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  1. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    @Mark Ponyboy Peters it could also depend on where the school is located. In the last 10 years the Catholic education system has become more doctrinaire and more insistent that their teachers "follow Catholic teachings". I know a young teacher who was happily living with his girlfriend when he applied for a job in a Catholic high school. After his interview he announced simultaneously that he got the job and was getting married. People who knew him weren't surprised about him getting the job, but were about him getting married. Over that time the Catholic education system has also led the opposition to anti-discrimination legislation that would ban church schools sacking gay and lesbian teachers and expelling gay and lesbian students.
  2. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    A great start to this story with an early introduction to some of the characters. I like it. A gay teacher in a catholic high school. In what era is this story set?
  3. We should never forget that many appliances (especially electronic) now have "built in obsolescence".
  4. Paladin

    Chapter 11

    As I understand it the rules for intrafamily adoption are different and, under certain conditions, allow an older brother to adopt a younger brother. Some of those conditions could prevent Daniel adopting Joshua at this time. The NSW Supreme Court needs to approve the application for adoption.
  5. Paladin

    Chapter 17

    Again magic powers to the rescue, except for that one very appropriate bite that worked its own very physical magic. Nice chapter. Pleased that you're back to writing.
  6. Paladin

    Chapter 53

    A heartwarming conclusion to this part of a wonderful story. Thank you @Mark Ponyboy Peters and yes I would like to read more about this group of friends and family.
  7. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    Going on safari carries the connotations of going into the wilderness, facing life changing challenges and returning a better person. Norm certainly experienced a wilderness in terms of eating tinned food and sleeping in the back of the truck in Nature Preservations. No indication of how they would wash themselves and even less their clothes. Anyway the safari works its magic and he returns a new man who restocks the closet, from which he has emerged, to reflect his now socially open gayness. After a stumbling start he realises the importance of a romantically monogamously relationship and embraces it. An excellent heartwarming conclusion. I want to know about Vic. He helped Norm find HEA and I hope he has helped himself find a true lasting love. Come on @chris191070, another, I hope, heartwarming story about Vic.
  8. Quote: On the way to his second classroom, he couldn't shake or explain the uncomfortable feeling he was experiencing Quote: The Great Spirit has alerted us to a dangerous situation about to happen, and it will require the combined strength of you and Kotie to combat it. Are these two things related to what is about to happen and will it happen at the school's annual Parent/Teacher Carnival Weekend, which will happen between Halloween and Thanksgiving.? Hmm, much to ponder about what will happen to these loving and playful, interconnected and extended families and how they will overcome the imminent danger.
  9. It looks like "reality" Livefeed is about to experience a dose of real life reality. I'm looking forward to it and seeing liar Vs liar moving towards lover + lover.
  10. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    The public tickling was entertaining, especially as the other cafe patrons not only didn't object but videoed it. No doubt it went viral! The only thing missing was the end of the tickling being greeted with a round of applause.
  11. I'm confused. I've looked at my rating for my current story and it seems to suggest that it is less like stories that I've rated as liking. I don't get a chance to rate my own stories but I do like them. Yes OK, I know what you're thinking, but still. I like a wide range of genres. Does this reduce a rating score for a particular genre?
  12. Quote: The bright yellow lemon's rind was zested finely to add a tangy flavor to the dish. Citrus rind is an essential ingredient for making marmalade.
  13. Rind also refers to animal skin, as in bacon rind.
  14. I can't argue against that!
  15. Paladin

    Chapter 9

    Nothing like a drag queen in the family to liven things up, even when not present. Kieran's met Cousin Patrick. I do hope we get to meet him as well. 🙏 Toby is going to need some careful support and direction in the development of his sexuality. Kieran and Charlie will be good and careful mentors and role models.
  16. Paladin

    Chapter 50

    Aaron kept his promise of two sets of fireworks, with the bonus of a solid and binding relationship. The sunrise started a new day, illuminated Tony and Aaron's new home and heralded the start of their new life. A wonderful read.
  17. Paladin

    Powerful

    Now, we're off to visit the wizard Cassandra. Will Theodore cooperate to destroy her? He has a pack of reasons to do so and if so, how will he destroy her and where does the incense fit into all this? Pinemoor is the appropriate place for Danny and Ryder to mate.
  18. As @Bill W has pointed out we tend to be condescending towards people who are condescending. Now I'm going to go a bit weird here. Should there be a particular word for being condescending towards a person who is condescending? This could expand to should we have a word for being a bully to bullies, an artist who paints artists or a person who comments on comments. Nah that's getting far too weird.
  19. Paladin

    In the Dark

    This episode took place at night, in the dark, but Lyn is also still in the dark about what is happening. He is refusing to let go of his preconceived beliefs and opinions to the point where he isn't seeing the present. A great, entertaining chapter.
  20. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    Well, I was not expecting this. You are not usually so sexually explicit. And their stamina, wow. 🥵
  21. Paladin

    Chapter 3

    I think Angelo LuPine is more likely to be a fox than a stallion.
  22. Not the best meeting between Jamie and Hearst, but both still experienced the effect of their affection (love) for each other. So Jamie is organising his "little army" to go to "war against the scumbags" without knowing that while Hearst is on the other side, he is still on Jamie's side. This should be good!
  23. Paladin

    Chapter 49

    An absolutely wonderful party and a bonfire to gather around. That brings back so many memories of parties in the country, including cooking potatoes in the coals. Aaron has offered two sets of fireworks. One so far and hopefully one to come.
  24. Definitely a Raging infidel.
  25. The relationship between infidelity and religious belief couldn't be clearer than in the word infidel which has and is used to refer to an adherent to a religion other than one's own. While we are all familiar with infidelity referring to being sexually unfaithful, I've never heard of an adulterous partner being called an infidel. Maybe I could start a trend. Now where do I find an unfaithful partner? Hmmm 💔
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