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“I still want Nicholas,” I say. “I want him to be my boyfriend.” ...I pause, then say, “You must think I’m an idiot.” YES, get over the brat and get a life with Stu.

Jeez, when is this boy gets the message! Dump the bastard and move on.

I found Carter’s Asset to be a great story, with the characters developing naturally as the story progressed. At the beginning, I struggled a little to keep track of the various characters and how they all fit into the storyline. However, as I continued reading, everything gradually fell into place, and the plot became much clearer. The ending was particularly interesting, and I hope Andrew and Will’s stories will continue in future installments. There is certainly scope for further character development and new storylines. Excellent growth and development of the plot, with an intriguing ending!

A really great chapter - it looks like the two are drifting closer to each other. If they just had the guts to open up to each other and realise that the feelings are mutual.

Great chapter, I guess that the major got a big closet at home! But we will see where this is going.

An excellent story plot with characters that developed through a well written story.

Hot 🔥

A great plot, and development of the characters.

At last, standing up for what is right. Cannot wait to see how he will take on the world. Working at the cafe in the next town.

This is such a great story that took me to place that really matters. I love how the characters developed, being real. Thanks.

Aah, what a lovely scene at the end. Thanks for a lovely honest and human story.

He better take the hint, and invitation.

And the table is set for a great banquet - we just need to see who will do what now!

An excellent story, great development of characters. Good innocent and almost real.

A great story where the characters are developing into well-rounded figures. A love story between two people that ended up perfectly.