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Really enjoyed finding out how everyone ends up; although a sequel would not offend me at all... LOL... I really did enjoy your story and can't wait to see what you do next...

Loved this chapter; this story just flows perfectly, even with a few delays... JJ has become one of my favorite people in this story. I do love how he is torturing himself about being Buzz's last lay and it was a bad one; it will be fabulous when he finds out the truth and decides to torture Will instead... I think JJ is much smarter than most give him credit for; he truly does understand how to read people and has a level of competence on a wide array of areas. I do think he is slightly self-absorbed and that means he does miss a few things but he is still very young... I do think he wants to get back at Ella but not sure that is the best way to do so. Plus, I really do want him and Carullo to hook up, notice I said hook up, not sure they would ever be a happily ever after couple but it could be very interesting... Glad that Brad and Marc have been able to bury the hatchet. I think this was something that did bother Brad and he does not need any distractions right now. I could actually see Marc and Sean being a good couple, with an occasional third thrown in... LOL... The interaction between Jake and Brad was so perfect. Thanks to Will, they both seem to understand each other better than you would expect. Hope they prove to be as tight as I think they will need to be. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the fabulousness of it all...

Well, Jezebel will have to be dealt with at some point but I have a feeling that Talia maybe the one to deal with her... Jezebel's hate blinds her in some ways. I have to think that she will find herself making a mistake at a crucial moment... Have to wonder how a meeting between Luca and the Prince will go.

So glad that Luca is safe, not sure how I feel about him and Eamon; especially since the Prince you introduced in the first chapter seems to have his eye on Luca. Glad that Eamon did shame the girl, and can't wait to see how Luca handles the upcoming visit... Alexander and Carl getting married would not fully solve anything; although it might give a blue-print on exactly who is going to side with whom... Can't wait to see what all you have in store for us during book two of this saga... Keep up the good work...

Truly enjoyed this chapter; there was just so much going on and you wrote it all beautifully... I really enjoy your style of writing and the way you pace out not just your chapters but the full story as well. Was surprised at how well the council took the information about Ethan and Aiden. I expected a lot more fireworks, so to speak, concerning the revelation of Ethan's nature and the fact that he passed some of his ability onto Aiden after their mating was completed. Surprised at how negative some of the reaction was to Ethan's ability to cure the feral wolves. You would think that more people would be happy to have members of their family or pack back. So typical for members of a Southern pack to have an issue with including anyone but the wolves. Not sure how I would feel about John being elected to the Presidency; I do think that Aiden and Ethan both need a little more seasoning before they are ready to take up the Alpha position. Found it interesting that the older Alpha talked about how when an Elemental appeared; trouble was usually coming for the wolves or others. Can't wait to see what you do next... Keep up the great work.

Another really nice chapter; the emotions that you are able to evoke are so real. I have truly enjoyed this story and can't wait for the epilogue as well as your next story...

Well, Talia understands what it takes to rule in her homeland; but do have to wonder if this land is that much different? Can't wait for this dinner conversation; it is going to be very interesting...

An interesting start to the new book in this saga; I am glad we are going to have a few new voices added to the chorus but I hope they don't take away from the older ones to much. Will be interesting to see how they fit into what is currently going on with the more established ones. I was sort of sad that we did not find out what happened to Luca; when the first book ended his life was hanging in the balance. I sort of guess if he is being mentioned that he is okay but...

Another great chapter, I just love this story... The fight scene with Ethan was so well done; plus it showed just how far Ethan has come but also how much he still needs to learn about the world that he has entered. It was just perfect how he waited for just the right moment to shift into his second form. The part with the council was likewise really well done. I was glad that the pace was more deliberate with it; but it still moved right along. I was sort of surprised that Aiden and Ethan went full elemental so early but it did work out for the best. Glad that everything came out and the other Alpha's were willing to believe it. I do wonder what the verdict will be. Plus, I know it is goofy but I really want to find out what happened to the son of the Alpha from Michigan that was kidnapped. I think the next few chapters are going to be really good... Keep up the great work.

Just really enjoyed this chapter; I can't wait for the next one. I really like the explanation that Jean-Pierre gave and hope he can back it up; I for one believe him... I think it is great how accepting so many of the Alphas and others are; although this Dorian is an aberration, there are always a few that just can't accept change. I have a feeling that even without his other abilities, Ethan will be able to defend himself quite well. I would have thought that Aiden or the Alpha or Jackie or someone would have covered a few more things about issues like this before the conference... Great job, and as I said earlier, can't wait for the next chapter...

A really good chapter; the meeting was hilarious but you sort of knew by the end that Cyril was going to do something stupid... Keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter...

Great chapter, this story is just building to big finish, just not anytime soon... I can't really decide why I like this addition to the CAP saga so much, but it is my favorite with the exception of the first three stories in the saga. I have to admit I am not really upset if Zach and Will choose to go their separate ways for the moment. I don't know that breaking up now would really mean they are over for ever; they are at such different places in their lives right now. Was so impressed that Brad was willing to give up even a little control and allow the others to tell Matt and Wade about the issues with Elizabeth and maybe Lord Preston. Wade has to be brought into the loop and I think he will be the best person to know how to prepare to deal with at least her middle game gambits. I am sure that JJ was pissed that everyone was calling him and checking on him; he will be so horrified if he ever finds out that Will told them about him and Buzz, well he will be horrified that even Will knew... Glad that Dallas reached out to Will; if he allows him, Will would probably be able to help him deal with his father's death. Not sure about them hooking up, after all, Will did sleep with his father; well I guess maybe that isn't a big deal since Buzz slept with Brad, but would Dallas think it was okay? Thank you for this wonderful entry in the saga, Mark. Keep up the great work...

Truly enjoyed this chapter; seems like with you putting it on hiatus that you were trying to wrap so much up that it did not flow as well as many of your chapter. I really did like the part about Sam and his sister coming back together, or at least starting the process. It will be a hard road for her and her husband but I hope they make it through it. The kids seemed nice but we really just did not get to know them very well. Glad to see that Joseph was enjoying his trip abroad. I really do believe that travel is good for everyone. It helps you to understand other cultures and can help you find your place in the world. Love how the little ones are taking to the guitar; Slide giving the lessons are probably doing him as much or more good than they lessons are the kids. Hope you find your muse with this story; it seems like what you have done is a great beginning. Can't wait to see what you do next...

Really enjoyed this chapter, the writing just gets better and better. I hope the story continues for a long time to come. I really like how the first section was handled; the discussion of the Alpha's on what to do and how to handle what is going on. I think the upcoming council meeting/election will prove to be very interesting. I have a feeling that both Aiden and Ethan will be there and will come out of the closet so to speak... Love the game of hide and seek with the roses and the jockstraps, jocks are a particular fantasy of mine so this feed right into it... But what really got me about this whole seen was the tenderness and love that was generated by it, not just the sex. So happy that Casey, Darius, and Cody are finally joining together; I hope they will all be very happy. The three of them will be great protection for Aiden and Ethan both... Surprised that they choose to elevate Aiden and Ethan to the Alpha couple designate but guess it makes sense to make sure they are as ready as possible when the time comes... Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the wonderful work...

I was really hoping that Kel was going to be able to kill his father; but as long as he is dead I guess that is all the matters. I have to say that this has been well worth the wait. I have enjoyed this story and can't wait to see how you wrap it up...

Enjoyed the chapter, can't decide exactly how Noom feels but I can tell he cares; and that probably scares him more than he has been scared in a very long time. I wonder how much the relatives in France knew before that phone call...

Loved this chapter, this whole story just keeps getting better and better. You just never know about the dinners at Escorial. This one may not have been high on drama but was oh so delicious... I do think that Wade has to be told, and I guess to some extent Brad would be the best to tell him. I do think that Wade will be conflicted to some extent; but I just can't see him being willing to give up Matt to side with his biological family and I think that is what would have to happen if he did... Can't wait for the next chapter, but do understand how busy it can get for you this time of the semester... Don't forget to take some time for yourself...

This story just keeps getting better and better. I love how Sam has this network and even when you think that the person isn't going to be up to snuff, Slide, they are... This is probably good for both the boys and Slide. Think it is great that Joseph and his friend are getting to travel some; exposure to the world can be truly great and can really help kids at that age understand their place in it... Well, the you can't choose your family; but I have a feeling that Sam isn't going to handle his sister being hit even if they have been estranged for years... Loved the side trip to Mexico, all couple need some time just for themselves. It can be harder once you have kids and other responsibilities but the time just has to be found if you want to continue to grow as a couple and stay happy... Keep up the great work...

This was a great chapter but in some ways it opened more avenues for additional questions than it actually answered. Who were the others that Jean-Pierre is supposedly with? What information did they find at the end? How many people on the council are involved? Inquiring minds want to know... Really like how the Alpha and others are trying to integrate the new comers with the members of the pack. It is just another sign on how truly different this pack is in some ways from others. Promoting Aiden within the pack is also a good idea. While I am not sure he is strong enough to actually lead the pack if something were to happen to the Alpha, he needs to be ready to step into any power vacuum that arises if something happened to the pack elders. Great job, can't wait for the next installment...

Just wanted to drop a quick note about how much I enjoyed this latest chapter. I do think it is good to get the point of view of auxiliary characters from time to time. It allows us to see the main characters from a different perspective. I thought the writing in this chapter was particularly effective and really the chapter just flew by, I found myself wanting to see so much more. I really like how everything was handled with Joseph and the money situation. At that age, status is so important and you never really know what a kid will think that others are looking at him about. I also really like how both Joseph and Tyler but took a relatively benign event and both blew it up to the point that they just know that their relationship was over... Well done... Can't wait for the next chapter...

Oh my God... I just don't even know where to start with this one... First of all, I just have to say that you are truly amazing... I honestly think this story compares favorably for me with the first three in this series; and those have always been my favorites... The writing, pacing, and plotting have just been first rate... The meeting with Mike and Brad was just so well written and really explained so many things. Then you throw Alexandra in and well, I just can't say enough. $100,000,000.00 is a lot of money but to get out of jail and keep his family safe, or at least be able to defend them against Elizabeth is worth it and more. Glad that Mike is going to be the one to control the money; even if Alexandra is better, not sure that I would want her to have access to any significant amount of money. And I love how Brad up until this meeting was in some way under-estimating Elizabeth; but I bet he doesn't any longer. The bonus about Lord Preston was just so well done and may be the more important than anyone else realizes yet. Will has actually impressed me in the last few chapters. I am never going to like him as much as some people do; but he actually seems to be showing signs of not being a total idiot... I did like how he handled all the calls; especially the ones to JJ, Carullo, and Dallas. I am not sure that he understands JJ as much as he thinks he does but even so; he understands him more than almost anyone else. I am glad that he called and filled Carullo in on everything. I hope that Will and some of the others go to Buzz's funeral. I sort of want to see how Will handles meeting Dallas in person. JJ did not freak out as much as I thought he would; although Will did not let him go off and kept him grounded to some extent. I hope that JJ lets Carullo help him through some of this if he needs it. I don't know why but I actually would like to see JJ and Carullo hook up, not sure they would be good for a happily ever after couple but they actually compliment each other in a weird way to me. I could actually see them lasting longer than anyone else would suspect. The one person I am really feeling sorry for right now though is Wade; he is eventually going to have to truly pick one side or the other. That will be a harder choice for him that I think some will suspect it to be. Keep up the outstanding job, can't wait to see what happens next....

Loved everything about this chapter, from the dance to the adventure in the Canadian wilderness. I love how the pack is has become so accepting of the others and is pulling them into the pack. It will only strengthen them all in the end. Aiden is so smart and loyal. He will make a good Alpha when the time comes, and yes, I do realize that Ethan is an Alpha as well but somehow it just seems like Aiden will always be the one in charge... Love the idea of the playroom; I am sure it would be good for a few chapters full of fun...

Really, enjoyed this latest chapter; it was nice getting the story from Joseph's point of view. The story flowed really well and felt spot on. The only issue I had, just to nitpick was the fact that they thought their son was gay because he asked for a doll when he was four for Christmas? I don't know, that bothered me some, not enough to keep me from fully enjoying the chapter, but it just felt a little off to me... It is great to see how Sam interacts and reacts to Joseph and his concern's. Just so well written and thought out... Great job and can't wait for the trip...

You are an evil Bitch, Mark Arbour; and I truly love you for it....

Truly enjoyed the latest chapter of this story; the writing and development just keep getting better and better. I have to say that this is turning into one of my true guilty pleasures... I loved how the wedding and the reception was handled and the trip to Niagara Falls was just perfect. The security could not have been any better either. I also enjoyed the New Year Eve party and hope that we see more of Nathan and Alex. Glad to see that Aiden's step grandfather, another Alpha, was so accepting of his relationship with Ethan. And glad to see that the our Alpha and Jackie are getting out and staying involved. So glad that Jean-Pierre is still around, and I like how Aiden hinted that he would be there to help him if he could. Hope we find out what the code was to next chapter. The way the Security Director had that thought makes me wonder if he doesn't know more than he is reporting...