear and socks will no longer be a subject for Lex to want for his own pleasure. I can see Lex wanting Superman's cum rag,. briefs, jocks and socks. How will Lex get what he wants from Superman? I guess we might see the answer in a new story.
  9. Oh No! You said Josh is showing up with Vinnie and his mobsters People are going to die. Might the local mob get upset with Vinnie seeming to move in and seek to kill him?
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    OMG--I can see them having lots of groundhog sex and getting more in sync and excited. They will slowly find love and feel it be reinforced with consummate physical skills. Hugo will keep trying to learn what pleases Alec and bring him towards him in real ways. Just like Bill Murray learned to be an excellent piano player by practicing, Hugo is going to learn how to give Alec the most powerful, fulfilling blow jobs he wants and be the most exciting bottom Alec has met.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Ok--spill the beans about the underpants in the bar story. You mentioned it but left us hanging. Jimmy, the alcoholic, is so clueless. His slowly developing relationship with a just younger Ben needs more development, please. I would love to know about them when they clicked romantically and really sexually.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Hugo left the shotgun to add one more item to educate Alec that they were connected. It is a physical piece of evidence Hugo can cite next time they meet He is learning how to play the groundhog game to win back Alec.
  13. I feel impending doom might be in sight. Joey gave away enough clues for others to find them. The only hope is that Josh leaves Warren to find them and blows off Vinnie and his men so they do not know where he is going. Darius found out the action is still happening in town, but not at Leon's location. Is the house not really being watched from the outside so Darius can search it for Leon's stash? Or, is it a trap to catch him when he get gets inside. A simple WiFi type security system could alert mob guys that the house is being searched. They need to act fast before they are found at Zeke's location.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Hugo went back to find Alec working as a gamekeeper. Their meet was awkward. Alec was suspicious of Hugo and even more so when he said his name. They continued talking. They both began to connect. But, things changed when they both took their clothes off. Alec fucked Hugo twice. Sadly, Hugo had to leave before he could explain his time travel story. Ok--this was a first groundhog-type meeting, Hugo is going to make many more trips back until Alec realizes what is happening
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    But, you finished it. Completing the story mattered for you and your readers. I liked it. Thanks
  16. Sorry--This will take a lot to repair the story and re-energize the characters. You must have better current story lines that will excite your interests But, let us see what others say.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    As long as Flash is not like the controversial actor Ezra Miller who played him in a 2023 movie. Miller had a bad reputation from supposedly choking and abusing a woman
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    I loved this description of Will....." Will was like that though, he was music, wild and unexpected and intense." They are going to make beautiful music together one day as Jimmy prophesied.
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    As a runner, Flash might love the reward of having his tired feet and legs massaged, kissed and licked. I bet his feet would have a powerful, beguiling fragrance when he rested after a long, fast run.
  20. I am wondering if the author has forgotten and moved beyond this story. It may be time to label it "Abandoned."
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    I was totally shocked. Superman raised his legs up and presented his bare ass for Lex to fuck him. Wow! Well, Clayton found a way and substance to confuse them and release their inhibitions. The result was amazing. Lex topped a willing Superman Clayton thought he escaped without leaving a trace since he thought his substance wiped their memory. Clayton did not count on the activities being recorded on tape. Lex will have a leather daddy he knows take care on Clayton. Clayton will be punished! This is worth a positive review. Ready for a new Superman--Lex Luthor story in a while?
  22. Both Lex and Superman are surprised to learn the other is ticklish. A third party intervenes and torments them. How they handle their tormenter and each other will be amazing and revealing. You might be shocked--or not!
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  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Madam Woo centered Hugo and calmed him. The Bride appeared fulll of righteous fury over Dottie meddling with her friend. Hugo brought up groundhogging as a method. The Bride knew about it and had used it to win over husbands Hugo was not sure what to do. The Bride wanted to fight her. Hugo felt he would be trapped by Dottie and her agents. Madam Woo said he has to beat Dottie by going into the far past, not in the 1950's. She said he had to go back to 1836 before this all started. He had to win Stoker over and teach him how to groundhog--what ever that means to him I finally feel relief. Does Hugo have a real solution? Will the pain in his head subside?
  24. Thank you for this charming, testing and pleasing chapter. I was has fearful that disaster was awaiting them at every juncture. But, they made through another day. Zeke was turned around. The house they watched was clearly a trap. Joey was something special and darn insightful.. They made real love before sleeping. Tomorrow they can face their problems anew. But they will have great memories from today.
  25. Vince is going to continue being a guardian, He is going to help Theadore and Jack. Theodore needs his pack lands back. Danny thinks he has said goodbye to Vince. “But it looks like I’ll have to work hard to bring everyone together. Wish me luck.” “Good luck, Vince,” Danny said right away, reluctantly letting go of his friend. For the strangest reason, he felt like he was saying goodbye, and not only for a few hours or a day. I hope the next chapter answers what happens to Danny, Ryder, Thedore, Jack and Vince.
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