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@JJ QuinnThis is a really well written chapter not saying the other before this one wasn't. But just something about how Sam was able to take a step towards Ben finally even if it was small. And I love the way that Sam reached out to Cayden, and who know maybe Cayden will be a better person for it. Also I love that Ben has such a huge heart.
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@JJ Quinn That was a really good chapter. But what Connor said make me wonder if he was already abusing them and he just said that to get Sam away from Sofia and the kids
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@JJ Quinn that was a really good chapter.
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Chapter 165 Birthday Privileges
Jean87 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 165 Birthday Privileges
I know I am bum that I am almost caught up to the current chapter. It's such a well written book. once this book is complete it will be a book that i will read multiple times. Which I only do that for a select few books. -
Chapter 165 Birthday Privileges
Jean87 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 165 Birthday Privileges
@Dodger that was a good chapter. If I was Robbie, I would had said to Nathan you better back off the high horse who was the one who went to a seedy motel who picked up a guy on the internet for sex and drugs and who is still using the same drugs. So I had a little brandy big whoop. -
of course Sue knows the full story mothers seem like they have built in lie detector in their brains.
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Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
Jean87 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
I see the similarities between Matthew, and a victim of domestic abuse the one who is afraid of leaving of getting help of freedom from the violence. -
Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
Jean87 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
@Dodger That was a great chapter. If I was Robbie I would have said that if she has a problem with me being in my child life than I will see her in court to get joint custody and if she got in the way with that I would sue for full custody. -
@Mark ArbourThat was a great chapter. This was the first chapter that I found Will was acting unreasonable toward Jermey. He was being like the old Jermey and holding onto a grudge,
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@Andre DelportThat was a great chapter. when they said the guest were VIP I knew right away that that it was going to be Dan and Joan but did not think it was going to be David Donna Craig or Claude as well
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@DodgerThat was a good chapter. OMG if i had a sister that did that to me, there would be no, be nice to your sister it would be all out WAR.
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Chapter 118 A Long Walk on a Short Pier
Jean87 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 118 A Long Walk on a Short Pier
@Dodger That was a really well written chapter. I have felt like that once before. -
Chapter 107 The Laundry Game
Jean87 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 107 The Laundry Game
I have thought that as well. But I don't know if he is Robbie's father or not if he is not Robbie's father I think he really cared about his mother when they lived in Canada. I think Tom loves Robbie but he doesn't know how to admit to that and that makes me wonder if Tom is telling the truth about Nathan and Alex. Because at least that gives Tom a chance that Robbie will come back to England after he graduates and turns 18. -
Chapter 103 The Painful Truth
Jean87 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 103 The Painful Truth
@Dodgerthat was a good chapter. I was very surprised that why Nathan doesn't like Alex, I was thinking something like how Robbie got hurt by Alex had happened and I don't mean the notes I am talking about the drugging and the sex afterward. And what is the big deal that Robbie and Alex had hanky panky the only person that should have a problem about it is Fran since Robbie and she was dating at the time. And if I was Robbie that is what I would say to Nathan -
She had tears in her eyes and it made me feel bad that I had upset her. ‘Maybe I shouldn’t have said anything’. I believe that those tears are tears of relief.
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stealing 50 grand was not him fixing his problems it was striking back at the two people who hurt him the most. its not so much JP its more Stef that indulge him which is not surprising since Stef is well known to love drama. your so right that it could have been another Lahaina, That is sad that your grandmother's friend lost everything
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@PrivateTimYou call Will, spoiled 4 year. HA that is funny. Will acts way more mature than Jermey who is the one who figures out how to fix his problems and who is the one who stomps his feet in anger every time he doesn't get his way and acts like a fool.
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@Mark ArbourThat was a good chapter. I think Jeremy is really finally realizing how much his words hurt Will. I don't really think Jeremy has ever really thought about how painful words could be. Words are much worse than those punches that Will threw at Jeremy was. And here is why yes, those punches did damage but those words you're not even my brother. Are so much pain that it short, wired Will's ability to deal with Jeremy.
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Chapter 40 One for the Road
Jean87 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 40 One for the Road
@DodgerThat was a Great and FUNNY chapter. I don't like beer that much, so I never been drunk on it. But I have been drunk before, and I am not good at holding my drink, so I don' drink that often. -
@DodgerThat was a good Chapter. I can understand why Fran, is so upset about Robbie revealing that he knew he was gay the whole time they were together. But at the same time I understand where Robbie is coming from because I had to tell my ex-girlfriend that I was gay because she wanted to get back together. and she asked why did i not tell her I said I didn't know myself but in reality, I knew that I was a least bi-curious but than I really thought about who I thought I would see myself with and it wasn't a girl so that's when I knew I was not bi but gay.
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that's not true he could still be a professional he could just of gone there to plant that fake ID to get them going the wrong way
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@DodgerThat was a great chapter. I think I would of done the same thing when it started pouring rain and lightning I think I would have flipped out and just cussed like Robbie did.
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well if we were dealing with an author that didn't love to leave us with a face that looks like we ate a whole lemon in one sitting. Than I would say your right. But since we are dealing with an author that does love to do that than I say that it is very likely if he is a professional he would not leave any evidence like finger or physical evidence
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@Mark ArbourThat was a great chapter. I wonder if Jake is thinking that the guy that is stocking Travis is actually not a stocker but a hitman hired by his sister Taylor. Or might been hired by the group that was supposed to buy Buck industry.
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@DodgerThat was a great Chapter. I am soooooooooooo GLAD that Nicola is not my sister. I think we would have so many fights cause it would definitely drive me crazy if I had a sister like Nicola.
