Foopy

How much would it hurt, To say goodbye. Just jump out the window, see if you could fly. The world cannot see, How you crumble in pain. Every morning you wake, Just to be hurt again. You look in the mirror, but hate what you see. You write on your arm, create a red Sea. Your parents can't stand, To look at your face. Curse your name, drive you from this place. Screaming at you, “Abomination” they yell, with hate filled eyes they damn you to Hell. Cryin

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hehehehe, i love cute animals! And yes, LOLcats is hilarious

This continues to be excellent, though i do have one complaint: There isnt more for me to read yet!!! Heeheheh, keep up the wonderful work.

Great chapter, i love it so far. Vampires are always great, and this is perfect

It has now been approved! Enjoy and let me know what you think!

Harry has been having dreams since the end of his Fifth Year at Hogwarts, some of them terrifying, and others intriguing and almost memory-like. Even more troubling, his magic seems to have turned traitor, doing what it will and causing general havoc. What awaits Harry in this tale?

Having finished the huge meal, courtesy of Molly, and several horrid potions, courtesy of Madame Pomfrey, Harry and Dumbledore sat down to further discuss their findings. The headmaster was peering at him over his half-moon spectacles, appearing to weigh his options, making Harry shift uncomfortably. After the professor’s hands-off approach from the previous year, he wasn’t sure if this sudden closeness was a good thing. Dumbledore seemed to have come to a decision, as he leaned forward and pe

Thanks Rilbur Glad you are reading Also, chapter 4 is now finished. You can find it here: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/fooplaya/HarryPotterandtheTri-FoldProphecy/4

Sitting down for afternoon tea with Minerva McGonagall, Albus Dumbledore did not expect to see Arthur Weasley's head appear in his fireplace. “Albus, Minerva, are the two of you alone?” asked Mr. Weasley. “Yes, of course.” Professor Dumbledore was disturbed by the distress in Arthur's voice. “Are Molly and the children alright?” “What? Oh, yes of course. Harry, on the other hand...” Arthur cut his sentence off with a worried look behind him. “What has

Draco Malfoy was torn. His mother was no longer the cold and distant person she had been the past few years, but instead she was warm and compassionate, like she had been when he was a child before the return of the Dark Lord. He was thrilled to have his mother back, but he was distressed because he felt he should be miserable due to his father's stay in Azkaban. The child in Draco wanted his father back, however he also knew that he was not the same man that Draco knew as a child: Lucius Malfoy

Somewhere in a dense forest Flashes of light filled the sky and cries of agony and shouts of rage rang through the otherwise silent air. The great walls of the Citadel were ablaze with glowing blue and white symbols, and they were pulsing rapidly. However, as the battle around the tower raged on, the pulsing grew less and less frequent, and the light of the symbols was slowly fading. In the midst of such a battle, there was a small meeting, in a closed and dimly lit room in the

i LOVE being snuggled/huggled/cuddled/etc. I am such an affectionate person usually... I feel like i should have been a cat (maybe a tiger... they are nice!)

unfortunately for me, even if it was 30% of people, it would only be me... only 5 people in my faculty this year... (although looking at the OTHER years could increase the numbers, but at 10% most we would get would be 3...)

Already said this in chat, but happy birthday

Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Liukas Soli TJ - that was excellent! So sad yet so moving! Very well done! Date: 12/06/2010 06:02 AM [Respond] Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Agaith This is incredible TJ and this is why I sometimes prefer poetry it shows the heart and soul more profoundly than a story. Hope this isnt you in the poem. Excellent poem Tj well done Date: 12/03/2010 08:24 AM [Respond] Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Quonus10 TJ, we talked about this, but let me add my comment here too. First this is heart wrenching, the emotions you put into this is moving. Second, you are very talented, clearly when moved you can channel your feeling in a way that reaches people, please keep at it. Last if this is in anyway how you feel, I swear to you, it will get better. Nothing is ever as bad as it seems. There are so many options for people as beautiful and talented as you. Never lose sight of that. Date: 12/02/2010 09:23 PM [Respond] Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Nephylim It happens too often. This is so very powerful. It should be distributed generally to all parents, especially those of gay children so they can see the results of their actions. Parents in situations like this should be charged with criminal offences Maybe if they did then there would be no more.Author's Response: Thanks Nephylim, I totally agree. Parents need to wake up and see that their words and actions have impacts far greater than they could ever think. Date: 12/02/2010 02:17 PM Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: bugeye Powerful and challenging.Author's Response: Thanks sam Date: 12/02/2010 02:37 AM Title: Sadness and Joy Reviewer: Kavrik So beautiful and so sad. My heart goes out to anyone that feels the way the narrator of this poem feels. I found this to be incredibly moving.Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it Date: 12/02/2010 12:59 AM

Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Nephylim A nice chapter indeed. I am intrugued about where this is going. Iam quite interested in the differences and subtleties worked around the original story, the parts not told. Nice workAuthor's Response: Thanks I try to make sure to keep interest piqued, and not give out too much information at the same time... because some things aren't meant to be known yet :wink: Date: 11/06/2010 07:11 AM Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Nephylim A perfect place to stop so I can catch my breath. This is a lovely story and I am looking forward to the next chapter. I particularly like the way you described the build up of tension before the power erupted in Harry. I am looking forward to finding out where the power came from. I can't help but make connections with the civilisation you were talkig about at the beginning and am looking forward to seeing if I am rightAuthor's Response: *doesn't say anythign* I guess you'll just have to wait and see Date: 11/06/2010 07:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nephylim Every writer benefits from an editor because they polish the story and find errors we skim over. I don't think you need to worry too much. There were only one or two tiny errors but there was nothing at all that spoiled the flow of the story and every story has an occasional slip. I am liking the story very much. You are taking it easy and building up the tension nicely. I am very interested in what is going to happen. of course you have the benefit of not having to create rounded characters as you have them already made but I like the fact that it seems as if you are going to be introducing some very new ones.Author's Response: wow, thank you To be complimented by such a great author is nice Date: 11/06/2010 06:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: jjptex sirius!!! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek! Keep writing darlin!Love from Joey~ Date: 11/04/2010 05:58 PM [Respond] Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Wyndham Excellent stuff. I do love Harry Potter fan fiction and this first chapter makes the story promising. I like. I assume, or at least hope, that the story will include some Harry and Draco love interest..... Generally well written. I don't think you need an editor. (If worried, read the story aloud to yourself - you'll be surprised how many things you pick up.) The only other suggestion I have is with regard to formatting. try and avoid paragraphs that are too long (ok so far) and also avoid too much sopacing between paragraphs (there is...) Oh, one last thing. I suggest you set up an announcement in the forums so that people know the story is there... See https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/forum/80-efiction-story-announcements/ Author's Response: Thanks Wyndham. And yes, this will include Harry and Draco together (and more ) I had a lot of trouble formatting it... the program i was using to post it was being finicky. Thanks for the review, and i will have new chapters up soon TJ Date: 10/03/2010 05:36 AM

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i like the wandering north pole. it is happily in the wilderness. we dont capture any random thing cause we want to unlike SOME people...

YAY! thank you i do try to keep them in character, as nothing would radically alter a person's psyche instantly (not without explanation, at least...) I find Draco to be the hardest one to keep in character, because of all the changes i'm doing... Thanks for the message TJ

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Hey, i'm not new to GA, but i AM new to the forums, lol. So just saying hey to all you forum people

As usual, a wonderful story by myr I can't wait for more Psionic Corps stories!!!

This is an excellently written and devised story! I am always on the edge of my seat waiting for the next event! The story has become one of my favorites, and i cant wait for the next part! Keep it up, it just is getting better and better!