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  1. Lee Wilson
    Manny had his issues, but overall, likable when you get yo know him better. It’s a transition for him, hopefully he’s ip to the task. Otherwise it’ll be a very short story.
  2. Lee Wilson
    At least it wasn’t chapter 1. 🤪
  3. Lee Wilson
    Lots of comments already. Good observations. Wariness is necessary. It is me writing the story after all.
  4. Lee Wilson
    I definitely painted Manny in a negative light. You’re not alone thinking about him in that way. Rocky’s a smart ass, but he’s also pretty smart. Smugness comes from entitlement. Thanks for joining the fold. Your Bassey looks cute. A little like my Chloe. One of 8.
  5. Lee Wilson
    Yeah, that wasn’t really a surprise as it turns out. And here I thought I made the name up from Tanner. All possibilities though. Manny’s like a fine wine, he improves with age.
  6. Lee Wilson
    And it will continue down the path to strangeness.
  7. Lee Wilson
    Manny pulled up to the front gate at two-forty. The commute there was quicker than he thought it would be. He went around two curves on the driveway before he saw the house. Manny talked to himself when he was alone, so in his car, this was a common occurrence, "Holy shit. That's a big mother-fucking house. What the hell did Boris do?" He pulled up to an empty spot next to the four-car garage, thinking that he wouldn't block anyone in parking there. He walked up the front stairs—he'd h
  8. Lee Wilson
    Ah, yes. It feels good when I see one of my stories there.
  9. Lee Wilson
    Image didn't come through, but thanks.
  10. Lee Wilson

    Story

    Lee Wilson commented on Comicality's story chapter in Story

    I wasn’t going to comment because, well, circumstances. But on the off chance that somehow, somewhere, Comsie is able to see this: FUCKING AWESOME!!
  11. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. Obviously, being from a prompt, I can't take any credit for the idea itself. Just the details. Mostly written ahead, I'm working on chapter 9 at this point. Zuri gets an early copy, makes his suggestions, I integrate, then I post. I'm constantly reviewing the next chapter(s) to try and refine it as much as possible.
  12. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    Lee Wilson commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 31

    Had to go with the sad emoji knowing this will never be finished.
  13. Lee Wilson
    And more will be told. Very soon, as a matter of fact. There are trees on that rocky road, perhaps a new leaf will turn over.
  14. Lee Wilson
    First half - you'll find to be true, but the reason may not be obvious. Second half - irrelevant. Rocky accepts the compliment.
  15. Lee Wilson
    That, my friend, is a massive understatement.
  16. Lee Wilson
    Make a list and submit it to me. I will attempt to answer them all. In later chapters. 😈
  17. Lee Wilson
    Keep that image handy. Although, I wish it was smaller. Damn, and I thought I hid my manuscript well this time. I don't know yet. OK, maybe I do. Sort of. Amazingly good questions. I'm not saying. Yet.
  18. Lee Wilson
    On the surface, let's dig a little deeper over the next couple chapters, shall we? One shoe? Macy's whole shoe department! Good, I was hoping it wasn't too corny.
  19. Lee Wilson
    It's still early, answers are forthcoming. Yeah, he's a good guy. No indication, yet, but I suspect he's known Manny for a number of years. I didn't know that, my reason for making it so smooth will be seen. A person with many problems himself? Not a big spoiler, but his recent past is the reason he reached so far back. Money has a tendency to do that to any weaker person.
  20. Lee Wilson
    Manny went into work a few minutes early that evening and quickly searched for Charles Browne, the owner of the bar and his boss. "Hey Charles. Got a minute?" Charles looked at his watch; it was extremely rare for Manny to arrive for work fifteen minutes early. Two minutes was closer to the norm. "Sure, what's up, Manny?" "If I had to take a week off, when would be the soonest, I could do that?" "Any Tuesday through Thursday wouldn't be a problem. I don't think I can eas
  21. Lee Wilson
    It does. I like to use nearby locations in my stories. Oakwood, Flat Creek, Dawsonville, Cleveland, have all made appearances. A couple down south. I lived in Oakwood when I first moved to Georgia. Lived in Flowery Branch as well. I actually considered Winder for this story.
  22. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 14 S2

    Lee Wilson commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 14 S2

    I’m sure all but the pickiest of us will. Like was said before, a nice, low activity chapter, ramped up quickly with the kidnapping. But ya gotta admit, sometimes they are fun.
  23. Lee Wilson
    He is a jerk, but not a tiger. I got the edited version a little while ago. I was planning on Thursday, but if I can spend enough time on it, I'll shoot for tomorrow.
  24. Lee Wilson
    Could be a good guess. I suppose we’ll find out soon. I’ll try to keep it interesting.
  25. Lee Wilson
    I’d tell you, but it’s in chapter 2, so it won’t be a long wait.
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