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Johnathan Colourfield

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  1. its not entirely over www.pottermore.com
  2. Ooo i will sign it later And why are you withdrawing We miss you!
  3. haha i had a similar thing but not so extreme
  4. For me is the key is to have a target and if you exceed the target then excellent but if you don't then not to worry. Eg. for the novella contest i had a target of around 32k, it was 30k but i wasn't too worried because I had told the story i had wished to tell Just go with the flow, if its longer then okay but don't be afraid if a story doesnt strectch too far Hope this helps
  5. Belated birthday wishes
  6. Oh wow Your place is really pretty Can i come over?
  7. Happy Birthday Dear
  8. I had the same feeling when i first joined. I had always written little things but i have never really got through to actual readers. When i joined here i started to post about a year after and i was happy with the response. Mostly positive and one or two critical comments Then I met some wonderful people like Lugh, Demetz, Tiger, Myr etc. after joining and then the new people just kept falling in like yourself, the mini you that is Maria and the darling that is Cia. I couldn't believe that I had made so many amazing friends. GA has changed my life, before GA i was shy, quiet and i wouldn't speak to anybody. Now i feel so emotionally and physically liberated its amazing. I also through this place learnt what it was to love. If you read my story 'Scars Upon Your Heart' it is the tale of when i first joined and the boy i first had a crush on. I love this place It is like a second home. I've made so many friends and i have so many more to make. I'm so excited to finally meet a few of my good friends in August and to see the faces behind the screen. Especially Yours Nephy! Thank you everyone on the moderation team who keep this place together. Without it, I wouldn't be the person I am today
  9. On behalf of all of the entrants and voters in the Novella Contest i would like to extend my thanks for coordinating and promoting this wonderful experience. I'm looking forward to the next time we do this sort of thing. Hopefully I will be able to place next time hehe But those who got the places deserved them with their great quality stories. Also, thank you for editing for me. This story was a challenge because you know alternate viewpoint is incredibly difficult to handle, but you put up with me and you carried on If people would like to throw a thank you in Cia's direction, don't be afraid to comment in this thread
  10. Not my cup of tea when it comes to writing but i cannot fault your style and your technical ability. You both outshine alot of good authors here. Sadly, not my sort of story topic but we all have our likes and dislikes don't we? Congratulations on winning the both of you
  11. I didn't get to read your whole piece KC but i loved what i read of it. Your characterisation of the female was brilliant, I was genuinely convinced it was written by a female author Congratulations!
  12. Has anything every inspired you to write?A line in a song? random quote? even a line in a conversation? Im going to give you a line. you can write as much or as a little as you want. I'd like to see what you come up with. Under a canopy of fluorescing stars that were all too quick to fade. The stars were bright that evening. They were sat together under the sky. ‘The skies are multicoloured. Why Jarrod?’ The child was worried. ‘Because the stars are moving. See a shooting star.’ The
  13. Hello everyone I haven't done much writing lately because i've been taking a lesson from Lugh He's been teaching me about Planning and Plotting All very good I was very heavy on planning spending a third of the text planning which is stupid. But now I use only around 10% to plan something so YAY Very proud of myself. I have my amazing beta's still wandering through my work They work wonders <3 From Lugh's writing lesson i have two new stories that i've developed. A HP Fan Fiction (Around 30k planned) and then a Whore House story (Around 27k planned). I also have a story with a writing class that finishes next week So all in all i'm doing well I submitted my Legends Anthology I still need to write my Aftermath, I'm doing a stage play. Which if i'm unsuccessful i'll just change it into a short story There is always a back up I dont have a question this time Thanks Lugh
  14. Life repeats. Everyone lives then everyone dies. But what would you do, if you kept reviving? What would you do if you had no choice in the matter? And what would you do if someone just kept killing you without knowing how or why? Follow me as you discover one of the darkest fallen angels of this, or any time…
  15. “What do you plead boy…” “Guilty.” “Then I sentence you to…” ** The Boy awoke. He looked around. He was in some kind of hospital bed. There were wires coming from him in every direction. You could hardly tell the difference between boy and wire. ‘Mother?’ the Boy cried out weakly. ‘I’m over here son.’ She spoke in her calm tone. ‘Come closer, I cannot see you.’ ‘You see, the doctors told me to keep at a safe distance.’ ‘Why mummy?’ ‘Because you are not safe.’ She ey
  16. An Owl the being of wisdom and intelligence
  17. Exercise One: Place yourself or a character/s in a high-speed chase. What are the circumstances that led to it? What are the consequences? It really wasn’t my fault. I dived into the car, afraid of what had happened back then. Someone shot into my back window and I ducked. Do you know how hard it is to drive when you can’t see much of the road ahead of you. Well, I had seen my mother off to her keep fit class and noticed the bald men in the black van behind me. I thought nothing of it a
  18. Happy Birthday
  19. Happy Birthday! <- meant to be flags but they're axes. Oh well
  20. Exercise One: Imagine it’s Christmas time and you still have a lot of your shopping to do, so you’re skipping work. Your boss won’t accept “I’m not feeling well” as an excuse. He requires a more outlandish reason. Write an excuse that starts with “You’re not going to believe this, but…” and ends with the phrase, “… and that’s why I can’t come to work today.” “You’re not going to believe this but I’m afraid.” I could feel my boss sneering at me from across the phone line. “What are you afra
  21. RIP Amy. Your music will be truly missed.
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