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  1. Cane23

    Chapter 22

    I was reading another story, you narcissist!
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    Chapter 22

    I've seen @Mrsgnomie notification before story again!!! Now, back to story! 😁
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    Chapter 8

    Emotional performance Michael gave was his final farewell to his mother. His tears were heartbreaking but, crying is the start of the healing! And then the Grease, a high school musical, summer love...that's where Michael's and Charlie's boyhood stopped, when they had to grow up overnight. Thanx to Max and Stacy they can be teenagers again and they can ketch up some of this wonderfool period of life. Beautiful chapter indeed!
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    Colin 6

    Such a great dialogue between Mhairi and Colin. I have not been disappointed by short chapter; I've been disappointed the dialogue ended. In a few words we learned a lot about their family dynamics and characteristics of family members. Family bonding is so nice, I eagerly wait continuation of the story!
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    Chapter 21

    I hope you have planned some extensive epiClogue because, writing this trilogy, you brought so many interesting characters and families that every one of them deserves to have some nice closure and we as readers are eager to have a glance at their future.
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    Three's Company

    I'm sorry Russ feels this way, but guys had to draw some red lines! Friendship is ok. Friendship with benefits is ok too. But Russ is not a family, he has to make his own life. Hopefully Gordon and Brian can help him with that because surrogate family and surrogate life are not longtime solution for either party.
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    Chapter 5

    I've been asking myself, where the love word came from...but then, it came to my mind - it has been over a year, or more, of flirting. So, in Book 1 it has been Beau who was discovering himself and found HEA. It's time for Chris in Book 2 to find his HEA...hopefully with Andre.
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    Chapter 21

    You've been posting so much messages just to be first on the 6! Admit it!
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    Chapter 21

    If I understand this well... The flame shot straight out and hit directly in the seam between two of the scales protecting its heart. it is more about weak point, as Achilles' heel then type of weapon itself.
  10. A beautiful chapter. it's wonderful how you have simbolicaly made church and religion as place of forgiveness, reconciliation and acceptance rather than place of judgment and fear of hell and punishment!
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    Chapter 21

    landing operation
  12. Cane23

    Chapter 1

    @Mrsgnomie you never disappoint!!! 😂 I like that Jensen used same strategy as Jay waiting for the "right answer"...Go home Loren. 😁
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    Chapter 21

    We'll see.😜
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    Chapter 21

    Isn't he already a shadow shifter? A shadow shifter, elemental shifter and shape shifter all together - like instant coffee, 3 in 1 😁
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    Chapter 21

    I'm going to comment action scenes latter on, now, I want to comment sex. @kbois you've been writeing some wonderful, hot sex scenes but this one was somehow special. It was like re-mating. It is both passionate and touching! Beutiful!
  16. Reading the latest short story by @Bill W, I've decided to explore the older ones. I don't know how I decided to read this one first, but I've been surprised that there is no reaction to it. This is coming of age story which main characters are high school jockes Tony and Jordan. As they grow up together, they sexually experiment and while Jordan accepts being gay and being in love with his best friend, Tony fall into denial. What this story makes different is that it is written from Tony's POV, which give us picture of all turbulences in person that rejects his friend at the first moment and his growing out of denial. The story deals with sexual acceptance and sexual exploration. It touches the problems of bulling, suicide, health issues, dealing with death of the parent, mentoring the younger brother, family acceptance. There are moments of joy, moments of passion and moments of sadness and cry, but at the end this story brings the satisfying closure both for its protagonists and us as readers.
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    Chapter 20

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    Chapter 7

    I've expected Stacy to have some emotional outburst, but I thought he was going to find a picture of Mikey (I know, I'm too sappy...). Sometimes, our jokes can hurt someone close to us. Boys are still sensitive and hurt, they can overreact, so it is important they have good friends to support them and bring the best out of them. Manchester tour has been great. Thank you for bringing memory of Alan Turing. His personal history is both story of unknown war hero and tragic victim of awful homophobic laws.
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    Chapter 7

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Imitation_Game Grat movie with Benedict Cumberbatch as Alan Turing. That's how I find out about him and his work.
  20. This beautiful story rises ambivalent feelings in me. I'm really sad and feel it's unfair to lose a loving child but, on the other hand, it's so nice that this short life has been spent surrounded by loving parents as Gavin and Danny. When destined to live as abandoned child, Eric has been blessed to be adopted by two loving guys and, although losing him, Gavin and Danny are blessed for having him as part of their life, at least for some time. 😢
  21. You've decided to kill all @Robert Hugill's baddies!!! 😂
  22. Something good might come of it actually. Ralph and Russ might get together, Russ get both a man and girls! And of course, great fourway sex sessions together! 😁
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    Chapter 20

    I think Huntington just provokes about Vann, he is targeting Sebastian. Nevertheless, Vann might be a good bait for blackmail. After all, he is a weak point for Caleb and Huntington knows it. He has successfully used this tactic already.
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    Chapter 20

    O, I am Fortune's fool!
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    Chapter 20

    Yea, if they survive! 😜
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