Johnathan Colourfield

What a beautiful little story Nephy I felt so sorry for Mikie, being stuck in the middle And Gabriel but he got what he deserved in Jake Would love to see more from these two

Aww thanks Kevin I did want it to work on a patch work style you are going to like my next one Its even more 'patchy'

Awww dont worry about it I'm sure we can find a place that has a bench or if all else fails i'm sure we can sit somewhere inside to eat There are alot of seating places in London anyway I'm not able to walk very far cuz of my ankles so you are not alone Westie! And i agree with Paya noone wants anyone to suffer for everyone

Oh yes Desire is a key idea in any piece of literature. Stetson was a very deep character and when i have my current projects finished i'd like to go back to all of anthologies and see what i can expand about them and see what stories i can create I mean lugh had 'It was a...' why can't i expand my series?

Hey Cia Thanks thats exactly how i wanted the reader to feel. With reference to the confusion, that is how the reader should feel. The Stetson Boy is a very confusing character and its like as i say in the blurb 'Patches' of memory, the characters arent sure what they remember and what they forget about the character. Thanks for the comments

Hehe glad you enjoyed it I love mystery myself and i've never written anything like Stetson so i thought it was worth a go

So glad you enjoyed it Mark I enjoyed writing it I just love having that element of mystery in my work

In my belief he was real just not of this earth. I've left it open should i want to use him again I mean i think i have a thing for ginger hair Thanks Q

Hehe Thank you very much Nephy :)I feel like i'm maturing Everyone is so willing to help its great :)I'm so glad everyone 'got' Stetson He's a very good character and his place is yuck When i was writing it i cringed

Hehe I didn't think it did either But he truly was a walk on the wild side Besides i just came up with a good idea for legends and glad i didnt save this one Thanks for the compliment

Hehe that was a very fun conversation He is very sexy i will admit glad you liked him, this was my first try at doing this sort of thing

Sorry if you guys sent a PM in the last day or two. My inbox actually filled up i've gone on a deleting spree so if you could resend it would be awesome

I've set up a closed Google Group for all GA Gatherings so any future discussion involving time and dates and locations can be located there. Its private and not on the Google Groups Directory so it has utmost privacy. If people who are coming could PM me their email addresses it would be greatly appreciated so i can send out invitations. I will send out invitations for people who I have email addresses for and then members can invite members etc. A whole chain of love Jesus i sound like an Admin... Help me

That was so funny. I love it

Exercise One: Write a one hundred word sentence Write a one hundred word sentence, of course it seems like a hard job being never sure what to write about or how to finish the sentence; then by analysing the way you construct a sentence it is possible to show that a sentence is constructed out of several clauses and different words all fused together to become one singular description of the one hundred word sentence that I put before you; unless of course you object to having one sentence pu

This is going to be where i am going to publish the writing exercizes that i have discovered and been directed to by members and through the Writing Prompts Forum. Enjoy reading my small little tales. I am going to attempt at least four exercises a week for your enjoyment.

What a beautiful little story I loved Kim she was so bitchy it was awesome When i normally read something like this i don't get drawn in easily but i was instantly drawn in from the start, the start felt like the opening to an action thriller but it just descended into this beautiful love story. I'm with Cia. More please. You can handle writing things for tommorow please?

Well we've decided that due to expense we are only going to come up for the Saturday from the morning till late evening to meet the group. A picnic for a few hours would be a wonderful lunch and opportunity. We hope to take away a chance to meet some amazing people and see one or two of my favourite authors A chance to sit around on the grass and talk about stuffz. Sounds like absolute bliss hehe So would an event in the morning be viable, then the lunch and then an additional event on the saturday? (as an advance warning, no facebook photos of me or my partner (chaocontrol6) because my parents dont know about GA and his parents don't support us ) On the subject of the visit, I volunteer myself to put the itinerary together for the general visit and who is arriving when and where etc etc. and what is happening at what times and if we set up a email thing round possibly so people can have an updated version of the information over the coming weeks?

i added a review but i'd just like to say that to be constructing something creative in terms of poetry is very good at his age I just wonder if he'll be writing like his mum in a few years time...

oh wow Well done Efan! I was writing poetry at his age also Very very deep for a child of his age A good construction and well developed initial story! I would hope to see more from him in the near future

Happy Birthday Bob

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Quarterly Anthologies run by GA Staff Next one is due on the 8th and the theme is 'Walk On The Wild Side' look in the anthology forum or PM Graeme for details

Hehe maybe try the anthologies out?

The best idea is to try to change perspective. If you usually write 'He did this and She did that' try doing it as 'I did this and I followed her because she did that'. Alot of my work jumps around the pov and thats why i like writing in my voice but i do LOTS of different things each time i go to write i guess i'm really just finding my voice. If you have a voice stick to it but if you want to try something doing then just go for it! What have you got to lose?