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    HMS Endymion

    Thrilled that Granger has another command, if only for a short while. But what a command, and his Majesty's request to guard his and his family personally. But of course, Granger will have to entertain them, and feed them, and play that game of court. He does it well, even if he doesn't enjoy it as much as some. Always nice to see old friends. And especially Kingsdale, I do hope they find a way to help him get a little more prize money, he could use a larger and healthier Irish estate, LOL. Can't wait to see what happens when they are on patrol protecting his Majesty. Let's hope nothing untold occurs.
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    Holiday

    Wonderful chapter, very descriptive, and love how Toby was so enthused and some of that rubbed off on Brian and Gordon. I swear, the first day of traveling a long way always leads to bickering. Not sure if it is the feeling of being trapped in a small space with the same people for a long time or what; plus, driving or riding either one can be exhausting. Think it is great that Toby is so okay with Brian and Gordon having their alone time. Can't wait for Russ to get there. This will show a lot of what he is really up to, at least I think it will.
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    Dumped

    Loved this chapter, I know he is not everyone's cup of tea, but I love JJ. Hilarious that no one came to his graduation, except about seven or eight people; did anyone have more than that really mattered? Hate that Carullo found someone else; I always thought he and JJ fit in this really weird way, but well, maybe they could come back together, has happened before in the CAP universe. Kris is an interesting person for JJ to get involved with; or will JJ go that far with him? The old Prussian family would appeal to JJ, as would the looks, but it will take more than that for him to score with JJ. I do think it is high time to get rid of Zanie, or whatever the hell she is calling herself these days. I could see JJ being around her for a good laugh; but the second it isn't fun; she should have been gone. Can't wait to see what happens next.
  4. And all the cats in heaven rejoice...
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    Chapter 10

    What a real delight, and so glad that Alvora and Declan have allowed their youngest to make the decision that he feels works best for him. I do worry with the incidents that have occurred; this might not be the best time to make this move; but you can't always do things on the perfect timetable. Plus, if his mother is deteriorating that quickly, they need to be there for her as well. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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    Chapter 9

    Well, Uncle John seems to be taking this seriously, let's hope he gets to the bottom of it quickly. Never doubt a mother's ability to know when something will occur with one of her children.
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    Chapter 8

    Cameron and Taylor are a delight. Glad they have given into the blessings of the God and Goddess. No one seems to be as concerned as I would be about the transgressions. Maybe having abilities or power gives them the ability to look past those things, but it would still concern me.
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    Chapter 7

    Well, this chapter certainly had the ick factor all in it. That said, the brothers certainly have a palpable sense of love and companionship about them.
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    Chapter 6

    Is this aimed at the boys; or are they just unlucky in being there for two of the illusion mishaps.
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    Chapter 5

    Glad there is such a strong connection between the neighbors and friends. But they need to really think about who would be behind this and be on the lookout for them. This could effect one of the boys, when no one else is close enough to help.
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    Chapter 4

    You know, there are always those that try to destroy, in one form or another, nature and those that are in touch with it most. I am glad that Fabien was able to focus his abilities and help his friend. I think I would have been a little more interested in who set the trap and why.
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    Chapter 3

    Rhylen and Fabien have such joy within. And the love that their parents have for them just shines through.
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    Chapter 2

    How scary that must have been for Fabien, suddenly coming into an ability like that; and one that could do real damage to someone he cares deeply about. His parents both handled it perfectly. Neither made a big production out of it; just did what they needed to remedy the situation and move forward.
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    Chapter 1

    Alvora is a treasure already. I can't wait to see how she develops as the story goes along. The boys are interesting but sort of unformed yet, at least to me. Will have to see what happens moving forward.
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    Prologue

    Hmmm, just interesting enough with a hint of what might be to come to keep me onboard. Will have to see where this goes.
  16. Always appreciate these, great way to find new stories to take a look at.
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    Chapter 11

    The guys are good; but this team they face is determined and truly evil. All too often big business and big government are so in bed with each other that their only actions are in support of each other to the point that it drowns out what is happening with the majority of the world. I hope that the elders and Auntie giving their authority behind this group with be enough. Media manipulation is second nature to both big business and big government; but if the actions can be caught truthfully, then even they can't hide the truth, only spin it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
  18. I love how Toby and Noah are proceeding. They are not in a rush to experience it all but just want to take time being with each other and enjoying what they enjoy with any added pressure. Proud of Noah for taking this first step; and glad that his parents are going to be having a conversation with this grandmother. It might not do anything to change her actions; but at least they are making themselves heard. A little strange that Brian seems to be so obsessed with getting everything ready and organized for this trip; but I guess it may well be the first one that the has taken with Toby since he was old enough to really be involved, plus he has Gordon as part of the family structure as well. Can't wait for the trip, I am sure it will be eventful in some way or another.
  19. Another wonderful addition to the western stories that @Headstall seems so talented at developing and writing. The characters are developed so well, you care about this immediately and they have a past but it has made them who they are. The imagery and environment share equal billing with the characters and the writing draws you into it oh so quickly and deeply. Pull up a rocker and nice glass of tea and enjoy this great addition to this wonderful site.
  20. What a delightful final chapter to this story, although a few dozen more would have been more than welcome. I am truly happy that Reid was able to get together with Billy and with the blessing from Billy's dad. That was a shock to me, but oh such a good one. This will give them a nice chunk of land that will give them some buffer areas to be who they are. Reid realized when he had a chance to have some fun with a handsome stranger; that Billy was who he really wanted. Jubal and Lucas were meant to be together. They both had to overcome some true hardships in their past; but it made them who they are today. They care about each other on every level. Being able to get this herd, even a small one like this one but with good stock is a game changer. Especially if they are bred by a good stallion like they believe; plus, they have at least one good stallion coming up; and with Ke, perhaps another as well. You almost feel as if Kema gave his life to make sure Jubal was safe; and then left a great gift to see him forward. At this time in history and this area; a good horse was worth it's weight in gold. You needed one for almost everything. Of course, as Reid discovered; maybe not a great work horse; but find a couple of mares and they might have that covered as well. The writing and imagery that was created in this story was truly outstanding. Add the characters that were truly unique and so interesting that we cared for them immediately. Can't wait to see what this wonderful author comes up with next.
  21. Rain and getting better here in Texas. Of course. if there is any ice or snow, we just shut down.
  22. Can't wait to see what everyone comes up with this year.
  23. I do find it interesting that every generation has issues with not wanting to disappoint JP. And they should. I am glad that Will and Travis had the talk. They needed to get as much of this out in the open as they could, before any surprises came along; not that there won't be a few over the next couple of years. Travis is more insecure than Will, and Will is going to have to make some allowances. for that. But Will is going to have to accept that Travis is never going to like or care for Zach, and you really can't blame him for that. I hope that Travis finds what he is looking for in the acting profession, it is not an easy route he is taking. That said, he could take a few classes even if the acting starts to heat up, unless it is something like a movie or a series that ties up too much of his time. I hope that Jack takes what Brad said to heart and continues to work on making up with Claire. But Claire has to make a decision too as to whether or not she wants to move forward with their relationship. Excellent first chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
  24. Some truly outstanding works by some of the best authors. I do love everything about this particular genre.
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