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This very very good chapter sounds like a conclusion, a reset to the beginning where Henry refuses the watch. I may be wrong, maybe the reset won’t go that far, maybe it will go where Henry and Stoker are in love and the door that they choose will be 2010. I do not wish for the end of this story, but things got very complicated as it was happening….. Let’s wait and see what is coming….

I should add : It is not the word itself, it is the place it is put in the conversation.

John nodded. “Goodbye. That’s something we’llexplore together. Texture, layering, restraint. Ok we will see you next Saturday." And with that Erik headed home. To me the word Goodbye felt a bit drastic and rushed. It would have felt better this way : John nodded. « Yes, your are right. That’s something we'll explore together. Texture, layering, restraint. Ok Eric, goodbye and we will see you next Saturday." And with that Erik headed home. Do you see the difference, it went from a question from Eric to goodbye. It feels like he is rushed to leave, it is so sudden and without feeling. I hope you understand what I am talking about. My first language is French, so I maybe wrong.

Hum…. This story is getting pretty interesting with every chapter…. Wow, I can’t wait for the next one, I am like on the edge of my seat. Thank you Josh and good work.

Hi and thank you, I was worry about you. I am certain it took a while to write this chapter, the details are so real, that I felt I was standing right there. You wrote a much more complete description of what happened then what I was trying to imagined while I waited for this chapter to be released. Thank you and I look forward to reading the next one.

Is Kareem with Jim as assistant chauffeur?

Even if I know this is Reginald’s house, the phrase is written with the subject being Jim, so I think the name of who told Jim what they needed should appear … sorry but I thought so, but maybe I am wrong …

Once they were done, they headed out to the stables. Jim met them at the entrance and told him that they would be needing horses and that he would be coming with them on a picnic to grandmother’s favorite place and most likely a swim. I suppose it is Reginald who told him…

Did I missed the introduction of a new guest? Richard suddenly appeared during breakfast, where is he from…?

Wow, I hope he will survive. It is a cliffhanger of a sort …. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Good work.

This story is written with so much charm and nuances, we feel like if we were there watching it. Thanks to the author for that great piece about a place that not many people have visited, yet it conveys an atmosphere like nothing else. That is the gift of writing at its best to me and I enjoy it very much. Again thank you.

It was quite an adventure and I hope there is still others to come with them all. Thank you Geron. I was hoping for a last chapter with the prince and his entourage, ah well, I will use my imagination and fantasize about such a festive night, I am certain it will be magical for them all.

WOW! The plot thickens….Adventures getting not so simple after all, considering that you have to make decisions on someone else’s life.

"Fascinating...." like Mr Spock would say. Geron, I like this story, you are spoiling us with a chapter a day. Thank you, I am retired and enjoy reading stories like this one. Adventures pure and simple.

The more I read this story, the more it is very interesting. Will they be able to save the old Master from death? I guess we will have to wait for the next chapter. Thanks Geron.