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Wolfgang smiled and stepped forward. "Hi. I'm Wolfgang." He looked around at everyone. "You probably remember Eric Caldwell?" Faces went pale, and there were a few nods from the assembled group. Wolfgang continued, "I'm a private investigator, and I was hired by his wife to figure out what happened to him. That's my goal." also the passage: They shook, and slowly, the blood drained from Wolfgang's face. Does it mean that he knows he done it (simply put) , was he a party to it? or was he being forced to ignore it? or is he protecting someone else?, maybe Wolfgang picked up on something else entirely which does not relate to the killings but something else sinister? Love the story so far.. keep going, I'm a fan
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Skirmish in the Chambers
PJGee commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Skirmish in the Chambers
The former YEAH , the latter, AH MAYBE (don't think so) -
come on Craftingmom, 6/29 and 7/29 for episodes, chapters and now we are in 2019, what is the hold up........I'm waiting O I'm so waiting..... waiting waiting. You have a wonderful story here and I can't wait for more. and NO I do not know how to write a story, any story or a story with meaning in any shape or form. That's your job, so get with it ps. love what I've read and re read, Come on MOM.
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Yinx (taken again in chains) no problem (given up hope maybe?? or just morose) Laneer - must be OK (don't know how or why) must have a come back.... as the author has completed the chapter in his perspective (narrative) so he's alive... I was fooled earlier, but it was the test werewolf that was on the mountain top when things went shitty. Loving the story as all others ask... more ?...When???
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Just a hunch and a feeling that Bro (Amara) is against the bro Aria- ????
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I din't love it in chapter 1, but bring in chapter 2 ... all on board. Due to up brining WHAT can he think will happen??? as WHAT does he think will happen ?? Be afraid of his uncle ?? Be afraid of Who will meet when he goes to school ?? Who Cares.. ME I want more, and you are the one to supply otherwise All hope is lost PS - Love the want more Blindsided
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“Not anymore.” I rejected. “I’m making my peace with it all. If you’ll let me, I’d love to try this.” OK Loved the chapter even though crying throughout. Good Bad Ugly who knows but from that statement I get the feeling that maybe Ryder is going to lay the foundations that will help ground Oli's and his in the future of Unity. Raw Base Roots, Family first, Band 2nd Important but not equal to. Family = Unity (in the larger sense of the term) but don't heed "United we stand divided we fall" black sheep will be shorn as when required (sorry Brandon Joe etc)
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Chapter 6 Shifters Are Dying
PJGee commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Shifters Are Dying
Been there, Read that, but I'm back for more, still dripping tears as I know what's going to happen but I want to re live it again A truly amazing story that I will relish as I re read. My Thanks Hedstall greatly and repeatedly. Thanks -
What a perfect Pyramid 1 Human 1 2 Vampires 1 1 3 Werewolves 1 1 1
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Hi Craftimom (albeit Craftingmom) While I wait for the next, I'll start again from the beginning, too good a read to lose sight of the events so far
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I'm lovin each episode, I get a felling of De ja vue with Mark and Oli and constantly think back to the early days of Teddy and Ryder. Similar but without the sort of aggression factor. Waiting anxiously for the next, but don't rush.
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Love how it is headed (got me horny too), but what about GRANDPA and the GRANDAUGHTER, they got Konshu (spelt wrong?) guessing that something is afoot (always wanted to say that). what are they lining up? - pairing them off ? for what future purpose ? the author remains in control to let us see, YOU GO PERSON (see politically correct ?). LOVE THIS STORY I REALLY DO....
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I was not a shifter story reader and I had by-passed the Title a few times. One day I opened the story and was hooked completely, I did not get to the stage of Morningstar Monday's as I was a late comer. I agree with all the previous comments and cannot find else to add. Waiting for book 2, but no hurry, I'll keep re-reading.
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I have read this story twice and each time it is a revelation. Don't worry yourself into editing and editing, it is great as it stands. I'm glad that AI saved each chapter along the way, so at least I can say I have an original. While waiting for the next episode I will definitely be reading again.. Don't second guess yourself in what is a great story well written.
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I am sorry that the story intrigues me so much. I had to listen to someone who had enough In both could the Worlds He listened But Jealosy is above Jelosey can rise It can be beaten WITH THE ONE YOU DON'T LOVE (SORRY NOT USA
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I understand the comments and would like Chris to succeed, I can't help thinking that there is more to this. Childhood envy / hero worship (as stated which has been exploited (how far and by who else?) Firstly I do not think that because of Chris's statements, that the sentence handed down can be changed although there (I think) is a proviso that the current alpha may determine otherwise.Anyway wolfm will prove me and all others wrong, Why ? because it is his story... given to us and gratefully accepted Long story short .. there is more than meets the eye
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Yes can see mating bond forming with an interlude of aggression and possibly a crusade, is there, another kidnapping or abduction ? Vampires will play a part but so what ? Who's Josh but a player in what will happen next and in the next for see able chapters
