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  1. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    I want to thank all you guys for following, reading, responding and especially for commenting. @Cane23 and @Summerabbacat, I honestly appreciate the effort and thought you have put into commenting on the behaviour of the characters in this story. You will learn more about Andre, Chris, Michael and Jamie very soon. I love all the comments that are made and recognize that my characters, like me, are not perfect and can behave better.
  2. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    Sunday morning we both slept in so by the time we stirred it was late morning. As usual we were as close together as possible. Relaxed, I wriggled against his warm naked body. He asked. “Do I have to be worried?” I was still only half awake and mumbled. “I don’t know. What do you have to be worried about?” “You and Michael.” Still only half awake I replied, “No, you don’t have to be worried about me and Michael.” “Does that go for Jamie as well?” That brought me wide awa
  3. One of the most appealing aspects of this story is that it abandons most of the usual concepts and conventions surrounding vampires. In this world there is an interaction between vampires and humans where they have co-existed in private for centuries without the horror we have come to expect with this genre. This interaction is exemplified in the strengthening relationship between Greg and his friends (both human and vampire) who all love and support each other. While this portrayal of vampires is refreshingly different, the real gem is the gently revealed storyline with interesting twists and turns (along with often unnecessary cliffhangers) that maintain the reader’s interest. And another thing. This is not a story where you can drop into it and expect to “catch up” with the narrative. To fully understand and appreciate it, you have to, just like in the song Do-Re-Mi, start at the very beginning. That means going back to Books 1 and 2.
  4. Paladin

    Chapter 3

    OK @Cane23, @Summerabbacat, @jaysalmn and @drsawzall I can see all your points. I will say don't be too ready to rush to judgment. For example who said A and J were in the room for an "inordinate amount" of time or even an extended amount of time? Remember the reason A and C didn't date sooner was because of Chris and in his words "I was wary of rushing into a relationship". Having decided he wants the relationship he immediately wants Andre to live with him. It that fair? Their love for each other is strong but they both have relationship issues which have to be worked through. I love that so you are becoming so involved with the story and the characters that you are urged to comment. Please keep commenting. I appreciate all the comments and responses. Thanks.
  5. Paladin

    Chapter 2

    I'm not sure about Lachlan @Summerabbacat, but Beau's is pretty good when he's on the job. LOL
  6. Paladin

    Chapter 3

    Wow @Cane23. Chris didn't know Mick (now Michael) was going to be at the party, hence his surprise. Is Jamie really Andre's ex? Following this party we start to learn some backstories. I hope you keep reading to find out what happens and please keep commenting.
  7. Paladin

    Chapter 3

    Thanks @chris191070 and @CincyKris for your comments. It won't be long before you have some answers.
  8. Paladin

    Chapter 3

    Sunday began in a way that I was readily embracing and wanted to continue. I was spooning Andre, totally naked together. We stirred enough to acknowledge each other’s presence and drifted off to sleep again. When we woke our warm bodies were still pressed against each other. Andre rolled over to face me He initiated a welcome good morning kiss and asked, “What are we doing today.” “Hmm, first up I have some domestic chores such as washing and some cleaning.” “I must be in love! E
  9. Paladin

    Chapter 7

    I really loved Brian being, or trying to be, protective of Jenny, especially considering who is the more experienced and powerful of the two of them. Just shows what love does to us!
  10. Paladin

    Chapter 2

    Keep that thought @Cane23 as they move towards finding out.
  11. Paladin

    Chapter 2

    Thanks @chris191070. I'm hoping to see Lachlan become even more accepting in the future.
  12. Paladin

    Chapter 2

    I felt gutted. I had assumed, obviously erroneously, that Andre would be staying tonight. To be honest I was hoping he was moving to live with me. Andre read my face and kissed me. “Chris, I need to go back to Ettalong. I have things I need to sort out and I need to go to work tomorrow. I don’t have any work clothes apart from the two shirts I bought today.” I felt foolish. “Sorry, it’s just that I’d like you to stay longer.” “In that case you need to do something about the wardro
  13. Paladin

    Chapter 5

    I thought it was obvious, just not something that needed to be specifically commented on. I seem to be one of the few who hasn't read the original story. I don't think I need to as I am thoroughly enjoying this wonderfully written and engaging version.
  14. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    Hi @Ivor Slipper, thanks for commenting.
  15. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    @Greye you sound like you were once a local. I've enjoyed using local names in this story, even though the action there is pure fiction. Hope you enjoy the story.
  16. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    @Cane23, @Greye, @drsawzall and @Daddydavek I'm pleased you have enjoyed the little cliff at the end. Hope its enough to keep you interested.
  17. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    Yes @Ajbt2001 Andre and Chris are starting their journey. Thank you @Ajbt2001 and @chris191070 for reading and taking the time to make supportive comments
  18. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    Andre and Chris Where we left Andre and Chris at the end of the story “Beau”. We moved towards each other and embraced and kissed, and kissed, and kissed; each time with more passion. I broke to take a breath. We looked at each other and simultaneously said, “I love you.” “Do you want to eat now or later?” “If you’re thinking what I’m thinking. Food later.” “Good choice. You know Beau’s going to vet you to make sure you’re right for me?” “What the fuck . . . .‘?”
  19. Andre and Chris is a sequel to my story, Beau. After declaring their love for each other Andre and Chris hope to share their lives forever. They discover that for both of them their past has an influence on the present. How will they negotiate the ups and downs of their future?
  20. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    A wonderfully told, truly heartwarming story.
  21. Paladin

    Chapter 5

    A big thank you to all you guys who have followed this story and especially those of you who have reacted to the story or left comments. Because of you guys I so love publishing on this site. @Cane23, @drsawzall, @chris191070, @Daddydavek, and @VBlew, I appreciate your encouraging comments. I hope all you guys will follow and enjoy Andre and Chris when I start publishing it.
  22. Paladin

    Chapter 5

    Great comment @Cane23. You are right that Beau is about Beau discovering himself. When I first thought about a sequel, I was reluctant because a story of "and they lived happily ever after" is nice but not all that interesting. However, Andre and Chris told me that life is not always that smooth.
  23. Paladin

    Chapter 5

    I had just finished lunch on the second Saturday in January when Beau arrived unexpectedly. I greeted him, “Hi, what’s up?” Nothing It’s just the baby shower. All those women talking babies and loading Skye up with baby clothes and stuff. Skye doesn’t want me there and I wouldn’t be able to cope anyway.” I laughed. “Have you had lunch? Would you like a coffee?” “I grabbed a burger on the way over here. I’d actually like a shower.” “Am I missing something? It seems every time
  24. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    Wow, expectations for an author to live up to. @Cane23 "grand Finale" and @Ivor Slipper "a surprise or two'. Yes just one more chapter to find out.
  25. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    @Cane23 Thanks for your comment. I love it. If you are waiting for "the good things" then things will have to speed up. There's only one more chapter. Don't forget that the story is called "Beau".
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