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Lee Wilson

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  1. I can be a meanie when I want to be; writing that is. IRL I'm a nice guy. I have bridges to sell too if you bought that. But I did have second thoughts about killing Tyler. Rather than rewrite a chunk of the capture, I added in the mix-up.
  2. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 12 S2

    Very nice holiday description. Devin probably could have had the same experience with the bullying, but a little higher self-esteem if he was allowed to be just a bit shorter than average. I was always shorter and smaller, but my older brother was the opposite, taller and bulkier, so I didn't get bullied much. Maybe I just grew up in a nicer town, who knows?
  3. My thinking as Karl is thus: "You want the divorce, I don't want to have anything to do with telling the kids, you do it."
  4. As was said by Bachman-Turner Overdrive, Baby, you ain't see nothing yet
  5. That will be much more obvious after the next chapter.
  6. Well, better safe than sorry on the warnings. I guess I'm not able to do too many chapters before bad news arises. I never knew about the Beatles kids. Interesting.
  7. Thanks for the input. I know personally it's not all crisis focused. All of my recent visits have been checking in, is the medication still doing its job?
  8. Jason lasted a week before he felt too lonely. He spoke with his managing partner, apologizing profusely that he needed to leave sooner. They agreed he'd stay one more week. Jason found a place in Titusville that would work quite well for him. He'd be about two hours away from us and from Mason. Knowing he'd be closer to two of his kids helped his mood immensely. He arranged for movers to take the bulk of his items, put the condo on the market, and settled into the new place. We had him over for
  9. Yep. Ant had a tough ride too. Had to give him a break.
  10. It’s all about do the positives outweigh the negatives.
  11. He’s more confused about the whole thing than anything else. Things may work out. We shall see.
  12. Aww, I’m glad. A couple chapters from now there may be pissed off tears.
  13. Not explained, but my idea is just discomfort with his gayness.
  14. The level of revenge also makes for more nervousness for Pete until everything is resolved. He’ll be seeing cops wanting to arrest him everywhere.
  15. They’ll not only get a taste, they’ll get the whole enchilada.
  16. I try to add a funny line once in a while. Most times I don’t succeed at funny.
  17. I think the bogus recording company will turn out well enough. Of course there’s always drama ahead.
  18. Nope, not nice. But it will get deeper soon. The other side will be heard. Yeah, Pete and Ant getting together does seem like a good thing. Will it be a smooth ride? We shall see.
  19. Thanks. On the bisexual piece, I guess I wouldn’t even be writing here if I wasn’t.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 47

    Another good job @John Henry. more background, which I’m guessing means mire excitement next week.
  21. I used something different with Bart in chapter 6. Quite original if I might say do myself.
  22. Well, if the restaurant choice is the biggest criticism, I’ll take it.
  23. Jason has good kids. I do like Olive Garden. It’s possible to like multiple Italian restaurants.
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