OK, I'll admit that when I read chapter 12 I was thinking "if he goes there I really won't like it". But you did and you did it very well. I have questions about how well 17 year olds will deal with the aftermath but I guess we'll see in the next chapters.
As a reader I will say that I really dislike serif fonts for onscreen reading. I have set all of my browser fonts to be sans serif. If a story forces a font that I don't like I turn off the style sheet. In the case of long stories with many chapters I have (as a learning exercise) gone as far as to download the whole thing along with the style sheet and changed the css. Then I just read my copy.
Agreed, I think that this will make things interesting in the future.
Yep, this seems to be exactly the wrong thing to do with Aaron if he wants to help him be stronger and more assertive.
Actually I would be concerned with this but since you've made this prediction and with your record with predictions I don't think we need be worried.
Hell yes. The first computer I worked on had less memory than my cell phone and took up a 20 x 40 foot room.
The person below me has one of the first IBM pc's (1981) in the garage.
Nope, the beach is 10 minutes away. I can go anytime I want and it's just littered with collage kids (never too old to look you know).
the person below me thinks fall is the best season of the year.
I've often wondered where that 10% number came from. It seems that
"Nearly 10% of Self-Proclaimed 'Straight' Men Only Have Sex With Men".
Check this out Web MD article
So I guess it's 10% of Straight men that are a little bit bent.
(at least in New York City).
I have to agree with you there CJ. But that leaves hope for Garret and Billy once Garret exposes her for the vile bitch that she is and suitably disposes of her.
I remember this one from when it was first posted to CRVBOY. I enjoyed it then and I am looking forward to more from these characters.
Edit: damn typos
What can I say. It's a slow night and I'm bored so I played with the board stats and member list.
There are 2,810 members. Of those only 42 qualify for
this but only 12 actually have it.
the other 30 have
this
or
this
or
this
or any of a number of others.
Below 250 posts you get some number of these
Of the 2,800+ members 512 have 5 or more posts.
990 have one or more posts.
And all of these numbers will have changed by the time I post this.
But I did learn a little more about how all of this works.
Damn, who made the rule that every story with gay teenagers has to have sex in it?
Seriously, if you don't think that it belongs there then it doesn't. It is after all, your story.