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Chapter 3 The most familiar stranger
dboggs9700 commented on BecSun's story chapter in Chapter 3 The most familiar stranger
If I were Tate, I would just want to hug Richard and tell him everything will work out for him. Unfortunately, Richard seems too fragile and broken for that yet. A beautifully written chapter and I can't wait to read more. -
Surprising chapter, I never expected them to find a place so quickly. I have no doubt that living together will be great for them and I would foresee no issues disrupting things between them.
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I am just glad Coach won the bet instead of Ben.
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Chapter 40 ~ The Gift of Belonging ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 40 ~ The Gift of Belonging ~
So happy that Reed now realizes that he has a real home at the ranch. I am anxious for the next chapter now though. I am guessing we will get a lot more information on Bertha and Dixie Mae. I'm sure that will be interesting and possibly scandalous. -
I had actually forgotten they had not stayed in the main cabin, but they had great accommodations in the other cabin regardless. Them buying the cabins feel like a given, especially after Hector fell in love with the area too. The pics were really great again.
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Maine: Mom Re-enters The Picture
dboggs9700 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Maine: Mom Re-enters The Picture
Especially when threatening to kill the dog was a $5,000 fine.- 51 comments
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Very intense chapter Tony, really a great read. Theory time: I am starting to believe that Caleb is an imprisoned soul and attached to this cabin. The happenings with the road, the noises, the knocking, and now the electric outage are the results of Caleb's captors. The captive soul took over Caleb's body in order to try and help Ryan and communicate.
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Maine: Mom Re-enters The Picture
dboggs9700 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Maine: Mom Re-enters The Picture
Well, it certainly didn't take Loretta and Tony long to hop in bed.😁 Looks like getting Bernie sent away will not be an issue but as we all know tragic accidents can occur before he gets there.- 51 comments
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I am anxious to get Richard's back story more than ever after this chapter. I have a feeling that a tissue warning will accompany it.
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Great start to part two. Very happy that Richard mellowed out after his father / son bonding activities.😁 I really do want Richard and Patrick get their differences settled.
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After that pass and goal, I think these two understand how much each one loves the other. Expressions and actions mean more than words would have.
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Things He Had No Right to Feel
dboggs9700 commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Things He Had No Right to Feel
What concerns me is Leah, Will or Tobey mistakenly letting something slip about Nick's crushes. That would be devastating for Nick whereas Luke and Kit could probably just deny and laugh it off. Luke's concern for Nick still has me leaning toward team Luke. -
This is not the type of story I would usually read BUT it's a Tony S story so of course I'll read it. I am interested in how and why Caleb just happened to show up at the cabin after midnight and chose to knock three times. I am definitely hooked and will see this story to the end.
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Very nice start to what looks like a good story. Tate seems interesting and I guess we will meet Richard in the next chapter.
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Excellent chapter and story. Julien and Oliver are two very complex characters, and everything seemed to work out for them. They made it to the end of the story together. At times the comments sometimes seemed contentious and messy. That just goes to show we all were enjoying our reading. If I offended anyone with my comments, I do apologize and I take no offence of anyone else's comments. Thank you for this story Kevin.
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I am surprised and overjoyed that Noah and Jackson are comfortable enough together to show their closeness to those on the bus. The dialogue throughout the chapter feels like a happily married couple.
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Chapter 4 - Rattlesnakes
dboggs9700 commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Rattlesnakes
This short snippet regarding Carter makes me think there is a story we don't know yet. I may be way off but @Mark Ponyboy Peters typically doesn't waste character dialogue. -
Harlan might be so very well endowed she can overlook other things.
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Excellent chapter with so much happening. Not much left to say after Summerabbacat 's comment. lol I just would like to see Amelia dealt with in as painfully as possible way. Jonathan's mother also needs put into her place too, maybe expose an affair she might be having with Harlan.
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This chapter was great, lots of things going down. I am really glad Juanita is okay and doesn't want Sky worrying about her. Great that Gianni is opening a restaurant BUT I am disappointed you did not include a pic of him. Happy that coming out seems to be going okay for John too. I am quite sure Hector will love the cabin and acreage.
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Two Verbs, Side by Side
dboggs9700 commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in Two Verbs, Side by Side
I actually saw hope for Julien and Oliver in this chapter. Conversations that Julien actually took Olivers opinions into consideration. I kept expecting Julien to bring up what he feels is Julien's compulsion to manage things and people when Oliver was considering his working future. Julien did not do that for a change, so I see hope for a lasting relationship. -
Enjoyable chapter. The blueberry farm kind of blows my mind because it sounds so possible. I am anxious to see exactly what you are going to show us that Naren / Aster are really capable of.
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The Ghost of October, Part Three of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Ghost of October, Part Three of Three
Great chapter and story! It reminded me of a really good campfire story with allot of clues that let you imagine whatever conclusion you choose. I am just glad that we got to see some happiness for Jason. -
Finally, the moment that we thought would never come. Beautifully written. Great to see the guys give Noah and Jackson the morning to themselves.
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Great chapter. Very happy that Kent is taking the college course and has settled into it well. I hope Kent does agree to be Randy's 'roommate'. They seem to have the maturity to make a real go of it. Getting away from the distractions of living in the barracks will be great both for their relationship but also Kent's studies.
