Johnathan Colourfield
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Hi Everyone in the Lounge Posting this just in case an Admin doesn't have time to post it Just reminding everyone that 11.59pm tonight (Greenwich Mean Time - UK time) is the deadline to hand in a completed edited version of your entries for the novella contest. That is in roughly 9 hours time!!! Hopefully we get a last minute surge of entries for the contest this evening Remember there are prizes for the winners ^^ So get writing (in panic mode) and send your entries in! Refer to Cia's announcement if you need more details And most importantly GOOD LUCK TO ALL THE ENTRANTS!!!
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Someone somewhere is reviewing the situation and is looking for a little black and white cat… Looking back at the old journal did make me laugh. I completed it; there was no more that could be put into it. No more I wanted to go into there. Collections of old things from childhood television programmes to the great details of my personal life. A journal of impossible letters. I kept all of the letters, emails, photographs and I put them all in this one little sketchbook. I’ve collected it ove
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Someone somewhere is about to learn the answer to one of the most philosophical questions known to man… I guess you could say that I was glad. Glad that he loved me. All I ever wanted was love. That eternal connection that binds us all. He was to stay. Isaac was to stay with me. He was to move over. Just for me. The day he moved in was just so brilliant… I thought he was going to stay in a local hotel; I already had the idea of booking him in to the best hotel in town. Isaac was s
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Someone somewhere was about to find out what it was to love, and what it was to hate… Late. The moon is dark tonight. I often look at the moon. So late. I could go to the bar. I could pick up one man. Just the one. No need to be greedy. I could take him and he could be mine on Hemmingway Avenue. Cameron wouldn’t be happy. He didn’t want other men in the house. But there were so many. So much ripe meat. So much to be mine. Virgins. So many of them and all of them cou
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Someone somewhere is about to bite the bullet and tell someone how they truly feels. … Your Loving Friend Cameron… I read that email so many times. It was strange. I had emotion for him back then. I pitied him. I really did. I never did take him. I never did become united with him. Too much effort and I learnt after the disaster with Lucian that I was never going to go back to then, although, Isaac was a fun experience. Still… Besides, Cameron had moved to next door to Lucian by some
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Someone somewhere is about to have an experience that they will never forget. **phone beeps** ‘Hi yeah. It’s Liam. Pick up the phone when you get this message. I miss you honey. Love you’ I listened to the message and then put the phone back on the desk and returned to my AP Chemistry studies. I had to do this essay in order to at least pass freshman year. God knows what I will be like in senior year. Probably broken down from all the stress. Now this essay was worth a lot of my grad
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Someone somewhere is going to read the masquerade I am about to create This story starts on a dark and stormy night… No. I’m shitting you. The story I am about to recite to you is about my life. Well, this character’s life. I’m a character in the great novella we call life. The name I am about to recall will not make much sense to you at the moment. But it will in due course. This is the name that I am going to recite to you. It is not very common. It can be heard through space, thro
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‘Scars Upon Your Heart’ explores the lives of three boys, from teenage years to adulthood. One boy was forever locked in thought about what he could have had, one boy haunted by the mistakes that he can never go back on and the final boy who suffered for the greatest gift of all. Love.
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thank you very much Sara I love dark and mysterious but not depressing ^^ thanks for the lovely review ^^
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To me sexy can be anything. He just has to be taller than me (i like height) :$ As long as he can have a good laugh and is a little bit immature i dont mind eitherway
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What do/would you call your significant other?
Johnathan Colourfield replied to Cyhort's topic in The Lounge
Okay i'll marry you now And its partner for me ^^ or boyfriend or all the mushy names we have for each other which i wont be sharing -
For me it would be 'Repairman's Lust' by Rush Such a beautiful short tale Either that or 'Curved Balls' by Nephylim
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you mean she
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*Huggles* We love you too We all are in a learning process not all of us are perfect Everyone can take the initiative to improve Its just a case of who notices the chance to improve ^^ you are doing really well Com and i'm sure there are many more great stories to come from you
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Happy Birthday!!!
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Aww Nephy *glomps you* I know you are struggling but i'm wishing you all the best. My thoughts are always with you Glad the lack of work is good for you And i'm so glad the morphine works As bob said, don't be afraid of morphine just take it in proportion. Hope you dont entirely dissapear from us I would miss you badly
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Wowwee Thanks for the detailed review Dan :DThe faux nature of the initial introduction was quite deliberate. I love having contrasts in my writing :)It was deliberately loose It was meant to be a haze... A haze that so many people will have been lost behind ^^ thats what i specialise sex that isnt really sex but is still sex Thanks very much :)I'm honoured :$ *goes and celebrates* hehe
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hehe Maria to a T Well done mark!
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Session Two: 20th June 2011
Johnathan Colourfield posted new chapter in Johnathan Colourfield's Writing Exercises
Excercise One: Craft Scenes and Character Development Practice. Write in 350 words or less a description of a place to represent a character. However, the character cannot be present and no people can be present. Imagine the character through the descriptions of the place. The Kicker: The Character: A woman who works at a bakery who just won the lottery. The rolling pin was laid there on the wooden worktop. The pasty was only half rolled. A headscarf was draped over the chair. The cushion was -
Has anyone looked at the new Pottermore thing thats coming out the same day as the film?
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What a beautiful little story Nephy I felt so sorry for Mikie, being stuck in the middle And Gabriel but he got what he deserved in Jake Would love to see more from these two
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Aww thanks Kevin I did want it to work on a patch work style you are going to like my next one Its even more 'patchy'
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Awww dont worry about it I'm sure we can find a place that has a bench or if all else fails i'm sure we can sit somewhere inside to eat There are alot of seating places in London anyway I'm not able to walk very far cuz of my ankles so you are not alone Westie! And i agree with Paya noone wants anyone to suffer for everyone
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Oh yes Desire is a key idea in any piece of literature. Stetson was a very deep character and when i have my current projects finished i'd like to go back to all of anthologies and see what i can expand about them and see what stories i can create I mean lugh had 'It was a...' why can't i expand my series?
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Hey Cia Thanks thats exactly how i wanted the reader to feel. With reference to the confusion, that is how the reader should feel. The Stetson Boy is a very confusing character and its like as i say in the blurb 'Patches' of memory, the characters arent sure what they remember and what they forget about the character. Thanks for the comments
