hi hi,
i'm new to CJames' forum, but afyter reading his "let the music play" i just had to comment
great story, really. nice characters (though jon and eric are a bit of asses) and i gotta tell you: helen is my idol XD i ove it how she can grab the boys' balls and squeeze them when needed. up untill now she was doing that metaphorically, but oh boy, once she finds out what the older guys did she will have no objections against doing it for real.
brandon and chase are cute ^^ they tip toed aroun eachother a bit at first but they cut it to an acceptable span of time (around a week, i can dea with that). things between them are so great now, i realy don't want it to be spoied >.<
so please, please, tell me brandon will be wiser than that and won't go along with the plan. there's just no way it can turn out fine. even assuming that charity would stay silent and that helen se wouldn't find out... it'll be too much of a burden for brandon and he's such an honest guy >.< the weight of that one night would kill him inside. imagine him taking chase for the fist time a few days after he cheated on him? after all this "i want your first time to be perfect" talk?
plus that would be like giving charity more ammo. she not only can reveal to the press that chase and brandon are gay and together, she could add that "brandon slept with her, what a promiscious bastard he is".
plus if you want them (brandon and charity) to do that i'm sure as hell chase will find out one way or another, probably by walking in on them
and i don't believe anything you say. it was an obvious cliffhanger to me. an evil one to add!
*crossing her fingers and praying that brandon will choose to inform chase and helen about the guys' screw up*
um, i wasn't too rant-y
know that i like the way you write and that you have one more fan in me