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Great point, health issues might be the only explanation of such behavior. Liam has some sort of Split personality. Dylan said at one point - do you have an evil twin brother maybe... Maybe he has - in his head!
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What a night, Dylan sent two persons to hospital, one he healed, the other one he hurt! Too many confused and confronted emotions. I feel upset after this chapter, not every writer can do that... Bravo!
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This kiss and all the drama about it are nothing, I mean really nothing compared to the medical skills Dylan showed! I'm amazed, he is going to be great doctor. Just, not to skip drama entirely... What a possessive asshole... You are MINE! Really, yours...for what, a punching bag?! And now that we know Liam new about Dylan's feelings his actions seem even worse!
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Where did all this Liam's rage come from? Ok, I understand, he is shallow, superficial... Being friends with Dylan was not good for his reputation...whatever. He could have avoided him, ghost him...even tease him...but this, this violence, cruel violence...wtf?! And it's not a punch...he beat him so violently that Dylan ended in hospital, not once, but twice!!! And now, he appears like awaken from coma, amnesia...I don't know what...He misses Dylan...He is surprised...incredible!
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This chapter really got me upset! Great writing!
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Liam can be described in many words but this...this was too much! ...I've seen a new chapter today, so I started reading from the first. Very interesting start, hope you will continue this story.
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These wise words, spoken from a lady (who I imagine as played by Brenda Blethyn) should be put as billboard at town square! Her and Annalisa's support might be very helpful in the future.
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With both parents' dead, bullied at school, desperate and tired of life injustices, Ryan decides to end all the suffering. But when it seemed that he is on the one-way road, the ghost of his late father appears and shows him two short videos of future that might happen. What will Ryan do with this information? Is it possible to change destiny? Is he going to get his HEA? Read this amazing little story and find out...
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Wow, I didn't expect this, but it came out better than I thought. I'm so glad Brian showed his true character before accident, so, it wasn't accident that has moved plot and their relationship. It was just wat it is - disaster waiting to happen. It's good that Brian didn't freak out when Ryan has spoken of his father's ghost. Unusual explanation but yet again, how else could Ryan know about all those things... Ryan had difficult life, but his foster parents are really nice people. I think that both Ryan and his foster parents could give each other more chance to develop their relationship. He could be wonderful son and they could be very supporting parents. I expected multichapter story, but this form is nice too! 🙂
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Toby is naive and Bell is danger. This could be a nice summer memory for toby. If Bell stayed longer, Toby might get really hurt. I'm so interested how will this story develop.
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It has been one of the best scenes in the story. It's emotional and heartbreaking. Now I know that your personal experience has made it so realistic and beautiful.
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What a wonderful New Years gift - a new home, a new family. Being so excited, but also insecure and worried...Harry almost missed opportunity to keep the boys. Luckily, Max and Stacy are always close to keep things from going sideways! For the moment, I've thought that Harry gave a key of the house as Christmas present to the boys, but the symbolism of chains that binds them is beautiful. Thank you for amazing story, looking forward for epilogue.
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Against his will, Alex is becoming part of Jeha's clan. That will put a target on his forehead. There is a long and bumpy road ahead of them.
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I don't know, but he is fully aware of his pubes! 😜
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Maybe I haven't expressed my thoughts clearly. I don't think anything sexual happened in that room. It's not the cheating that is an issue here, it's respect! Andre just had to tell Chris where he is going to be and what he is going to do, and it would be ok. Love is not problem, cheating is not problem...even trust is not a problem, it's just respect. It is lack of respect I feel all the time - is it about bedlinen or secretly being with naked guy alone in room or something else... The crucial difference between those two couples is that Michael knew where Jamie was and what he was doing. They might be exhibitionists, but they respect each other (even though Michael had to explain that emotional reunion with Chris to Jamie...and probably redeem himself with bj 😁). It's the same with Chris and Michael's kiss at the party. I understand Jamie and Andre needed reassurance that there are not romantic feelings between those two. But it was also important to put it all out - I understand it has been surprised meeting, but you hurt me. I don't want my boyfriend kissing another man without my consent. It is also about respect!
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So, Chris has to justify himself about Michael, but Andre doesn't think he should explain his relationship with Jamie. Is there something wrong with me for not understanding why is appropriate for Andre to console naked Jamie alone in his room!?! Let me quote wise words of @jaysalmn - NOBODY needs help with underwear! Andre has issues with living together but, he will have mercy on Chris and move in now that there is nowhere else to go! 🤮 I find it amazing when three male adults sleep naked spooning in the bed and say - there is nothing sexual about it! 🤣 Maybe it's just me again, but I find it very sexual! Of course, it hadn't! He is just messing with your head...and bedsheets! Unfortunately, not! Still thinking taxi driver is better than you!
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Health problems can be a real temptation for relationship. Such situations can show a true character because it is easy to be good when everything goes smoothly and easy, but it is disease that shows who is ready to make sacrifice for someone. So, I understand Owain's fear that Colin will leave him but, I think Colin passed the test. I wouldn't be too harsh to Mhairi. Being sister and being mother are two different worries. She might be overprotective of her son, especially now that they live alone but, she'll come around.
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Light at the end of the Tunell is the third and the ultimate book of the Hibrid Journey trilogy. It brings back beloved characters in their final confrontation against the evil lion shifter. Mainly focused on the Caleb, and his journey from fall to redemption, this is story of love, healing and victory of good. Without doubt a masterpiece and classic literature of GA, a fantasy world which @kbois has created is the place you will come back to read and reread.
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It's so beautiful. Why looking for perfection, just look around you. One of the most wonderful love declarations without many words. ❤️ Another amazing thing is the way you ended last two chapters. Friendships... Friendships for life... Friendships forever... That's the one constant, one certainty, one stability that stayed unharmed from the start of each book, till the end of the series. Yes, this curtain fall brought tears to my eyes. I've been privileged to share this travel with you @kbois and all the wonderful members of GA. Have a well-deserved rest and come back with new adventures! Lots of love, Cane
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I'm amazed by your eye for details! I've been confused by Terry...I mean...who is he now?!? So, I was reading chapter again to find him! 😜 Yes, their deaths might release Brian but, I think that hardness build up a character. It would be much better for Brian to stand up to bullies at least once in his life. It would make him a better man and hero in Ryan's eyes.
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Harry got used to have boys in house so much that he finds it completely normal living with them. He even seems surprised that he has to ask them to stay which is really charming but that talk must have been done. Charlie and Michael are grateful but don't want to be imposters in someone else house. Harry will have to convince them that they are family now. Charlie and Brad are bringing their relationship on new level. But it comes so naturally, as another important step in their lives without too much noise and talk around which is very much in accordance with their shy and quiet characters. Ending chapter with amazing Christmas show, you gave us a wonderful holiday chapter. Thank you.
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Very interesting start. I haven't expected supernatural story but appearance of father's ghost (unlike Hamlet's father this one doesn't ask for revenge 🙂) brings some mystery in plot which engages readers in predicting million different outcomes. So, Ryan haven't won a lottery, but he has got some very important information about near future and what will he do with that information? How is he going to use it and is he going to succeed in changing his own and Brian's destiny...maybe even destiny of bullies? Eagerly waiting the next chapter!
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Good, the party went smoothly and without any serious incidents we were afraid of. Now, let the fun begin! 😁
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wow, three stories at once! What a production!!! I'm little behind with A Thousand Years... but regularly following other two!
