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Well, another really good chapter. This has not had the impact that Gordy Comes Home had; at least not yet; and I certainly hope never in the same way... I had that one figured out early, and just got heartbroken early and often... I have to admit that Tom caught my attention; have to wonder how much he will go against one of his bosses; but it could make for an interesting time...

An interesting chapter; dealing with a small child this early in a relationship is always interesting... Children do understand much more than some adults give them credit for; even some that are parents.

I loved both of the earlier stories and this one certainly started out with all the heart and appeal that they both possessed... Can't wait to see where you go next...

Heartbreaking way to start the story; and a strange way to end the first chapter... I do wonder how a stab wound to the leg would cause this type of reaction; unless it hit a main artery...

Family is never easy to deal with after a death; and no will or inheritance is ever truly safe... People will fight and kill over the strangest things...

It is funny how there always seems to be one person in the family that sees what is going on more clearly than the others; sometimes that can be a good thing... I have to admit that the back and forth is making it a little hard to stay in sequence while reading; but the storyline is really interesting...

Damn, have to wonder why someone that is current is going to be tied to a murder from so long ago; is this going to be one of those times when something in the distant past touches many aspects of a current situation...

Really enjoyed this chapter, I have to say that the flashbacks give interesting insight to some of the current issues but not all of them. I do think that the frequency of the flashbacks are hampering the pacing of the story; but that maybe what you are trying to do with them; is tie the story to a pace that you are comfortable with...

Loved this chapter, I half expected Miss Sybil to show up at some point. Can't wait to see what happens next...

So well done; I thought the scene at the memorial was just perfect. We got to meet the sort of ex; and I find her a little off putting; flirting at a memorial service just isn't done; at least not in Texas... Can't say that it surprised me that everyone separated as soon as possible; glad to see that Will was trying to take care of Dally... Brad handled the situation with the custody about as well as could possible be done; let's hope they keep their side of the agreement. Stef handled everything well, and seems to be dealing with Will better, if not completely on an even keel. A little surprised at Will, but he is young and hormonal even if he usually has better judgment. But I do think he was doing it for the right reasons. Can't wait to see where we go next, and how Mike and his kids interact with the rest of the family...

This pact could be the answer to her prayer or be what damns her to misery for what is left of her life; an interesting turn on where she thought she was going to be halfway through the interview....

Well, Skold had much more of a fight then I think he anticipated with the Fury. I wonder if they are the ones that the other elf warned him of, or at least their actions...

WOW, everything about this chapter was a twist... I do like the writing and pacing, some grammatical issues but still very good... I can't decide about the plotting, but I do want to know what is next, so....

Skold should welcome the coming war and all the death that comes with it; I am surprised anyone would think he would want to stop it...

Okay, I really don't like the fact that he could not even be bothered to push someone out of the way. I don't care how much of a nutcase you are; that is just shitty...

A strange yet weirdly compelling first chapter; it almost begs the question, what next???

Loved how you have ended this book; and can't wait for the next one... I don't know what I was expecting to be in the room but this certainly was not it; what a horrifying surprise... I am so glad that George and Caroline seem to have reached a true meeting of both the minds and bodies. I hope Granger really does appreciate what a burden Caroline has undertaken on their behalf, even if she does enjoy it... To wield that amount of power in Great Britain at the time would make her exceptionally powerful; and with Granger in the Lords adding his voice even more so, when they choose to wield it. I know that this last year has been really tough on you; but I want you to know how much every word you have written means to not only me but so many others... Take a bow, take rest, and get back to work...

I am beginning to see that this could go much darker that the first few chapter suggested... Really enjoying the story, can't wait to see the next update.

It did not surprise me that the Lady saw right through the disguise; but I truly doubt she would be behind anything... The ending of the chapter was a huge surprise though...

There seems to be so many facets to this that I just can't even begin to see where all of this is going; but I am enjoying the ride...

I really liked this chapter; it is actions like this that give you these subtle little hints that often reveal so much...

An interesting twist in the storyline; have to wonder why a group would want him dead instead of getting what they could from him and for him...

An interesting chapter; the scene with the Duke was a surprise. I have to wonder what the birthright of this man is; he is obviously much stronger than either the Master Enchanter or even he himself realizes.

Have to wonder if we are going to get anything from the Knight Commander's side? I doubt everyone is wrong; but have to wonder why she acts the way she does?

I really laughed outloud when the Captain showed just how naïve he was about man on man sex... Hard to believe in any era a man of his age would not at least understand the basic parameters involved... Too funny...