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Am I predictable?
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From Groupie To Roadie/Lover?
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in From Groupie To Roadie/Lover?
Classic. Love it Gary! -
Me? Cliffhangers?
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Please, please, please don’t post it here. 189,000+ characters may crash GA. https://www.dictionary.com/e/longest-words-in-the-world/#
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
So far 8 chapters more, but 10 won’t be the end. Still lots of ground to cover. -
I do. WTF!??!??!? Sorry SA. I bailed at the green goblins.
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Though whispered; always true. -
Do I Really Need This Now?
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Do I Really Need This Now?
I will only say it goes. And goes, and goes, -
Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Complicit. Nice word. Not nearly strong enough. What? The coincidences already seen aren’t enough? OK, at least one more. Payback. A very tame word in the world of my villains. -
Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Whether true or not geographically, it is very true inside my head. Precedent already set in at least 2 previous stories, so I don’t think it’s much of a spoiler. Big changes are coming indeed. Glad you’re loving it. -
Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
I’ll get to today’s comments a little at a time on yard work breaks. I think your red will tone down some. Again, as I said about the religious aspect, more to come on the abuse, but you will be waiting a bit for both. -
Well played. You had me fooled. So fooled that even after the disclosure of the nightmare, I was expecting them to be somewhere in Mexico, having taken the kidnapping route themselves that was mentioned a couple chapters ago. But you made it turn out right. And this passage was awesome:
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Thanks for the compliment. I hope the rest is just as gripping. -
Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Appreciate the feedback. No doghouse for you.- 41 comments
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It took a little while to get into the story, but it finally hooked me. Very enjoyable. I do have one nit-picky item. It’s Counselor Troi, not Troy. You never want to tick off a Trekker. We’ll sic the Klingons on you. 😄
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Or a really bad way, depending on your perspective. Abel and Kathy will not be thinking it's good.- 41 comments
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
I think I quoted this song once before, but since it's appropriate: B-b-b-baby, you just ain't seen n-n-n-nothing yet- 41 comments
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
It's been a while since you got your hands on my early drafts. You been on vacation or something?- 41 comments
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Yes, and I bet you can guess who I'll get as your detention monitor. I won't say any names, but kb is a hint.- 41 comments
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Do I Really Need This Now?
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Do I Really Need This Now?
That's me; Roller Coaster Tycoon. -
Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Well, there is indeed more to the story. I'm on chapter 9 with no end in sight. 😁- 41 comments
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
It's still a way away, and not to spoil anything at all, but the South Carolina connection will come back up at some point. For your last sentence, all we have to do is wait, I guess.- 41 comments
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Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Child Protective Services Helps, Sort Of
Thanks, but I think we've passed from coincidence to reality. Hehe. There will be more on Nick's two-day journey in a later chapter to help explain some of the coincidences.- 41 comments
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Saturday Brendan woke up before Nick the next morning. Nick was lying on the couch and the blanket was on the floor. The T-shirt rode up a little, but Nick was still covered down to his upper thighs. Brendan was thankful for that, especially after Nick's disclosure from his visit to Burger King. He put the blanket back over Nick and went into the kitchen to put on some coffee and start breakfast. During the week he normally only had toast or a bagel, but on the weekends, he liked a little m
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Do I Really Need This Now?
Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Do I Really Need This Now?
Glad you are liking it so far.
