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Interesing plot, but the many spelling and grammar mistakes make it very difficult to read. Please get an editor.
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I so love the Liam character - there is something in this poor boy's life that is not happy. He is definately in love with his best friend and dont know how to handle it. His father is also someone very important in this story - does he have something on Jake's family?
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Excellent lovely story about a man creating his own unique family.
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Chapter 138 Papering Over the Cracks
dachcr commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 138 Papering Over the Cracks
Hmmm, Stephanie planned to speak to Robbie that evening?? Mistake in the timeline? -
Excellent story - the development of the characters are outstanding,
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A great start with some interesting potential, but you need to fix all the grammar mistakes so that the reading becomes easier.
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A very heartfelt story thanks.
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As usual a stunning chapter. Love the idea that Alex is moving in with Robbie's new family. Alex will be a great influence on Robbie, and maybe a much better boyfriend than Nathan. Just saying.
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A great story, love to see what is going to happen with boys next!
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Where is the next chapter? I miss my Jake and Klaus.
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This was a chapter that opened the men’s heart - we start to get to know the guys. There are some promises of some stunning love scenes! Interesting to see how long our man is going to stay straight?
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I also remembered that afternoon (Cape Town, South Africa), I was driving from work to home and heard that the first plain crashed into the building. The worst was watching the second plain hitting the other tower on TV as it happens...and my friend informing me that his sister is/was working on that floor...bad memories. So, Mark, you are touching a lot of sensitive issues. Cannot wait to see how you are rolling out this book in the series. The title do spell something is going to happen. Thanks for the great read.
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Ch 23: My Date with a Doctor
dachcr commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 23: My Date with a Doctor
I agree, the dr is an interesting figure, we are going to have lots of fun here. What I like about the story is how the characters keep on building and becoming personalities. Great work! -
Eeee, I dont like cliffhangers!!!!! I really enjoy the way the story is developing. At last the two boys are getting there, but I smell a snake in the grass. Great story!
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Oh great! At last a wonderful kiss but knowing you, there will be some kind of kink in the story. I like the cliff, but if you make us waiting too long, we will drown you!!! Just joking... I’m currently visiting Oz-land. Was a couple of days at Perth and looked at the map at the area that the story is playing off. It sounds and do look great. Unfortunately, I’m visiting family on the other side of this great flat country! Our hero of the story is going to get his act together and find Haze, he was up to something in that cabin! Well, lets wait and see where your imagination is taking us in the next chapter. BUT remember, if something happens to Haze, I’m in Oz, I will come and visit you! hehe
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Great work! Dont worry about the real time issue, the story line is great! Keep it up!
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I really enjoy the story of sir George and his many lovers! looking forward to a very interesting follow! I’m still waiting for him to make a turn in Cape of Good Hope - there were a few ineresting stories in the Cape Castle and the Bath of Mary-Ann. Love to read about a possible visit! Just mentioning... lol Keep up your great writing
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Chapter 10: From Bad to Nothing
dachcr commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 10: From Bad to Nothing
This is becoming a really great story - I just love the tention between Blake and Haze - Haze is not so inocent as we think, there is something cooking! I cannot wait for the next chapter! -
I just used the first two letters of my first middle and last name - easy! and there is apparently a russian meaning for my profile name!
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You know, with a front cover like the one above, and the expert writing of Mark, I will buy all the books that are published under his name - why not, Mark?
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hey mark, take very thanks and honour with pride - you are the best! Thanks for a great new chapter - i was asking for a bit more interaction with the kids... this is creating a great new twist to the story.
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I'm really back on the Mark fan wagon! Chapter 13 (interesting to use number 13 to bring in a Christian angle... ) is going somewhere good again. Also like the intriguing hidden agendas of people! Well done Mark - you are back in my good books!
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i agree - i'm getting very aggro with the withdrawal syndromes - i need my next shot soon! PLEASE! Dude! He's in Paris and "We" aren't. Does that suck or what? i agree - i'm getting very aggro with the withdrawal syndromes - i need my next shot soon! PLEASE!
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I totally agree - i'm feeling somewhat disappointed with the direction that this story is going... will wait and see if i'm getting inspired again. - also waiting for our captain and his shipmates to appear again.
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Nope, I know that I'm not the smartest smartie in the box!
