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Daddydavek

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  1. No waiting for me to go to the bonus...
  2. My only question is how Troy went out the back door and Dylan was sitting on the steps, suddenly morph into the front porch and Dylan telling Troy to pull his cock out and suck it in front of the whole neighborhood.
  3. Daddydavek

    Chapter 85

    Death is not a one and done, but I think the crew made a good start on dealing with it. Claire may feel relieved but I bet there is still some guilt and or regrets to unpack especially involving Marie and John.... This chapter was really well thought out and presented in a clear and convincing manner. Kudos to Mark!
  4. Do I detect pillow jealousy?
  5. I still think Troy is having as much fun as Dylan...but Jake walking in whining about blue balls could lead to more....
  6. Somehow I suspect Troy has Dylan right where he wants him....
  7. Now that's just cruel! Good thing I can jump to the next mini chapter now!
  8. Same smirk, the game continues...who will turn up the heat?
  9. So Dylan is a player convinced of his prowess, but Troy has caught his interest, so the game begins in earnest.
  10. I'd be complaining the chapters are too short, but with 25 already posted I'm heading right over to the next one.
  11. Been meaning to read this and just got started. Nice set up in a quick easy read, on to the next chapter!
  12. Daddydavek

    Aberration

    Loved getting this latest installment of this captivating story! I appreciate how torn and distraught Josh feels about his split identity and enforced amnesia. The comfort of the Kincaid siblings is telling and Greg is a stand up guy!
  13. Daddydavek

    Chapter 84

    Marie had to be there alone when her dad died and bore the full blunt force of his passing. Will's attempt to get her to see things from her mother's perspective was probably less than effective in the moment, but may be productive in the long run. The current book is already at 84 chapters, I suspect the second semester to go much faster.
  14. Fall is my favorite, but I like spring almost as much. Fresh snow does make the world pristine (not pristeen!)
  15. Second word in a row that's completely new to me. And like yesterday's, I can't envision ever using it.
  16. This is the first word of the day that I've never previously encountered.
  17. Daddydavek

    Chapter 28

    Always good to get a new chapter about George. It seems like quite a gathering. What could go wrong?
  18. I enjoyed the description of Gray's encounter with his nephew and seeing Vince in some of Freddy's facial expressions.
  19. Daddydavek

    Chapter 14

    ...and things were going swimingly until the last line. I loved how the brothers are progressing and building relationships and that Jordan and Cam are enjoying being parental units.
  20. People being kind and thoughtful, instead of suspicious and hateful, would certainly be a benefit to everyone.
  21. Daddydavek

    Chapter 82

    Isidore showed no class and Jeremy showed her up and the rest followed. Poor Jack, karma is a bitch. I agree with Will and my money would be on Marie as well. Jessica seems nice enough, but will John ever really accept her? Still worried about the Serbian mob and Buck's lawyers.... Never a dull moment at Escorial! More please!
  22. Daddydavek

    Out of Bounds

    With access to artificial intelligence?
  23. Daddydavek

    Chapter 81

    Jeremy is making progress. Travis is going to be based on the left coast more than 5 hours from Will. The Serbian mob is in flux and its tentacles are wide spread with a possible takeover in the works. Fellowes is a snake, possibly a seven headed hydra, and for all his apparent past ineptness should not be discounted. The crooked law firm employed by Curtis Buck needs to be investigated more thoroughly. Jack is a wild card and hopefully has not been ensnared by the hydra... P.S. Anxiously awaiting the next installment!
  24. I can only echo the other reviewers that this is a short story that is not short on feeling and emotions. Read and be reassured in humanity.
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  25. Daddydavek

    Chapter 1

    You made this old man cry! So happy the judgemental dad learned more about his parents and in turn reconciled with his son!
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