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I thought it was obvious, just not something that needed to be specifically commented on. I seem to be one of the few who hasn't read the original story. I don't think I need to as I am thoroughly enjoying this wonderfully written and engaging version.
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Hi @Ivor Slipper, thanks for commenting.
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@Greye you sound like you were once a local. I've enjoyed using local names in this story, even though the action there is pure fiction. Hope you enjoy the story.
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@Cane23, @Greye, @drsawzall and @Daddydavek I'm pleased you have enjoyed the little cliff at the end. Hope its enough to keep you interested.
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Yes @Ajbt2001 Andre and Chris are starting their journey. Thank you @Ajbt2001 and @chris191070 for reading and taking the time to make supportive comments
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Andre and Chris Where we left Andre and Chris at the end of the story “Beau”. We moved towards each other and embraced and kissed, and kissed, and kissed; each time with more passion. I broke to take a breath. We looked at each other and simultaneously said, “I love you.” “Do you want to eat now or later?” “If you’re thinking what I’m thinking. Food later.” “Good choice. You know Beau’s going to vet you to make sure you’re right for me?” “What the fuck . . . .‘?”
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Andre and Chris is a sequel to my story, Beau. After declaring their love for each other Andre and Chris hope to share their lives forever. They discover that for both of them their past has an influence on the present. How will they negotiate the ups and downs of their future?
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A wonderfully told, truly heartwarming story.
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A big thank you to all you guys who have followed this story and especially those of you who have reacted to the story or left comments. Because of you guys I so love publishing on this site. @Cane23, @drsawzall, @chris191070, @Daddydavek, and @VBlew, I appreciate your encouraging comments. I hope all you guys will follow and enjoy Andre and Chris when I start publishing it.
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Great comment @Cane23. You are right that Beau is about Beau discovering himself. When I first thought about a sequel, I was reluctant because a story of "and they lived happily ever after" is nice but not all that interesting. However, Andre and Chris told me that life is not always that smooth.
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I had just finished lunch on the second Saturday in January when Beau arrived unexpectedly. I greeted him, “Hi, what’s up?” Nothing It’s just the baby shower. All those women talking babies and loading Skye up with baby clothes and stuff. Skye doesn’t want me there and I wouldn’t be able to cope anyway.” I laughed. “Have you had lunch? Would you like a coffee?” “I grabbed a burger on the way over here. I’d actually like a shower.” “Am I missing something? It seems every time
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Wow, expectations for an author to live up to. @Cane23 "grand Finale" and @Ivor Slipper "a surprise or two'. Yes just one more chapter to find out.
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@Cane23 Thanks for your comment. I love it. If you are waiting for "the good things" then things will have to speed up. There's only one more chapter. Don't forget that the story is called "Beau".
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Thanks @chris191070 I'm stoked to receive such a encouraging comment from you.
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I looked at the clock and groaned. I’d like a bit more sleep but I’d promised Skye I’d have Beau out of their place before eight. Even though the wedding wasn’t until 2pm, Skye was having the full treatment and didn’t want Beau to see her until she walked down the aisle. At seven thirty, Skye brought a still sleepy Beau out and handed me the garment bag containing his suit and an overnight bag. In a sense she handed over Beau as well. “I trust you Chris to have both of them at the church wh
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Another great chapter. These guys are so into their soulmates, in so many ways. Love the lube spell. I want it.
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Hi @Greg Garland is not necessarily short a few brain cells (or in Aussie slang "has a kangaroo loose in the top paddock"). Just as he can be dead gorgeous and dangerous he can be dead gorgeous and highly intelligent and even more dangerous. Just saying.
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Love the descriptive writing. I so wanted to be in the snow with them. Garland is a case study in "you can't judge a book by its cover." Psychopath?
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Thanks @Cane23 and @VBlew for your comments and theories about Andre. I like that you're enjoying the story. Hope you continue reading.
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akascrubber, chris19100 and drsawzall. Thanks guys for your comments. I appreciate them all. I didn't expect Calvin to be so popular, but I love that he is. Yes the next chapter is the wedding.
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I'm thrilled that I'm posting here Ajbt2001, and love all the responsive readers and their comments. I'm also a reader so I'm enjoying many of the great stories on this site.
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I arrived at Beau’s parent’s place with my esky. Beau’s mother, Carol, greeted me at the door. “You must be Chris. I seem to know everyone else. Come and join the party. I assume the dessert is in there.” She pointed to the esky. I had talked to Carol (Skye gave me her number) during the week about what I should bring and after what Skye told her she suggested dessert. The esky contained a pavlova, a cheesecake, an apple crumble and lots of whipped cream, all homemade. After putting th
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I love the genuine and ongoing love and affection your characters show each other. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thanks guys I love all your comments
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Keep speculating Dan. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story
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