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Another heartwarming, cheerful and loving story of two young men playfully enjoying each others bodies. Very enjoyable. Is that it or is there more to their story?
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The Play's the Thing, and Meeting the Walkers
Paladin commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Play's the Thing, and Meeting the Walkers
It seems we have all come across strange names and strange spellings of names. One I remember was a boy whose name was spelt Jakk. Fortunately this chapter was about much more. Thank you for helping us share and understand Colton's loss and experiencing how the families are meshing harmoniously together. -
In Aussie slang "Piss" would usually be used. Taking the Mickie is much rarer. Aussie colloquialism likes using "piss". As well as "to take the piss" there is also "don't piss me off" or "you're pissing me off" and then there's "piss off" and "on the piss" (which means to drink a lot of alcohol, specially beer) to name a few. Language can be so inventive.
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Now you have me really curious. From an Aussie perspective I can imagine someone setting off a manual alarm on finding a snake in the bank.
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A very engaging chapter, making police work both realistic and interesting. Loved the cat setting off the alarms story and pleased to know it's true. I remember years ago I had a back to base alarm system and received a call that it had activated. The one sensor that activated was is a room that was almost impossible to access without activating other sensors. The intruder? A large spider living near the sensor. Will they get paired for work again after they date? Hmm.
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I suspect that anything Jamie / Leon wears on this date will be OK with Mike until not wearing clothes will be even more appreciated.
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A great chapter. I stumbled upon this story by accident and I'm sooo pleased that I did. It is amazingly realistically told and at the same time elegantly. I really like the way Leon is being drawn more and more to Mike. Fingers crossed.
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Another House Visit, A Minor Issue, and Moving Days
Paladin commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another House Visit, A Minor Issue, and Moving Days
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A delightful story @chris191070. I love your short stories. Please keep writing them.
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Coming up in the next chapter @VBlew
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Thanks @drsawzall for reading and commenting so positively.
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An excellent question @CincyKris. No spoilers but, after Melbourne there are others asking the same question.
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We all have our fingers crossed @mansexlover. It will be a while before we find out
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Thanks @Summerabbacat for your multiple comments. Obviously I don't live in Melbourne but I've always enjoyed my visits there. It has such a different vibe from Sydney.
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Thanks @Cane23 you are right that Jamie and Andre's personalities are different from Chris and Michael's personalities and in a way that are complementary. We will keep learning more about Andre as the story progresses.
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Thanks @chris191070 for reading and commenting
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We arrived at Tullamarine and headed for our hotel in central Melbourne where we checked into our rooms which were next to each other. The first thing we did was to open the connecting doors between the rooms. Then we started to show Andre a bit about Melbourne. Surprisingly he had never visited Melbourne before, so it was all new to him. As we walked towards Federation Square we told Andre about the free tram travel zone and the free city tram loop. Just then one of the heritage W class tr
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@Ticklishboy30 you are definitely right there. That they are. Another beautifully descriptive and fun chapter. Thanks
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A New Home and Two Moves
Paladin commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A New Home and Two Moves
A great chapter. A hiccup for both groups that led to an elegant solution. I love seeing them all getting on so well. -
A beautifully told story. I loved the way the new Jim brought about change in Parker as well as himself.
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Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
Paladin commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
A great emotional chapter. I believe I can uncross my fingers now. -
Will being Joe and Jimmy at the same time really work? Being Jimmy is getting stronger all the time. Mr Jordan seems to have plans.
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The Decision, and the Trip
Paladin commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Decision, and the Trip
Back at Chapter 16 I gave the chapter a fingers crossed. Well, actually I gave Dylan a fingers crossed because at the end of that chapter I didn't trust either Zack or Jackson.My fingers are still crossed that Dylan and Dominic will still come out of this unharmed and better for it. -
The Funeral and Dominic Adjusting
Paladin commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Funeral and Dominic Adjusting
This response is truer than most people believe. Pedophiles are predominately heterosexual and predominately family or close family friends and their victims are predominately female. I know that's not what the media would have us believe but it is what the facts tell us. It's convenient for straight pedophiles to keep the focus on homosexual pedophiles and away from them. The "he's gay so he's a pedophile" argument is the result of preconceptions and faulty logic which goes: He's gay, he's a pedophile, therefore all gays are pedophiles. (or even worse therefore all pedophiles are gay) It's like: That is a swan, It is white, therefore all swans are white. All those conclusions are WRONG. We need to continue to educate people with facts. -
Nights Out and Relationships
Paladin commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Nights Out and Relationships
They are both lucky to get "player Herb" out of their personal lives. Is he deadly nightshade or just a dill?
