Dolores Esteban

Congratulations!

# 23 is just beautiful. Thanks for sharing your poems.

Thank you for your comment. Yes, I plan to participate next year.

I enjoyed all your poems, Valkyrie. # 26 is very beautiful.

Thank you. I'm glad you liked the poems.

Something seems to be going on It will be fascinating to see Strange-looking quicksands We are never quite sure Helter-skelter Rapidly disintegrating It has been increasingly obvious Is the Journal really the Journal at all? * The situation or circumstances Things in general Showed a permanent quality To a great degree That is never found together In reality * It was really different I was aware A half-formed-idea evolving over time A complex with hundreds or a thou

The poems are very good. I read them several times. I think Blue is my favorite, but I like them all.

Pillars of smoke rose from behind the walls They came here around 8:15 p.m. With defeat looming on the horizon Something's amiss in Iridas In the abyss of space The planet dead and the civilization Wiped out, brutally murdered By someone * One of these days With the strength of ten One hundred days in desert sand Hear one thousand screams Ten thousand drums One hundred thousand people perished One million miles away from home One billion children wished you we

Doubt withers everything to dust. I love this line.

I love # 18!

I like all the poems. Azure Perimeter is my favorite, though, weird but striking a chord.

I lile all your poems. 11 is my favorite. I could see everything very clearly. The man with the Buddha belly has haunted me at work several times. I actually saw him this morning on my way to the office.

Your poems are definitely very good.

Glad you liked the poems. I'm slowly getting back to writing. Couldn't fully move my right arm for months. Thanks for your comments.

Outside the Gates of Cerdes In the abyss of space There was something strange One million A.D. * A lucent star in the abyss of space A voyage through vortex scapes And ancient plays unfold The serpent tower up in the hills At the gates of wisdom The serpent’s crown shall be bestowed * Dawn breaks forth in the far east The twin stars give a sense of direction The forest trees are saying: Morning star, son of dawn, Ophion, sovereign of Meru and Charioteer of the sun