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  1. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 4

    Lee Wilson commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Not to worry about Michael’s food intake. Stacy will just send more the next day. Good so see him recovering. I like how he had no idea who Jason and Danny were. Shows how out of it he was.
  2. Lee Wilson
    Yeah, that sounds like a really big mess. I’ve had no experiences like that, so nothing like that will happen here.
  3. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 40 S1

    Lee Wilson commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 40 S1

    Fun chapter. I was almost expecting some other reason Jaxon and Rory had for not changing together. I guess that’s still a possibility. But one of my thoughts went south, that they had small penises and were embarrassed about it.
  4. Lee Wilson
    There you guys go again, telling the story ahead of time. Oh, wait. I’m not writing it that way. My mistake. I never understood ‘my bad.’ Bad is an adjective, mistake a noun. Every time I hear someone say ‘my bad’ I think ‘your bad what?’
  5. Lee Wilson
    Yeah, sudden death is only good for sporting events. My dad was getting into the shower when he suffered a fatal heart attack twenty-three years ago. Not the kind of phone call you want to get while at work.
  6. Lee Wilson
    I'll attempt to continue with my every three-day posting schedule. I've got most of the first draft written, so you should see the next chapter Friday morning, Eastern Standard Time. Your concerns will definitely be covered.
  7. Lee Wilson
    Lacy has one much older sister, mentioned when the wedding was the topic, although her being a lot older wasn't obvious. I don't see an aunt entering the picture and making waves.
  8. Lee Wilson
    Sorry for what you went through as a child. I can somewhat sympathize because I lost my first wife with young children, one, not so coincidentally, the same age as Dominic. As an aside, for anyone reading my other current story, 'Rocked to the Core', my youngest was four at the time, same as Adam. Mine are both girls. I guess my next story has to have a daughter that is almost eleven losing a parent. Ummm, maybe not.
  9. Lee Wilson
    Hmm. It must have been lost in a save. I was sure I indicated somewhere along the line that Lacy's parents were both dead, but I just checked my copies, not there. I'll make sure that point is obvious in chapter 11. So, no, they won't be causing Dylan and Dominic any problems.
  10. Lee Wilson
    Dominic and I are waiting what seems like an eternity. But I'm watching the clock on my phone, and it's only been twenty minutes. I'll give it to thirty then I'm going to try to find something out. Dominic cried himself to sleep after ten minutes. Two minutes after my self-made deadline, a doctor comes out. "Mr. Pastore?" "Over here." "Maybe you can put the child down and walk a little way away. Close enough that we can see him, far enough he won't overhear." I lay Dominic do
  11. Lee Wilson
    Natural parents or not, they’re young and will make some mistakes. Nothing tragic, I don’t think. I think you’ll all be a bit surprised by what happens Friday the 18th.
  12. Lee Wilson
    Like I said before, they need to have a run of good for a while. Derek’s young, psychology doesn’t come to the front of his mind easily. Even with Frank having mentioned it after the hostage situation. Mild spoiler: He needs a stronger trigger. Party will be fun, I’m sure. I’m not planning any twists there.
  13. Lee Wilson
    Bzzz. Try again. Probably not anywhere, but it's more lunch fare than anything else. Geez. I hope so too. 😇
  14. Lee Wilson
    "We should celebrate. The current job has a tight schedule, so I could only get a couple hours off this morning. We can do dinner tonight, but maybe you can put together something for the weekend, Derek?" "Great idea. Sure, I can handle that." "Cool. Invite everybody you can think of. Definitely Mrs. Perch. We really blew it not thinking of her for the wedding." "Yeah, good point. She'll be my first call. Although she'll probably be at work. I'm not sure what she does though."
  15. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Lee Wilson commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 1

    So far, so good.
  16. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 3

    Lee Wilson commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Another good chapter. Now we know a little more about Michael. I wonder if something might happen between he and Donna when he’s no longer a patient.
  17. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 2

    Lee Wilson commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Another good chapter. The characters are easy to get used to. Even though I haven’t read any of the previous stories, I feel like I know them already.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Lee Wilson commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Good start to the story. I guess I joined in the middle, this being a sequel. Hopefully I can keep it straight starting here. wrt AI, I found a site that I’ve used, it also sometimes has problems with body parts. But it’s fun to use. dezgo.com
  19. Lee Wilson
    I’m a twisty kind of guy.
  20. Lee Wilson
    Never watched that show, so I didn’t steal it from there. But I’m sure there have been other shows/books included it.
  21. Lee Wilson
    He’s too nice sometimes, even.
  22. Lee Wilson
    Sorry I dredged up bad memories, but I’m happy didn’t trigger anything bad. I wouldn’t wish that on anyone, either being patient or caretaker.
  23. Lee Wilson
    I must admit and give you credit. But it works!
  24. Lee Wilson
    Yep. Definitely a tough time for a little one. Life sucks sometimes. I guess I like tragical twists…
  25. Lee Wilson
    Yeah on the waiting. I’m trying to keep to every three days. Keeping pretty close to that. Good guess, but if you're right or not 🤐
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