Well, the work was done to get the cards out. Too bad they wasted their time packing them so nicely, but they're probably safer in UPS' packaging. I'd forgotten about the burglaries at the college, so I was confused for a bit on that when it was first mentioned, but thankfully, you came back to it. I have a feeling chapter 29 includes them catching the culprits.
Dean Gay sounds a little like one of my characters, Carson Gordon. Very properly speaking. I doubt Clint will think he's too stuck up since he's used to Michael and Devin, being really smart guys.