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Well, so far everything has gone well with the change of the two new vampires, the service, and now we come to dealing with Brian's father. Will it continue to run smoothly, or will something go wrong? We will see.

Hope our duo don't get blamed for this.

What a great chapter, I found it very well written, and the tension was palpable. I believe both will survive, this goes back to what George told Greg, something about Greg is special, I don't think he will lose anyone he tries to turn.

Well, if Zach knows who did it; and says that it wasn't him, then he had to either see it done or at least have been in the house when it happened. That would point to only a couple of people as the killer. I am going to be so frigging annoyed if Zach gets too involved again in Will's life. I have never been a Zach fan and am less of one now. Can he start to be one of those characters that shows up once a decade in some strange way? Will truly does love Travis; does that mean that he and Travis will be forever, no, this is CAP after all. But they will always be in each other's life. They may well be this generations JP and Stef. Coming and going in each other's lives but always staying somehow connected even when not with each other. Wonderful chapter, Mark, just truly excellent...

Damn, what is so special about the Ulah-Lah? And Phentrom has evolved; but enough to go to war over? There is something we are missing here.

Well, just what kind of past does this bounty hunter have....

What an ass.

How sad for Dennis; but maybe even sadder that he is probably better off losing his parents. They were obviously on a fast road to hell and got there with a bang. Adding a child with Adam so new to their lives might not be the easiest thing to do but you know that is what is going to happen. A lot for them all to think about, but Adam was right, Derek and Jeremy have a lot of love to give. I am glad that Derek agreed to keep Andy three days a week, let's hope that works out, of course, I can't wait to see what happens if the idiot father finds out.

Murder Bots? That just truly doesn't sound good. And a planet with a dense population? Another coup perhaps? Talk about from the frying pan into the fire.

Oh Hell to the No...

I don't like our groups being separated. Nothing good ever comes of that.

Woo Hoo... I wasn't right but well deserved...

I knew this was going to be a bad idea. Why are they hunting the Ulaa-Lah? Never trust anyone that styles themselves as Lord.

My God, do these kids ever think anything through? On top of that, Greg had already ordered them not to do anything but get the equipment there and get home. The guard will take to Greg quickly; the fact that he cares about others will be a good thing to them. Don't know how you are going to get this group to live easily in the space they have. Buying something already built might have worked easier. Can't wait to see how they end up handling Brian's dad. Plus, we have the memorial service to plan. We just don't have time to bring anyone over; they will just have to perish.

Wonderful chapter; so full of feeling and emotions. Hate that they big business is going after the kids as much as they will be but nothing can stand in their way of seeking profit. I am not sure that launching the bulldozers would be a smart move, but we will see. Hate what man has done to the oceans and the land and the sky and well, everything. We do so much damage just by existing as we do. At one point in our history, we lived more in line with nature; but that time is long past.

Brian's father may not even realize why he is acting the way he does; but he knows what he is doing. He needs help; but only he can make that happen. Greg may move against him; but not sure that is the right decision either. Maybe he needs to get the authorities involved so they can remove him from the family home; of course, it isn't unusual for the wife to lie and try and protect the abuser; but we don't know what will happen there. Greg handled the situation with Jenny's beast and his as well has anyone could have expected. Loved that he got on their level to really talk to Brian and the others about what happened. Everyone got a wake up call here.

Truly admire anyone that attempts to break into this type of storytelling. It is never easy; but those that do it well, usually produce wonderful stories.

I am not sure how to take this one. But that said, I may well have to check out this story.

Karma is truly a bitch. I fully believe that in the end; must end up getting exactly what they deserve.

A truly remarkable ending to Caleb's tale. The joy and love evidenced by their actions shows this is a true family and one that will do anything to support, help, and grow together. I am so happy that Caleb found what he was always meant to have, a true mate, and a loving family. Just wonderful.

What a wonderful chapter. Jubal got a lot done before he went to town; and he was right, it was time for Lucas to come home. Lucas was truly touched by everything that Jubal had done, and it come through so clearly. Hope that the wildlings are just going to circle back, but you can never tell about a wild horse herd. The wolf furs will be a great addition to any bed or hearth come wintertime in Colorado. And sounds like Jubal knows how to prepare them so they can be used for many different things. Jubal made the right decision about the gold as well, for a variety of reasons. You can feel the ebb and flow of emotions between these two, the writing must makes you feel as if you are watching it happen live. Excellent job, can't wait to see what happens next.

Greg learned an important lesson, think before acting. LOL. Really enjoyed this chapter, and I do like how they handled the whole situation with Brian. I do think they should wait a while to change him, maybe after college? Of course, something could happen to him before then, so??? What are they planning exactly with all of the land? Inquiring minds want to know.

Wonderful chapter, and so much going on. I am really happy that Deidre is not causing more troubles, except upsetting Toby. I was afraid she was going to be more than difficult. Glad about the maintenance, that should have been settled already. I still think the situation with Ralph will turn into something no one expects, but we will see. Justin's parents seem interesting, and Toby and Justin seem to be good friends. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Well, I agree that the Red Stars are going to be tied to one of the groups involved in the fight; probably one we don't like. I don't think the bump was accidental, I think the man either did something or planted something on Phentrom.

Great chapter, I really love all the interplay between the groups. I am honestly not sure that Greg is wise to have told as many people as he has but we can all hope that it is for the best. Interesting how fast everything is moving; or is it just me? I am glad that they all seem to have decided to stay in high school for the last year. I think it is the right decision. I do think Billy getting in a throuple situation with Greg and Scott will work well. I have to wonder if Jenny and Brian could be fated mates? Wouldn't that be great. Can't wait to see what happens next.