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  1. I think those villains might be more successful if they would be more rational and less passionate. But then it wouldn't be such fun!!! 😁 I'm wondering, is Ben going to find out he is pregnant again during this trip?! 🤔
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    Colin 9

    Interesting and sad how Colin has found general acceptance everywhere except at family. I like reading his hesitation and thinking about moving in with Owain. They are adults with some habits, used to do some things alone. On the other hand, having someone to share bed and everyday routine is nice and heartwarming. I can see their future living together, but it is nice to read about their travel to that point.
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    Who Am I

    @chris191070 brings this intriguing story about memory loss and sexuality change. We all know about the closeted gay man living in a straight marriage, with wife and children. But what if we have a closeted straight man, living in a gay relationship? How long is possible to live such a lie and what are the consequences? Author successfully explores these questions in this story. Till the end, you'll wander how is it going to finish.
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    Chapter 5

    Looks like emotional pain has been the trigger to bring back memory. So intriguing plot, there were many different possibilities to end the story... Finally, you cannot be 💯% sure they are completely honest!
  5. Finding home, finding family...finding love! Wonderful story where we can see and enjoy in @kbois beginnings as author. Characters, ideas and worlds which are going to explode out of imagination of one of the most beloved authors at GA in her capital work - A hybrid journey, can be recognized in her first story. Soulmates - latter Mates; amazing, strong and powerful mothers; supportive families; charming children; witty humor; dogs - of course...and lovers, lovers 'til death do us part'. @kbois is famous for her cliffs (although this is not one of that stories) but seems to me that she is not enough praised as one of the best smut writers at GA! She writes some of the best, most romantic, most passionate...kinky...very, very hot sex scenes!!! Although she knows the exact measure not to jump into cheap pornography, reading her characters making love is going to make you aroused for sure!
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    Concert

    I'm wondering, is Piggy just another @Robert Hugill's picturesque character from English province, or he is going to make some real damage when open his 'dirty mouth' around the town? Owain and Colin are not hiding, but they haven't broadcast their relationship, along with rainbow flag, either. Piggy enjoys gossip, is he going to alert all Miles' in the neighborhood?!
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    Chapter 4

    I hope this is not the end of the story. There is no happiness living a lie! Harry lives a double life and there are only 'crumbs from the table' for Stuart. Very sad.
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    Chapter 12

    @kboisthis is you first story?!?! I haven't been so overwhelmed by some chapter sins Shadow effect!!! Simply beautiful! ❤️🌈
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    Chapter 3

    It is going to be crazy if Harry regains memory but forget about his amnesia and straight period...and suddenly becomes offended by Stuart's 'restraint' behavior!
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    Chapter 6

    Cozy dinner brought many revelations. I didn't expect Xavier story...but, it explains lot about Chris's trust issues. Although, this year of flirting is not all for Chris to blame. He didn't know Andre was gay (as said in first chapter) and Andre has been living parallel life - one with his family (Beau and Chris as family friend included) and other one in gay community. This 'plot' Andre and Jamie made to get story from Michael and Chris is not very nice. First, they say everything is ok, then they insist on story. They want to know everything about Michael and Chris's relationship but doesn't share anything about their own, especially when it comes clear to Chris that those two doesn't have secrets between themself (does it mean that everything he shares with Andre is going to be automatically transferred to Jamie as well?). Exactly, even Chris is aware of this, but he never put pressure on Andre to open up about his relationship with Jamie. Chris could say the same - there is more about Michael and Jamie he would like to know more about!
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    Chapter 6 Bell

    Oh no, Bell again!
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    Chapter 3

    OMG, I needed a drink after this chapter! That note Stuart left, I don't know did he want to make Harry jealous, or he has been just honest? Not very subtitle info, but at least a tiny revenge. And Harry, he is such a selfish bastard that make me sick! The moment he finds out that he is alone, without real friends to help him, he calls Stuart back, cry to him with attitude just a tiny better, just to keep Stuart at home. These tactics obviously doesn't work. No more talking, crying, blowjobs...Stuart, take a baseball bat and beat the straightness and idiocy out of 'dirty Harry'!!!!
  13. Exploring deep into the Mormon religion and organization of LDS church, author tells amazing story about four boys preparing to go on a missionary trip to South Korea. Coming from a different background, with different fears, insecurities and life paths, boys are searching for salvation and answers to their dilemmas through church doctrine and canons. Instead of salvation through religion, they find salvation in love, friendship and self-acceptance.
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    Chapter 1

    I think that is the best answer. We can bother ourselves looking for some medical explanation but it's not necessary. I mean, look at @vanalas stories, there is men impregnant all the time 😁. For me, it's more interesting to explore this strange overnight character change and its impact on surrounding. @Lee Wilson I liked that moment in your story, there were even some funny dialogs, but you have taken different direction with your plot so, its @chris191070 chance to focus on amnesia issue.
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    Chapter 2

    I can understand that something happened to Harry so he woke up with amnesia and straight. What I don't understand is why is he behaving like an asshole? Ok, he is not gay anymore, but why is he bigot?! Or, if he is straight now, why is he disrespectful with woman and make advances on every skirt he sees (including inappropriate comments about his partner's wife)?! And poor, poor Stuart. In any other situation he should send asshole to hell and get him out to the street. But Harry seems to have some unknown health condition, and Stuart needs to support him, to the level of personal hurt.
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    Blades of Ashes

    Actually, I find them very similar, maybe there's why so much fire in their interaction... Both are strong personalities, sons of elders, very protective of their families. Fearless man that 'afraid' only of higher politics because higher you climb, stronger winds blow, and those winds might endanger their beloved ones! But, as it usually happens, they'll end up next to emperor himself! Great story indeed, everything is there - intrigue, crime, betrayal, heroes and villains...and love.
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    New House

    My thoughts exactly! It's nice how both uncles share roles in Joe's life - men bonding with Colin, working together, building together...and some serious talk with Owen regarding family, school, carrier, money...eventually love and sex talk will come too, knowing @Robert Hugill. 😁
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    Chapter 3

    They are hilarious!!! Azula really doesn't have a filter and Raithion seems to enjoy this teasing very much! 😂 This is going to be a hell of adventure, can't wait the following chapters...
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    Epilogue

    A good future for a good people! The way how should it always be. Unfortunately, world is cruel place, but this story tells us that there is always hope.
  20. Writing this wonderful holiday story, @Mancunian used the best elements of Charles Dickens's tradition putting social elements, family values, spirit of receiving and spreading good, humanity, acceptance and love. Without supernatural elements, you can feel the true Christmas spirit present in every written sentence. Charlie and Michael are orphans, wandering alone at the streets of Manchester. But it is the beginning of story because they are saved by good Samaritans and accepted in new surroundings. Why are they chosen one to be saved...because of their good soul, because of their will to spread humanity and love they received. So, when they receive golden chains from their new grandfather, it is not just the bond of new family, it is the bond of goodness. It amazingly symbolizes the chains of good, chains that bond people and the world in love. Everyone is touched by this magic - boys find the family, Harry finds grandsons, lost are found and those who love are loved back; success finds the best among people...the dog finds the puppies...the guitar finds the musician's fingers of gold. This is not pretentious story aiming to give us moral lectures, it is its heartwarming and deeply human message that make us think how to be better persons. This story should be read as beautiful sermon, the way we read 'Christmas Carol' by Dickens.
  21. Rereading my favorite chapter. Instead of this information 'No special warnings for this chapter', you should have put Tissue warning!
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    Chapter 1

    Well, Harry has amnesia, but real victim is Stuart. He must have been frustrated! To wake up with memory loss is bad enough, but to wake up straight, that's a mess. Late bigoted parents would have been thrilled! 😜 Great start @chris191070, looking forward for new chapters.
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    Chapter 5

    I'm not sure it's only Chris who is hiding something and Andre put everything out. Yes, the biggest issue is out, a child abuse trauma that haunted him for years and resulted in commitment issues. But that infamous party is haunting me as a reader! 😁 So, it's not only Chris and Michael (although Chris has given at least some explanation), it's also Andre and Jamie. We don't know anything about their relationship, but they are obviously close enough to change underwear alone in the room. @Paladin said in one answer to my comment - how can I be sure that they were boyfriends... Well, I'm not, the same as Chris, because Andre newer spoke about that again. I hope that they really started opening to each other because, until now, I haven't seen people who make more meaningless love declarations than Chris and Andre. I've been wondering a few times in previous chapters - do this people know what real love is or they just say it to be...romantic?
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    Chapter Eleven

    I completely understand you, I really do because, from the start of the story I'm trying to discover some reason, to find out some cause for Liams behavior (especially violence). It was so difficult for me to accept that he is just selfish, narcistic, mean, asshole. Well, he is! And not only that, but he is also rather lucky bastard who will, except some broken ego, not lose too much... Oh, and I don't believe he loves Dylan, he loves only himself. My only hope is that Dylan is going to grow being successful and happy, so he can leave all those characters behind.
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    Chapter Eleven

    I have the same dilemma. Dylan must have been confused as heal!!! What is going on?!? Who are these people and why they behave like this?! Even Ema...and his own mother...what was this conversation all about, what kind of manipulation they are trying to do?! And what does this mean, husband hurt her, she found refuge at Dylan and Ema's house and put target on their foreheads too!?! Oh...and poor Liam, licking wounds at a ski trip! How sad...and predictable... Dylan must have been disgusted!
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