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Chapter 3 - A Wedding Prepared For
centexhairysub commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 3 - A Wedding Prepared For
Well, I assume that he has some type of power such as his sisters had; but are they trying to keep him from coming into the power or trying to bring it out? -
Chapter 2 - A Ma' Nee is Made
centexhairysub commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 2 - A Ma' Nee is Made
Well, have to say that anything that allows him to escape this kingdom, even it is the one of his birth, would be a significant improvement. -
Chapter 1 - A World of Change
centexhairysub commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A World of Change
An interesting start to the story; the King comes off as a little sociopathic and ignorant; but then his reliance on religion to protect him would mark him as such... -
Connor handled everything, even the issue with the bone shard much better than I can image most would; of course, the mating pull may have helped more than anyone realized. I think that once Connor accepted that Kellar could heal the ewe, he was better able to accept all the rest of it. I am sort of surprised that Hugh did not go all wolf and leave at a dead run going after the man that hurt his mate. Wolves are very protective of their mates. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work.
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Have to wonder if they won't use the Earth me as a way of making the Earth ready for them??? Jumping them into the future and as they said, training their minds; for what? Another good chapter, can't wait for the next one...
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Loved the breakfast scene; was just way to funny and so true to life, well written. The Daddy Sheriff porn was a little off putting for me; as it appears the deputy was raped, and that is just something that I have trouble with anyone joking about. I do look forward to the confrontation in the DA's office, it will be very interesting...
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I think the story really started to come into it's own with this chapter... I found the interaction between these two small groups so telling. Can't wait for the next chapter...
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I have to admit that the earth crew is handling this better than I expected; even the hot headed one... I wonder how long the security guy will put up with it if the other team keep snipping at each other.
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Why is there always one hot-head in every mission to another planet that will never listen to reason? I do find this story very interesting and will continue to follow it...
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Really getting into the story but sad to see that even in advanced groups there are always those that don't think they have to follow the rules and want to dominate others.
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Okay, now I am not sure if the debate is in the past or at the present time. Pete has only himself to blame for his death, does that even make sense? He did not follow orders or procedure on a world that his people knew nothing about, but I have to admit the first thought I had was that he had done something to the communication devices and killed himself; so I do understand the idea popping up in the head of those involved.
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I am assuming that the action in this chapter happened long ago but can't really tell.
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A good transitional chapter, the pacing and writing are both first rate.
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Another good chapter, just enough info to keep us hooked. Good going, can't wait to see where this goes.
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Have to say that this chapter really piqued my interest, can't wait to see where this story goes. Love allthe info given, makes it easier to get a full picture of the plot.
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The Times They Are a-Changin'
centexhairysub commented on Headstall's story chapter in The Times They Are a-Changin'
Great chapter; but have to wonder what type of danger... Is his boss hurting him or someone else? Is he in an abusive relationship? -
Really interesting chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. Love how they handled everything with the Mayor and Fire Chief in the diner. The slow speed chase was something else... Have to wonder what caused the accident? Who was on the tape???
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Candestine is dead; not just because Skold was better and Rebecca and Dom helped him but because like anyone consumed with hatred, you become blind to everything else. You can never succeed if hate is all you are... Can't wait to see what happens next...
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The sister obviously hates Skold more than she feels anything else in her life. Such a negative emotion will only destroy her in the end and it will be as if she never was...
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I am not sure who ended up being a bigger asshole, the Sheriff or Raymond. I guess I will go with the Sheriff but it truly is a close call. The Sheriff is like so many in Texas with that position; they got it not because they know how to do the job but because they can talk faster and bullshit better than anyone else... Raymond was just so completely out of line; do not care how he really feels about Dan, that was just too far over the line...
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Loved both couples coming together but Miss Sybil and Arthur was really something special. The emotion and love was just palpable. So happy, can't wait to see what is next...
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I say just go whichever way your gut is telling you. I can see an argument for either one. I do think that being a lawyer, Jeff would want to keep everything above board and since Dave was there when everything happened, there should not be any legal ramifications involved.
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Good chapter, and while we had a question or two answered, there seems to be more popping up and coming through. Good pacing and the storyline just could not be better. Maybe the guys should consider polygamy; if Tom is that hot... LOL... Can't wait to see what direction you take with the story next...
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The first part of the chapter in the club I thought was well done; but I have to say the second half, the fighting seem rather disjointed and rushed... Do have to wonder what will happen next...
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Not sure that I agree with the decision to kill Vanessa Holland, after all, there is nothing to show that she knew what Sinclair was going to do... There are other religions that follow closely what the Fey religion seems to be, but I have to wonder how it will play out here, I sense that it maybe important. Second sight always shows what maybe; there are often many variables that can do effect what is to come. That is why the ability of a seer is valuable but always open ended in what may come. There really has not been enough of an explanation on why his sister hates him so; there must be more to that story...
