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    Chapter 18

    I apologize for repeating a similar comment to yours, we were typing at the same time I think. I agree that I love this story too.
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    Chapter 18

    One down, one to go! A realization that they were more than friends now. Now poor Noah is going to have to deal with it. How long will it take Jackson to admit to himself that he too has feelings.
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    Homecoming

    I agree that things are not looking great for Kyle and Jake, and I think a breakup is imminent. The question is will Jake get back with Danny? I fear Ryan will be outed soon but I think he will be okay with support from Coach Rush, Jerome, and others. Brenton seems like a wild card in supporting Ryan after the comment that he might have called Danny a queer or something. I do see Jake and Danny giving Ryan support regardless of where relationships stand.
  4. I am enjoying getting to know Kahlid and Jaciah. They were simply names for such a long time and now you are bringing them to life.
  5. We really got to know Kit better in this chapter and he seems like a nice guy too. Like Luke, not the least bit pretentious and down to earth. This is making it harder to stay on just one team.
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    Chapter 30

    Thank you so much Sui. This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. The characters are so well developed I feel like I know them. The story plot gave us everything we could want from evil villains, car chases, shoot outs, and most importantly a love story.
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    Chapter 42

    Good chapter, lots of loose ends cleared up. I especially like how well Sky listened to John and gave him options or suggestions and not directly giving him advise.
  8. Charles26 was spot on in his comments in chapter 20. I was hoping that Julien would see it as Oliver's love and concern for him. Maybe Julien will think things through and realize Oliver just wanted to help.
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    Chapter 29

    You said it perfectly Cane23! I was looking for Luke to bring one to Kaleo while he was with the lawyers. I am hoping someone gives a solid gold baseball bat to Kaleo as a wedding gift, maybe gold plated since gold might be too soft.
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    Fort Huachuca

    Action packed chapter for sure. Really sorry that Stars was killed and Greiss was injured. At least all the traitors are dead and the informant was uninjured.
  11. A very imaginative story for sure and a lot of fun as all your bro stories are. Thank you for sharing!
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    Back

    I am so glad there were no regrets concerning their night spent together. Very enjoyable chapter and now back to camp.
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    Chapter 17

    What a great family Noah has. No bickering between Noah and Jackson, and if there had been I'll bet Ingrid would have put an end to it.
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    Glory Days

    If this family had just realized years earlier that they all enjoy the same things, imagine the fun they would have had. The camping trip will be epic, I'm sure.
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    Echoes

    I hope Karl is strong enough to leave Maria and go with his heart to Tom. It's simply not as easy as it sounds.
  16. Jeremy is making the best with what he has been given. It doesn't make it easier. The last four words say it all.
  17. Entertaining start. Ben's seemingly sudden fantasizing about Cole is definitely interesting. Ready to see how this goes down.
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    12:21 a.m.

    Thank you Kevin for a most thought provoking story. OK....I think I am going to think of this as a new start for Xavier and Owen. Deception and lies left behind the minute they see each other and a new beginning starts that moment. I'll stick with this unless I like someone else's idea better.
  19. Travis is finally waking up. He decided to forgive Will, and he got his mojo back almost imediately.
  20. It certainly doesn't say much for Julien's attorney or the insurance company that Oliver found the case issues, summarized them and sent them via email in a matter of hours. A new lawyer needed maybe? The conversation Oliver had with his mother tells a lot about why he is the way he is.
  21. Story still shows "in process"?
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    Chapter 16

    I was really concerned when I read that sentence that Noah or Jackson had or would get injured. Happily, I was wrong.
  23. Great chapter and a really wonderful story Kevin. Cian and Evan are really good together and I loved the way they grew into each other. I will miss reading about them. Thank you Kevin.
  24. I liked this getting to know you chapter, really shows their feelings for Montana and their old home. Looking forward to knowing more about Carter and his back story.
  25. At least he didn't kill Tyler to get him away from Owen. VBlew's theory is holding so far.
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