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Lee Wilson

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  1. Thanks. Obviously, being from a prompt, I can't take any credit for the idea itself. Just the details. Mostly written ahead, I'm working on chapter 9 at this point. Zuri gets an early copy, makes his suggestions, I integrate, then I post. I'm constantly reviewing the next chapter(s) to try and refine it as much as possible.
  2. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    Had to go with the sad emoji knowing this will never be finished.
  3. And more will be told. Very soon, as a matter of fact. There are trees on that rocky road, perhaps a new leaf will turn over.
  4. First half - you'll find to be true, but the reason may not be obvious. Second half - irrelevant. Rocky accepts the compliment.
  5. That, my friend, is a massive understatement.
  6. Make a list and submit it to me. I will attempt to answer them all. In later chapters. 😈
  7. Keep that image handy. Although, I wish it was smaller. Damn, and I thought I hid my manuscript well this time. I don't know yet. OK, maybe I do. Sort of. Amazingly good questions. I'm not saying. Yet.
  8. On the surface, let's dig a little deeper over the next couple chapters, shall we? One shoe? Macy's whole shoe department! Good, I was hoping it wasn't too corny.
  9. It's still early, answers are forthcoming. Yeah, he's a good guy. No indication, yet, but I suspect he's known Manny for a number of years. I didn't know that, my reason for making it so smooth will be seen. A person with many problems himself? Not a big spoiler, but his recent past is the reason he reached so far back. Money has a tendency to do that to any weaker person.
  10. Manny went into work a few minutes early that evening and quickly searched for Charles Browne, the owner of the bar and his boss. "Hey Charles. Got a minute?" Charles looked at his watch; it was extremely rare for Manny to arrive for work fifteen minutes early. Two minutes was closer to the norm. "Sure, what's up, Manny?" "If I had to take a week off, when would be the soonest, I could do that?" "Any Tuesday through Thursday wouldn't be a problem. I don't think I can eas
  11. It does. I like to use nearby locations in my stories. Oakwood, Flat Creek, Dawsonville, Cleveland, have all made appearances. A couple down south. I lived in Oakwood when I first moved to Georgia. Lived in Flowery Branch as well. I actually considered Winder for this story.
  12. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 14 S2

    I’m sure all but the pickiest of us will. Like was said before, a nice, low activity chapter, ramped up quickly with the kidnapping. But ya gotta admit, sometimes they are fun.
  13. He is a jerk, but not a tiger. I got the edited version a little while ago. I was planning on Thursday, but if I can spend enough time on it, I'll shoot for tomorrow.
  14. Could be a good guess. I suppose we’ll find out soon. I’ll try to keep it interesting.
  15. I’d tell you, but it’s in chapter 2, so it won’t be a long wait.
  16. So, a 180 degree turnaround. Got it. People can change. Can’t they?
  17. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    In all likelihood, a demented one.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    Nope. Well, not Manny's anyway. And even you haven't seen chapter 6 yet. A rude man's way of malapropping Waldorf-Astoria. That's obvious, Dr. Sawzall a la mode.
  19. Of course. OK, so he's only 80% gay. Hmmm, I guess we'll see. Yep. Feel free to repeat this comment in chapter 2.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    The psychic predictions begin. I'd be too tempted to add things that would crush the story under the heels of the moderators if I made Rocky swing the same way Manny does.
  21. Good. I hope I can find enough of them to completely confuse you all.
  22. Exactly what I was going for.
  23. Caught another one. Cool beans.
  24. The questions about Boris lead me to believe you’re no longer finding my manuscript to read ahead. All in good time. I sure hope those drivers get met the same way, but I suppose anything is crazy enough to happen in the world we live in today.
  25. Good, my painting him as a less than disirable parent was noticed. Wise beyond his years. But why? I guess more good chapters will answer that, but you may be surprised.
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