peter rietbergen
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I can see "the point" of this tale, the change from boy to - well, something older, more mature. But do I believe that a boy would actually accept the steps he was asked to take?
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Great Expectations indeed. But whose, in this present-day tale...?
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I feel that, perhaps, we should have been told more about the intimacy that, apparently, has developed between L and M. Or have I missed something? N For me, now, it is a rather sudden "given". I would assume that over time - how much is not clear - it (also) must have influenced Matteo's perceptions of himself and his choices, actions.
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Maybe acknowledging the limitations and, indeed, limits of their choices will bring the two together again - at least as friends, sadder and wiser?
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Excellent. The quiet despair of the waiting room scène was moving. So was/is the end of this tale, sentimental though it is. But the short paragraph that defines love is a gem Do we need a sequel? As for me, now: I think not. Some things should be left as they are : the memory of s remarkable story.
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A cliffhanger? Yes. Do we need a happy end? Yes. Is it inevitable, given the story and its author? Yes, or... no. Would a death create new life? Yes.
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I think all of us will gladly let you cogitate. Whatever you come up with, the story - especially its many ethical conundrums - is thought-provoking, and moreover: it is very well-told.
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The main question, I think, is not whether the end of this tale satisfies the protagonists but whether we, the readers, are satisfied with their respective changes, conversions, et cetera. The author has set himself quite a task....
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The young boy but did what M and G did, too. I must confess I cannot see how G could sit in silent judgment and square his own actions with his conscience. Actually, I doubt that, if denounced/betrayed, even M and G would escape the friars' decision to judge and punish - few people (especially of the upper class) were powerful enough to be allowed to practice buggery, however secretive. If only therefore I do not think M and G would have spent the night together. If one of them were a patrician and the other a low-born page, it might be different...
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An evening with Mother
peter rietbergen commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in An evening with Mother
That IS a pity. Why not a short solo cantata: Iphigeneia (for a deep female voice, like A's friend...) and cimbalon/zyther.... -
An evening with Mother
peter rietbergen commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in An evening with Mother
Get Neil into the crowd....and, far more interestingly: let us hear a cimbalon piece by the "real" Hugill.- 13 comments
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An ongoing experiment - open source. How very apt. The Cheetham scène was pure fun.
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One can but hope that those of us who choose, or are, by our conscience, compelled to serve a system - because we always need a system - yet will know when the system has lost its first purpose: to serve the people. Then we'll have to decide whether or not to continue serving it, or start to change it, demolish it, even. And yes, then the ones who have chosen to serve as the system's symbols of power without ever asking if its moral foundations are still solid may have to go, too.
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Fascinating. As well as unsettling, ethically, morally. Rereading this chapter I realise that It'll always try to be the useful one, because it forces me to make choices, be human. The pious seldom make choices, seldom show mercy...they are, indeed, seldom human.
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Oh, this was absolutely hilarious. I simply loved the turning of the table, though the process still is partial and, perhaps temporary. But to a sentimental sucker - yes: I am he - this is delightful.
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If you add strawberries to the limoncello I'm your man.
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Sixtus iv certainly wasn't a saint. But let's not idolise Lorenzo de'Medici and his family...Power and greed dictated policy on both sides.
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Shouldn't Lauretta have been at the unveiling - for a number of reasons, for further enlightenment?
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The Blue Light of Dawn & a concert in the country
peter rietbergen commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Blue Light of Dawn & a concert in the country
After lovely stories with quite a variety of "artistic types" finally one bang on in the "real" Hugillverse. So let's all enjoy the music of the spheres...- 21 comments
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The second lesson was both hilarious and moving. Meanwhile: who is exactly Higgins and who Eliza in this Shaw play remains to be seen.
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Even so: can a profound change bring redemption, an absolution for a past of violence, cruelty. Ben's....
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A Dominican Friar... But not Girolamo Savonarola... Anyway, Dominicaans came in varieties of spiritual calling. As staunch traditionalists or as preachers of a form of Christianity that was at variance with both papal power and ideology and the oppression of secular rulers. Inspiring as well as dangerous to follow. Another great chapter, especially in analysing Lauretta's (slowly changing?) feelings .
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Belonging to Ben. A terrifying prospect, unless Ben changes...But can the image of Keith's punishment ever be unseen?
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Actually, believing in the power of Rome had nothing to do with being religious or pious. The popes had an army. And yes, they commandes men's souls through the threat of Hell and Damnation. If Gianluca really were religious, he would not indulge in sodomy/buggery, for that was considered a mortal sin.
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Chapter 21: Are some relationships too broken to fix?
peter rietbergen commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 21: Are some relationships too broken to fix?
How come Sofia and Aiden are always coming in when Robert is in a private conversation with Julian?
