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“I still want Nicholas,” I say. “I want him to be my boyfriend.” ...I pause, then say, “You must think I’m an idiot.” YES, get over the brat and get a life with Stu.
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Jeez, when is this boy gets the message! Dump the bastard and move on.
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I found Carter’s Asset to be a great story, with the characters developing naturally as the story progressed. At the beginning, I struggled a little to keep track of the various characters and how they all fit into the storyline. However, as I continued reading, everything gradually fell into place, and the plot became much clearer. The ending was particularly interesting, and I hope Andrew and Will’s stories will continue in future installments. There is certainly scope for further character development and new storylines. Excellent growth and development of the plot, with an intriguing ending!
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A really great chapter - it looks like the two are drifting closer to each other. If they just had the guts to open up to each other and realise that the feelings are mutual.
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Great chapter, I guess that the major got a big closet at home! But we will see where this is going.
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An excellent story plot with characters that developed through a well written story.
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Straight to the Morning, Part Two of Three
dachcr commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Straight to the Morning, Part Two of Three
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Straight to the Morning, Part One of Three
dachcr commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Straight to the Morning, Part One of Three
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At last, standing up for what is right. Cannot wait to see how he will take on the world. Working at the cafe in the next town.
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This is such a great story that took me to place that really matters. I love how the characters developed, being real. Thanks.
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Chapter 14 - All's Well That End's Well
dachcr commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 14 - All's Well That End's Well
Aah, what a lovely scene at the end. Thanks for a lovely honest and human story.- 13 comments
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Chapter 10 - Decisions
dachcr commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Decisions
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And the table is set for a great banquet - we just need to see who will do what now!
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An excellent story, great development of characters. Good innocent and almost real.
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A great story where the characters are developing into well-rounded figures. A love story between two people that ended up perfectly.
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Thanks for bringing back Lucas to us the readers. I remember it from the other site. It's a great story. I love the new chapters and changes that you made.
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A great story, with excellent character development. A feel good story at the end.
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Excellent story - love the characters and the honesty around them.
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An excellent chapter, at last someone with a brain is getting through to JJ. Rusty is the man.
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A well-written story with just the correct combination of love and intrigue. Cannot go wrong in reading this story.
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A great story with real characters - the story developed the characters perfectly. Well done!
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Excellent story.
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An interesting change of events - the cliffhanger - is making me even more worried who is behind all of this...
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This is such a great story - there are so many of these boys on the street that just need some help - some love.
