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Oh Oh Oh I was the first to comment - how unusual
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Oh Oh Oh Wow, I wondered what was going to follow! did not see Dorian come into the picture quite so soon, but I'm hooked line and sinker with the first sentence... Looking forward to more especially in the way you write your prose. (did I say that right??)
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Elvish bits and pieces coming together slowly, what piece will be next ? Seems like a war is brewing coming form the outer lands, that the elves are/have been preparing for.🥐
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Nice chapter but nasty cliff hanger on.... I know you have been nice in posting chapters but please be NICER, and don't cliff hang me out... OK ? Lovin each chapter gabz !
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Ha I Think I have read too much, and have gotten ahead of myself {The butler did it}
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Hey guys, Mickey was always going to play, sooner or later, his first and only sex, what else is out there ? better or worse ? I'm glad I missed chapters and have caught up to a point. He was going to look, search, compare ! Compare to what he had. Was it the real thing or had he not reached it yet ?? Mark is not stating a claim of possession (I learnt that previously) but establishing his claim to the previous relationship, friend and companion + lover.
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After all that has been said and alluded to... She (Gabrielle) must be blonde {movie star blonde} or thick as two short planks. I know you have addressed this in later chapters but it is pissing me off that (SHE'S NOT LISTENING) say no more but I do like the story line. Maybe as good as your story To love and Hold - which I LOVED🖖
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I planned a whole spiel, but nothing.. Love Marilyn, Love Mickey (not sure if it is MicKie or MyKie) but wary of Mark - but don't ask me why
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No excuses, Droughtquake, but in those moments of passion don't we all lose reason and think it won't happen to me as this is wonderful and feels good etc etc..... But I whole heartdly agree with your comments and will endorse them as I can.
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I'm really hoping so or it could just be possessive, a conquest as it were?
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I finally fucked Mickey! I actually took his virginity and made him mine this afternoon! So what is wrong with me that I find this comment disturbing ? Maybe the author can enlighten me or put me in my place for being skeptical. Finding the pace a bit fast, but can accommodate - (liken it)
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I'm glad you are reading as it a great brilliant and beautiful tale (my sobs aside)
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OH YEAH THANK YOU, it raises many issues, doesn't it, Do they try and keep Alice incognito ? how ? isolate Alice ? Where ? When ? Does Phuong have an indication of what will happen ? and what shall she advise ? Does Daddy O and Daddy Pat have an input ? maybe Goldie herself ? To many questions and I hope that you are prepared to answer as this story can and will grow depending on you the author. Maybe this is it, However you continue, it has been a great honour to read. Thank YOU
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from those comments I can expect another 35 + chapters ???? ha ha fooled myself...... Love the story, love the characters, keep it going no matter how long it takes. I've 5 years before retiring so I will ask for sooner instalments. 😁
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Just a quikkie, you introduced David as Sir David Carpenter-Bell then referred to him as Sir David Campbell-Bell 6 paragraphs latter.
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Iv'e been proved wrong, as in the last 2 chapters so I will hold all. (the butler did it) Miss White ,your turn
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Oh how the f***k was I wrong on this one, but I still have faith, there is more than one in this
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“Sounds like the kitten turned into a lion,” Ceriann said when Drew joined her and Jeff at the kitchen table with a mug of hot chocolate. Slowly, as he drank coffee and chatted with his sister and oldest friend, Drew began to relax. Sorry Nephylim, this stood out for me.. The opening lines of 2 consecutive paragraphs. minor spelling or words out of context not so much I would hazard a guess that it is Drew and Jeff's Boss (could be, maybe, probably that I'm wrong) but such is life. Loving the story and the way you keep us intrigued. Can't wait for Wednesday - Thursday in my country.
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Hopefully not detracting from the story. Thanks Wayne, I've read this before, but I'm doing it again, and it is exciting as it was the first time. Love the story and the way it's presented
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I've come back and read my review. I apologise CraftingMom, I've sounded like a spoilt child denied my sweets when I want them, my apologies. I understand depression as I am experiencing it myself. My doctor took me through several question and answer forms - NOT WORKING......Drugs prescribe - no thank you - ??? don't know the answer.... listen to you daughters, they'll help, but first and foremost THINK OF YOURSELF, YOUR DAUGHTERS & etc GRANDKIDS !! then us, we will still be here waiting and if not then new readers will be here
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Thank you for your commitment in keeping up with this story. It has griped me and I felt the absence, Welcome back, (although you never left). I wonder if Mason plays a part with Bastion & co in helping the sorting out of Trevor ( I hate the word interrogation). Look forward, stay straight (ha) focused and live your life, You FIRST, this all come's second, but we'll be here for you.
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Further to my comments, a question from the quote "Wolfgang can't help if he can touch someone and sense/feel their desire and emotion. You're right, he's a reflection of those he contacts. He still retains himself, but that reflection can be very strong." Dose he contract though's strong emotions ? from Larry or will they play silent in the background to a relationship with Jed? I'm asking as underlined?
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Wolfgang smiled and stepped forward. "Hi. I'm Wolfgang." He looked around at everyone. "You probably remember Eric Caldwell?" Faces went pale, and there were a few nods from the assembled group. Wolfgang continued, "I'm a private investigator, and I was hired by his wife to figure out what happened to him. That's my goal." also the passage: They shook, and slowly, the blood drained from Wolfgang's face. Does it mean that he knows he done it (simply put) , was he a party to it? or was he being forced to ignore it? or is he protecting someone else?, maybe Wolfgang picked up on something else entirely which does not relate to the killings but something else sinister? Love the story so far.. keep going, I'm a fan
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Skirmish in the Chambers
PJGee commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Skirmish in the Chambers
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come on Craftingmom, 6/29 and 7/29 for episodes, chapters and now we are in 2019, what is the hold up........I'm waiting O I'm so waiting..... waiting waiting. You have a wonderful story here and I can't wait for more. and NO I do not know how to write a story, any story or a story with meaning in any shape or form. That's your job, so get with it ps. love what I've read and re read, Come on MOM.
