Mark Arbour
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Of course you realize there are those who would disagree with you. :-)
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Brad's not going to blackmail Will, and for all of Will's posturing, he's not going to cause Brad significant problems. They love each other too much for that to happen.
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Remember that we're seeing this from Will's perspective. Brad has some good points in this too.
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It's something different. :-)
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I'm glad you liked the chapter. I don't think JJ is like Mary Ellen. Mary Ellen is a real schemer, while JJ isn't really worried enough about anyone else to scheme at all.
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I think that a relationship like Ryan and Shiloh have, where they're newly back together, is bound to be absorbing. I think it will be sad for Ryan when he comes up for air and realizes that Will is gone.
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I actually get why JJ is acting that way. He just wants the whole thing to vanish. He liked Michael, feels betrayed by him, but his primary mode here is avoidance.
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November 6, 2000 Malibu, CA Will “Morning,” I said in a grumpy tone. “You still jet lagged?” Leticia asked. “You have no idea,” I groused. Rosa came strolling into the kitchen. “Rosa, this is Leticia. She’s my new guard.” “It is nice to meet you,” Rosa said nicely. Rosa said her name but slaughtered it, cracking me up. “Just call me Tish,” she told Rosa. “She is not a handsome man,” Rosa said, grinning at me. “I molest the handsome men,” I jok
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Thanks! I'm glad you like the two narrators. They are very different, and it sometimes takes some effort to switch gears.
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Alexandra and Elizabeth sharing a cell...now that would be funny. I agree that her flaw may be in underestimating Wade, but she would see Trevor and Wade's father as being motivated by something besides friendship or love, and that may be even more dangerous for her.
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I'm glad you're enjoying both narrators. It sometimes makes it hard to write, because I'll have my mind locked in one character and it will be time to write the other, but for the most part, it's been fun.
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Why thank you! Elizabeth Danfield makes for a good villain, and gives me lots of fodder.
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She's like a spider with a huge web.
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Ritalin or Adderall. Only you and the pharmaceutical companies can help you.
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November 5, 2000 Escorial, CA Wade It was a beautiful morning, so I’d opted to go for a ride. I’d taken JP’s stallion, because he didn’t get as much exercise, and because I wanted a challenge. He could be difficult to handle, so most people opted to ride the mare instead. I squeezed my legs and pulled on the rein, and he responded, breaking into a canter. We were both enjoying the ride across JP’s acreage when my phone rang. I reined the horse in, pulling him back to a walk as I
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I've been out of town, and swamped, so it's unlikely I'll make my self-imposed posting deadline this Saturday. I just wanted to let you all know.
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You really can't go wrong by picking a Libby Drew story to read.
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I'm used to it. Gay guys are such size queens.
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That seems pretty reasonable.
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I'm sure George will be fine, but it is certainly a long voyage!
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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I thought having Gatling back would be good, and a full crew for a voyage to the Indies is not a bad idea.
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Yep, those are three big issues.
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Cock. I've been sucking cock. Just like Wade. LOL. Maybe Wade will share with JP in the next chapter. ;-)
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I understand what you mean. Wade is just so much calmer than Will, and much less impulsive.
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Thanks! Well, you'll get to see both. They'll probably both be ugly. :-)
