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A great start with some interesting potential, but you need to fix all the grammar mistakes so that the reading becomes easier.
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A very heartfelt story thanks.
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As usual a stunning chapter. Love the idea that Alex is moving in with Robbie's new family. Alex will be a great influence on Robbie, and maybe a much better boyfriend than Nathan. Just saying.
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A great story, love to see what is going to happen with boys next!
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Where is the next chapter? I miss my Jake and Klaus.
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This was a chapter that opened the men’s heart - we start to get to know the guys. There are some promises of some stunning love scenes! Interesting to see how long our man is going to stay straight?
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I also remembered that afternoon (Cape Town, South Africa), I was driving from work to home and heard that the first plain crashed into the building. The worst was watching the second plain hitting the other tower on TV as it happens...and my friend informing me that his sister is/was working on that floor...bad memories. So, Mark, you are touching a lot of sensitive issues. Cannot wait to see how you are rolling out this book in the series. The title do spell something is going to happen. Thanks for the great read.
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Ch 23: My Date with a Doctor
dachcr commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 23: My Date with a Doctor
I agree, the dr is an interesting figure, we are going to have lots of fun here. What I like about the story is how the characters keep on building and becoming personalities. Great work! -
Eeee, I dont like cliffhangers!!!!! I really enjoy the way the story is developing. At last the two boys are getting there, but I smell a snake in the grass. Great story!
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Oh great! At last a wonderful kiss but knowing you, there will be some kind of kink in the story. I like the cliff, but if you make us waiting too long, we will drown you!!! Just joking... I’m currently visiting Oz-land. Was a couple of days at Perth and looked at the map at the area that the story is playing off. It sounds and do look great. Unfortunately, I’m visiting family on the other side of this great flat country! Our hero of the story is going to get his act together and find Haze, he was up to something in that cabin! Well, lets wait and see where your imagination is taking us in the next chapter. BUT remember, if something happens to Haze, I’m in Oz, I will come and visit you! hehe
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Great work! Dont worry about the real time issue, the story line is great! Keep it up!
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I really enjoy the story of sir George and his many lovers! looking forward to a very interesting follow! I’m still waiting for him to make a turn in Cape of Good Hope - there were a few ineresting stories in the Cape Castle and the Bath of Mary-Ann. Love to read about a possible visit! Just mentioning... lol Keep up your great writing
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Chapter 10: From Bad to Nothing
dachcr commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 10: From Bad to Nothing
This is becoming a really great story - I just love the tention between Blake and Haze - Haze is not so inocent as we think, there is something cooking! I cannot wait for the next chapter! -
I just used the first two letters of my first middle and last name - easy! and there is apparently a russian meaning for my profile name!
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You know, with a front cover like the one above, and the expert writing of Mark, I will buy all the books that are published under his name - why not, Mark?
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hey mark, take very thanks and honour with pride - you are the best! Thanks for a great new chapter - i was asking for a bit more interaction with the kids... this is creating a great new twist to the story.
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I'm really back on the Mark fan wagon! Chapter 13 (interesting to use number 13 to bring in a Christian angle... ) is going somewhere good again. Also like the intriguing hidden agendas of people! Well done Mark - you are back in my good books!
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i agree - i'm getting very aggro with the withdrawal syndromes - i need my next shot soon! PLEASE! Dude! He's in Paris and "We" aren't. Does that suck or what? i agree - i'm getting very aggro with the withdrawal syndromes - i need my next shot soon! PLEASE!
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I totally agree - i'm feeling somewhat disappointed with the direction that this story is going... will wait and see if i'm getting inspired again. - also waiting for our captain and his shipmates to appear again.
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Nope, I know that I'm not the smartest smartie in the box!
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Mark, when are you going to introduce Brad's children into the storyline? They do sound like a great bunch of boys... hmmm
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I totally agree with what Mark M is saying, the speed how Mark is producing these great stories is just excellent - dont know how he is doing it! But bring it on. I'm just wondering who is the next new character that is coming into the storyline.
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Just want to add my cents worth on the cell phone saga - I life in South Africa and I had my first cell phone in 1997, with memory, etc. So, as a rich student in the USA, I can presume he will have a much better version than mine in 1998! Now, the camcorder, it will be interesting if Matt and Wade go with daddy to the impeachment, record the day, and come home and have a family viewing of the content of the days events... hmm drunk mummy and stiff nose daddy will have a shock of their life!!! Mark, I dont like these cliffhangers, unless the next chapter is online within the next 24hrs!
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Great chapter, some very low lows and then some good highs! The sail back home will somehow be one big orgy for the captain and his right hand (hmmm nice metaphor). Keep it comming - great news about the amount of chapters.
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oooh lala, Wilcox is the main man, he send poor Granger after Rattlesnake knowing that he will also be shot out of the water. That sly dog, Wilcox, he's going to be very surprise when Granger arrives allive and with the Rattlesnake. Mark you are sly, but love your writing! And I still love Jeffers!!!
