Daddydavek
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The boys do have a shit load of crap to carry. It does seem as fate has brought them together with the sad similarities and the really strong mutual attraction. The latter which will be noted as it becomes obvious. It seems the author has pinned a lodestone of trouble on each of the boys and hopefully they can survive it...
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Kendo has wormed his way in and made Travis dependent. Travis is focused on the "help" Kendo has provided and is resentful of Will's "holier than thou" attitude which doesn't speak well for a future together. I originally bet the big melt down would be in chapter 42 but it seems now it could happen as soon as the next chapter...although it may be a multi-chapter event.
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I wasn't expecting an evil twin story. The bit about messing with grandma's pills and watching her die was the final straw He needed killing and whether Troy assisted him over the cliff or just stepped out of the way at the charge, evil personified died. The trauma both guys faced has uncanny similarities. Will Morgan spill now or later is the question...
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As of August 4th, the story is updated to complete. Now I'm campaigning for a sequel!
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Wayne's stories are always interesting. This one is exceptionally well crafted, with restrained pacing, sparse but telling descriptions and characters you can relate to and want to know better. The setting is a cattle ranch in Oklahoma and that means hard work, sweat and long days. That mother nature doesn't always cooperate is a given. What is noteworthy, is that the characters are not bitter, and have warm hearts and can laugh in the small moments. There are elements of severe abuse mentioned in the story and how they are processed and moved on from with the help of friendship is the heart of this story. Read it and enjoy!
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Mantown, Part Two of Three
Daddydavek commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Mantown, Part Two of Three
So the wife made an offer she knew he'd never take, proving her assumptions were not as solid as thought. Jesse i suspect is about to engage in the ride of his life and his best orgasm ever. -
The stud and new hand with the cute butt are going on a tour of the spread and I'm looking forward to the next post which hopefully is longer!
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Mantown, Part One of Three
Daddydavek commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Mantown, Part One of Three
Most women I've known are not into sharing. Lyssa telling him to go fuck around with the boys implies she knows he is more into sex than gender. It appears her hubby takes up that proposal. Is divorce far behind? -
At 16 Morgan would be placed with CPS if not arrested....fleeing was a no brainer. The ride out west was a learning experience that Kbois did not overly detail. Getting the referral from the rancher was a lucky break. Meeting the stud on the stallion was probably the best stimulation for Morgan to work his ass off to prove himself. Hopefully Morgan stirred the stud too! Is it Saturday yet?
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The drug mask is slowly being noticed and Travis is still resisting counseling. Will is trying to not make it worse by bullying Travis but he should check out Travis' bags to find out what he is taking. I still think the big crash is at least a few chapters away, but it is getting closer... More please!
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In Chapter 39, Will is catching on about the pills and trying to not be a controlling bitch. So my guess of chapter 42 may be a bit premature, although I suspect it will still be a real cliff hanger....
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Chapter 18 was posted yesterday, July 30th and today the story is still in process....so I'm looking forward to an epilogue!
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That went well. Taggert came out a minority owner of Nasser but was left with change from his millions. Eric was the big winner individually from a financial view point. Ash and Taggert danced and made Rupert cry. https://youtu.be/nF66dn7woNM?si=xv5xGWC1gvdxfZBG
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The writing is tight and flows naturally, but I'm hesitant to think it will be sufficiently wrapped up in one chapter. So I'm also campaigning for an epilogue!
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Who knows!
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Travis is destined for a Betty Ford visit in a few months at the pace of his increasing dependency... Kendo is a manipulative SOB and Travis is susceptible. Will is out of the loop and hopefully if Marie visits, she will see something and say something that makes a difference. As usual, thanks for sharing and I always eagerly await more.
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I feel for Eric and I'm hoping Ash and Tag do to. I'm still hoping they can cobble an agreement together to come up with a bid better than Zane. Taggert has been surviving since the branding and only started to come alive again since getting close to Ash and the rest of the ranch hands. He has the knowledge and the ability honed by his grandfather to make something happen. I suspect our talented author will strategically surprise us how it comes together in the remaining chapters of this excellent book. The scene setting with the heat, dust, sweat and smells was excellent and like someone else earlier said, it was like watching a movie! Well done all around!
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Chapter 23 - Getting Ready
Daddydavek commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Getting Ready
The whole "family" is coming together including in some unexpected ways. The addition of Mr. Brown being one. Somehow I think that building the dance floor over the pool is going to cause some unanticipated problems. Still wondering about the youngest son and how the ex stirs things up as Martin and Nathan seem much in love, but reluctant to be out about it....- 15 comments
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instinct - Word of the Day - Sun Jul 19, 2026
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Sixty million is the starting point pending addition of the parts of the Yoder ranch assets he now owns as well. Zane will contest and as Bert noted try to get it heard in the local court where Zane has influence. He will find out Tag's location and association with the Nassers. Tag explained to Ash that he valued being seen for a man and not a money ticket. I suspect that the money will still be somewhat of an issue for Ash, but he will have to get used to it... Zane is a control freak and that does not bode well. Looking forward to Wednesday's chapter to see just how Wayne plays this.
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The first time I swam nude was at the Y in the 1950's. I've skinny dipped in creeks, lakes and rivers as a kid, but never as an adult. ☹️
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Drama is certainly brewing. I'm surprised Fab blew off Marie too. Austin is Will's go to stress reliever and that was and continues to be a problem. Travis is being easily led down the road to full dependence on Xanax and Ambien. After the wonderful break where they relaxed and unplugged, it seems they are right back at pre-vacation stress levels. Thanks for sharing!
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I suspect we need to actually find out what the trust includes and doesn't include of the vast Yoder resources. Zane still probably has plenty of his own resources but Tags may be in a position to form a partnership with Bert and Eric with Ash at his side. Hopefully Wayne can spool this out in a way that helps the good people in his story and craps on the assholes! Sunday sounds like a good day for us to see Tag meet Rebecca...
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“Last I knew,” he said evenly, “Yoder Ranch had about forty-five million in liquid assets and another forty available through lines of credit. The maximum they'll be able to bid on Flemming Ranch without hurting themselves is about $85 million. Maybe a little less.” Even a 200,000 acre ranch would likely not have that much in liquid assets. Ash is there for Tag and if things proceed apace, I suspect Tag could develop into a power bottom. ( That could be me just projecting!) The auction could be delayed if the banks don't have all the debtors on board. An audit or another survey or valuation assessment could be demanded. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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it seems that Palomar wanted to see someone in Roses. I suspect his failure to return to the ship may cause him some problems later, but now George has his cabin back and perhaps a sensitive violinist to share it. The time does seem ripe for a little adventure, perhaps an encounter with pirates on the high seas! As always, thanks for the chapter and more please!
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