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  1. A chapter filled with questions and answers but in the end; the truth...
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    Chapter 6

    Okay, that got complicated really fast. I fully trust Greg to make the right decisions; and the Prince backed him fully, of course, did anyone suspect that he wouldn't? Looks like their household just got a little bigger in one night. Is Josh in thrall to a mating bond or a paternal one? Only time will tell, but of course, it could be both, and that might be a little confusing for all involved. LOL. Can't wait to see what happens next. Well done, lot's of information delivered to the point.
  3. Such a loss.
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    Chapter 1

    WOW, love how you used the apples for metaphors and how perfectly they blended. So well done...
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    Chapter 1

    All of these were truly well done; but 2 and 3 really touched something in me; I think because of my age, they resonated more with me than the others but so enjoyed them all.
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    Into the Past

    So descriptive and the imagery that the words painted were so impactful. Brought up some really nice memories of the past for me.
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    Seasons

    Spring and Fall were well written but disturbing; but I guess that was the point. Summer was really nice. Winter however was very powerful. I truly felt the emotion behind this one. They were all well written, but this one was truly special.
  8. Starting on them now... Can't wait.
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    Changes

    Truly delightful, and so descriptively accurate about the situation.
  10. Talk about some powerful words, this one has it all; but Mendacity is nothing short of brilliant.
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  11. Loved them all, but Mendacity was truly brilliant.
  12. Keeping those under you hungry and drugged is standard operating procedure for just about any cult out there. This one is nothing new; can't believe that Lyoth was idiotic enough to just swallow a bunch of pills that he had no idea what were, I am sorry, but how dumb do you have to be...
  13. Who is Maddox Barksley and how did Jaycen and Troy put him away? Was it while being reserve deputies or did they testify against him; we need the back story on this pronto. LOL Love the Baby Rambo reference and seems to be accurate. Have no issues with reasonable firearms as long as someone is trained to use and care for them properly.
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    Chapter 14

    Well the search for Ethan is ongoing; but the man that took him doesn't seem to want to hurt him, and he knows who he is; but why take him??? He did not recover what he was looking for and it seems that would be more important that taking Ethan. Well, can't wait to see what happens now...
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    Moving Day

    Oh, so much love to share. It amazes me that some people seem to have an abundance of love and share it openly with others and are happy to do so; while others seem to have none to give and if they did, they wouldn't share it with anyone but the person looking back at them in the mirror Moving in with someone is a huge step, especially when you are so young and this is the first time, When it is really the first time away from living at home it can be even more traumatic.
  16. Wonderful start to this story, can't wait to see what happens next. So much love on both sides; and you know or hope each side will embrace the other fully.
  17. Loving all the background on the friends and their past and how they relate. Nice to have those old friends that you still can get along with; you and they have both changed, but still find things in common, it can be harder than you think. Love how Dan thought he was so isolated; but then in vivid color was someone from his past that had more in common with him then he ever thought. And amazing how often under the right circumstances or with the right person, that can happen. Seems to have gone well with meeting the friends and acquaintances on both sides, well except for Ron, who I think may be a bit of a bore about his politics, some just can't shut up when they need to but then we all have someone like that in our lives. Really well done, can't wait to see what happens next.
  18. Meeting the mother, is that something that they really want, this early into the relationship? Of course, might be better to get it over with and done for. Meeting the friends is a necessity though; often the friends are more important or more immediate than family; and if there are conflicts best get it out in the open rapidly. Not sure that can ever be great amounts of wealth without secrets and some corruption at some point in the past. It just is a fact of life, but how the person deals with it tells a great deal.
  19. A nice quite trip to drop Suoki off and then back to start getting the family ready to move to Boullia Bay. I am sure nothing could go wrong.
  20. Excellent story, not one to read as you get ready for bed, however.
  21. Lord; anyone that styles themselves as Mama is either one of the best people imaginable or one of the dregs; I just wonder which this one will be. I have a guess, but don't think anyone will like it. Still sad about Golvinte; but glad the rest may soon be together. I think they all are better and stronger when they have each other. Just keep adding to the group.
  22. Some truly great stories on these lists, problem is, I never have enough time to get to them all.
  23. Hate that we lost Golvinte; but he will be avenged. Hell of a battle, still a little worried about Fonith, they had been torturing her for so long. This group will escape this time, but how many more escapes do they have in them?
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    Chapter 18

    Well, an education of what can happen and did happen long ago was gotten by all that witnessed this abomination as he spoke, let us hope the one that was able to take his body back will be okay. Agda is going to have to fight like never before; and they will need to find this counterweight and shut the door; or she may well not survive this battle no matter her prowess. Great chapter.
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    Chapter 23

    Okay, just feel this got way more complicated that I would have thought. I really like Nathan, and love that he and his parents don't fib to each other, but that might cause and issue with this one. The ability that Kieran has shown Nathan by healing Rom, what was the issue by the way, will not be something that the PM and his advisor simply dismisses like some others. Excellent chapter.
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