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Beautifully written chapter. Sexy and passionate. I am still thinking throuple like I commented previously. I can't wait to see how things move forward.
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You have your writing style, which I enjoy, and I am sure your decision to not change it is the right one.
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Sex scenes can also enhance a story when done well.
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I understand when AI research is used and then personalized by the author as part of the story. There are some authors that are using way too much AI written material in their stories and those need to be labeled AI created.
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Good chapter. Nice getting to know Violet better. She seems to like the script but is probably trying to decide if the expense of making it is too high. Carrington is still a question mark but the comment about him stepping in at the right time makes me question his character and connections if financing is necessary.
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This was a beautiful story with some unforgettable characters. I appreciate how you gave us HEA but left it open for the possibility of a follow-up story. Great writing as always and I'll be here for your next story.
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Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
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How soon will we be seeing a new story from you? You have a solid fan base, and you are missed!
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I am marking love for this chapter because you brought up the AI subject as a story subject and previously, I have not seen it mentioned. I hope a lot of readers have read this even though very few actually commented. This was the best of the AI chapters. But is that because you gave enough prompts and that forced AI to focus on plot versus descriptions?
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#TeamMarriedScot and holding solid. The scene with the bartender makes me wonder about James's straightness. Doesn't matter though, Harry is into the hot ginger. Not sure who will call who, but I feel sure Harry and Lewis will chat in the next day or two. Harry will accept Lewis's apology and then start over analyzing as per his norm.
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Hoping you treat Sean as he deserves.
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Levi definitely needs to go back to church and start talking to Father Costas regularly. He needs to be part of a tolerant forgiving church with a caring priest. Casey is still a question mark, is the friendliness sincere or is it a set up for an ambush. Great chapter as always!
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The parents are so cold hearted it is scary, must be Thomas's profession. Eric was exactly as I had guessed, disappointed he didn't have a business partner but supportive of his cousin. But the total fallout is still not known. Thomas's view of his son's education as drpaladin said is disturbing and disgusting.
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Kent seems to be settling in well on the surface. No mention of Ken so hard to totally gage where Kent's mind is. Great comradery amongst the small group including Kent and a true sense of trust is being built.
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I noticed the names also. The sex scene seemed better than in the other chapters. I still cannot believe how over done the descriptions are. My favorite is under a sky the color of a bruised plum. I have found myself looking for any possible signs of AI writing in chapters now as I read them.
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Hopefully Theo's high morals will result in his success finding the Wisdom Tree and eventually Vee and Jack.
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Great chapter. Just enough of the twist of Ryder being late to be a work by @mastershakeme. Beth is the greatest!
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Lewis needs therapy also.
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Tag has every right to be worried about being found. The hatred Zane seems to have for Tag will totally change Tag's life. Zane will disrupt every part of Tag's life, including Ash.
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Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
Love Shir, every story needs someone that clearly speaks what they think (@Summerabbacat does not count). I just hope that insulting Shayna's mother does not provoke Mannly's attackers to now target the entire ranch along with Mannly. -
There is a lack of much dialogue in all the chapters. Getting really bored with just adjective heavy descriptions.
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Still TeamMarriedScot here although maybe you should add TeamHarryAndLewisNeedsTherapy. I feel Lewis is a confused mess just like Harry. I believe Lewis is sincere in that he has feelings for Harry but is afraid of rejection. The flinch from Harry when Lewis went in for the kiss was a rejection in Lewis' mind so he fled, exactly as Harry would have done if Lewis had flinched. The two just need to sit down and actually have a real conversation.
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Thank you for catching my err. I just double checked and I confused Lewis with Aaron having kids. My bad.
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Really fun story. Loved the daughters' drama too. Was really nice to revisit those characters.
