Thanks. I hope I can do it justice in my current frame of mind.
As am I.
Thanks. I can't promise a lack of those types of characters. I only have a couple ideas on where to take this so far.
“Mamá, papá, ¿qué pasa?” (Mom, dad, what’s happening?)
“Darren viene a vivir con nosotros.” (Darren is coming to live with us.)
“No way!”
“Sí.”
Darren made a request, “Can, um, we come in?”
Luca stepped away from the door to allow Darren and Olivia to enter, “Dang. Sorry!”
Luca was still stunned, “How… Why? I mean I’m glad and all that, but, how did this happen?”
Esteban took the lead, “Let’s all go sit down and we’ll fill you in, Luca.”
Esteban described
Seven months ago.
“¿Mudanza? ¿Por qué? ¿Qué le pasa a Silver City?”
The conversation was entirely in Spanish, as Luca’s father’s English wasn’t very good.
"Moving? Why? What's wrong with Silver City?"
"Nothing. But this is a big opportunity for me. A promotion, a raise. We'll be able to buy you more of the things you want."
"I don't want things. You're doing this to take me away from Darren, aren't you? You can't stand the fact that I'm in love with a boy."
"Luca, l
Opening up to Trace was a good thing. Davin isn't giving up on him, another good thing. Perhaps Joel is finally turning a corner, but there's still, what, like 100,000 words to go? More corners await, I guess.
It would prepare him for a career if he's that good. You can get traded to another team without your consent. Trades between rivals aren't all that common, but it happens. If he gets through it now, it'll be easier for him later. Hell, even in a "real job," staying where you're at isn't guaranteed.
It doesn’t happen often, but I’ve hit a wall on this one. Writer’s block has hit. I’m going to put this one on hold for a bit while I hit “Angel Keeps A Secret” again. Don’t worry, I will get back to Stephen and Michael soon enough. Hopefully I can get them both going. Although I don’t see Angel being too long. Famous last words, I know.
Suing someone doesn't necessarily mean they pay. Some lawsuits fail to find fault.
I haven't decided their fates yet, but I don't think they'll get off scot-free.
Younger brother, as indicated in their first meeting in part one. Clark is Don's brother.