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    A great plot, and development of the characters.
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    The Fracture

    dachcr commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Fracture

    At last, standing up for what is right. Cannot wait to see how he will take on the world. Working at the cafe in the next town.
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    Love seeDz

    dachcr reviewed Tony S.'s story in Fiction

    This is such a great story that took me to place that really matters. I love how the characters developed, being real. Thanks.
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    Aah, what a lovely scene at the end. Thanks for a lovely honest and human story.
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    He better take the hint, and invitation.
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    "Nobody"

    dachcr commented on Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro's story chapter in "Nobody"

    And the table is set for a great banquet - we just need to see who will do what now!
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    An excellent story, great development of characters. Good innocent and almost real.
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    Troublemaker

    dachcr reviewed Superpride's story in Fiction

    A great story where the characters are developing into well-rounded figures. A love story between two people that ended up perfectly.
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    Lukas

    dachcr commented on Connectwriter's story in Fiction

    Thanks for bringing back Lucas to us the readers. I remember it from the other site. It's a great story. I love the new chapters and changes that you made.
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    A great story, with excellent character development. A feel good story at the end.
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    Excellent story - love the characters and the honesty around them.
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    An excellent chapter, at last someone with a brain is getting through to JJ. Rusty is the man.
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    Hidden Secrets

    dachcr reviewed Mawgrim's story in Fiction

    A well-written story with just the correct combination of love and intrigue. Cannot go wrong in reading this story.
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    A great story with real characters - the story developed the characters perfectly. Well done!
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    Excellent story.
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    An interesting change of events - the cliffhanger - is making me even more worried who is behind all of this...
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    Chapter 17

    dachcr commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 17

    This is such a great story - there are so many of these boys on the street that just need some help - some love.
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    Southward

    dachcr reviewed gor mu's story in Fiction

    A lovely stroy between two friends that became lovers and partners - well-written.
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    Interesing plot, but the many spelling and grammar mistakes make it very difficult to read. Please get an editor.
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    Chapter Six

    dachcr commented on Avogadro1001's story chapter in Chapter Six

    I so love the Liam character - there is something in this poor boy's life that is not happy. He is definately in love with his best friend and dont know how to handle it. His father is also someone very important in this story - does he have something on Jake's family?
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    Box of Crackers

    dachcr reviewed CLJobe's story in Fiction

    Excellent lovely story about a man creating his own unique family.
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    Hmmm, Stephanie planned to speak to Robbie that evening?? Mistake in the timeline?
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    Excellent story - the development of the characters are outstanding,
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    George & Jim

    dachcr commented on JimSqu Sunbelter's story in Fiction

    A great start with some interesting potential, but you need to fix all the grammar mistakes so that the reading becomes easier.
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