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    Chapter 12

    You did clear up a lot about Julie not being the overprotective and holier than thou one. I agree that the fact Julie got pregnant had a lot to do with Pop being the way he was. Another great chapter@Mark Ponyboy Peters.
  2. As usual, @Summerabbacat summed things up perfectly. I do hope Owen sees how he is exactly like Ellie. Barely functioning as a product of what the world thinks they should do and be. They both need to just start telling people to fuck off and let them be themselves.
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    The Change

    So sad, sitting here crying at 5 AM reading this. Like @weinerdog, I thought of a suicide as a possibility at first too. I feel bad that Brian had not told Tommy at first but then I understood it because of their ages. Looking forward to the next chapter.
  4. You wrote a truly amazing story @CasualWanderer82. You started posting it about eighteen months ago and just completed it. The love and thought you put into it shows throughout the chapters. So happy you did not rush on this story. I just hope you are satisfied with what you created @CasualWanderer82. Thank you for giving us this story.
  5. Margot is really starting to get on my nerves. She is going to get caught up in all the lies and take herself and Owen down. Owen needs to calm her down and he may need to threaten her for it to get through to her.
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    The Quiet Boy

    Great start @Tony S., I got hooked on it right away. The fact it is autobiographical, makes it all that much more meaningful.
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    Chapter 16

    Johnny deserves better than Bruce anyway. Bruce's last line just goes to show what an asshole he was. Johnny will rebound and be a better man for it.
  8. I am 100% with you pvtguy. The passive point is exactly right.
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    Chapter 16

    Great chapter. Looking like the power couple is close to emerging.
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    The Quiet Boy

    Glad you're back @Tony S.. Thank you for giving us a new read.
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    Chapter 11

    Great to see Levi's slow and steady acceptance of his father and Luke. The dream is also going to aid Levi. Great chapter as always @Mark Ponyboy Peters!
  12. Gotta ask, who doesn't check someone out on Facebook and the other sites out of curiosity? Very disconcerting meeting. They are both hiding things, intentional or not. I think Ryder will text Owen first.
  13. Damn! Will Theo, Vince, and Jack ever be reunited? We know they are only strong when they are together.
  14. Beautiful chapter @CasualWanderer82. I am not even going to try to guess where things will end.
  15. Great chapter. Really liking the trust building too. Taggert was coming around slowly but surely, hopefully Bert recognizing him doesn't set him back any.
  16. Great little story, who wouldn't love Bill? Would be fitting for a couple leather guys to take turns on Leo.
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    Chapter Ten

    I just want to hug Owen and tell him everything is going to be fine. He won't listen but tell him not to overthink things.
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    Perfect Timing

    Truly enjoyable read start to finish. Good mix of story and sizzle. Looking forward to your next story!
  19. A fun read, eager for part three tomorrow.
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    Chapter Nine

    Your description and dialogue on the phone conversation were perfect in this chapter. I felt like I was just outside the car and watching and hearing the conversation. Great chapter @mastershakeme.
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    To the Team

    Good to see Grumpy Frank has left the building. Now a team builder at work and a hot lover for Marc at home.
  22. Glad you put the image here. I don't think everyone goes to your homepage before reading your stories and sees the poster art.
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    Making Up

    Austin and Will are equally at fault for their fucked-up relationship. It is not Will's fault solely since he has always been up front with Austin about Travis.
  24. Great premise, I'm sure things will get really interesting soon. Enjoying the story as always. Outstanding poster art, I hope everyone goes back and looks at it.
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    Chapter 15

    This chapter seemed so difficult for Johnny. I hope he can put things in proper perspective and survive. Maybe Bruce is the answer, if Bruce wants to make the commitment Johnny wants.
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