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Wow, didn't see that coming, what an explosive ending to the chapter! The abuse of JJ at the hands of his coach would explain so much of his behavior change over the last few months – based on everything we've seen and heard about the effects of child abuse...
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Nope, this is Granger! He will be as successful as he was much earlier in his career while in the Caribbean…
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Circumnavigation (99+49) False Hopes and the End of the World
KevinD replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
Argghh! Indeed! We have to have faith that not even the goat would have our boys come so far only to be caught by the Argentines - no, it must be Chilean eyes behind those binocs...the question is, are there any of them in the employ of Brigit and the Cartel? One can only hope the the Chileans if that is who they are have been watching long enough to see that Argentinian patrol boat chase Atlantis only to lose them. At that point maybe the Chileans will catch up to Trevor & Shane, have a celebratory drink and then send them on their,way to the Falklands… There's a happy ending we can live with, at least for the next chapter! -
False Hopes and The End of the World
KevinD commented on C James's story chapter in False Hopes and The End of the World
Argghh! Indeed! We have to have faith that not even the goat would have our boys come so far only to be caught by the Argentines - no, it must be Chilean eyes behind those binocs...the question is, are there any of them in the employ of Brigit and the Cartel? One can only hope the the Chileans if that is who they are have been watching long enough to see that Argentinian patrol boat chase Atlantis only to lose them. At that point maybe the Chileans will catch up to Trevor & Shane, have a celebratory drink and then send them on their,way to the Falklands… There's a happy ending we can live with, at least for the next chapter! -
Well one thing appears to be certain at least, Brad and Matt are each other's emotional crack addiction…hopefully short lived with no lasting after effects. ;-)
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Argh! How did Bridgette get that number? I'm sure the goat well eventually tell us after we have dangled over the cliffs edge for a week... He would put us there while claiming not not venture near to one of his cloven hooves... ;-)
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When the scene started between Wade and Brad, I had visions of Robbie flying up to the bay area and coming to the house to make his apologies - only to find Wade and Brad together. I never even thought that they would be caught by Tony and Will... What an interesting plot twist. I'm ready for the next chapter right now Mr. Arbour! ;-)
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Argh! How did Bridgette get that number? I'm sure the goat well eventually tell us after we have dangled over the cliffs edge for a week... He would put us there while claiming not not venture near to one of his cloven hooves... ;-)
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Circumnavigation (99+46) Now It's Personal
KevinD replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
Our "failure" was that we didn't pin down our slippery goat as to which Tuesday he was referring to... ;-( -
So - perhaps Robbie's eyes have finally been opened? I don't see him calling Will for a few days. After all it has been mentioned that Robbie needs time to think things through. Tony, Tony, Tony...heavy sigh...
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WOW - To borrow a euphemism from Mark's other storyline Robbie sure took a hell of a broadside! Makes me wonder after all that was said, if he really will pull his head out of his ass? What a way to wrap up the year Mark - that was a hell of a chapter I can't wait for the next few come along. Happy New Year to you and your editing team and thanks for all of your hard work giving your reading audience so much pleasure - CHEERS!
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Weepy over a plot line development? It's got to be that Robbie reconciles with his mother at the same that JJ and Will realize that hey love each other so much that they become joined at the hip and are inseparable - of course that limits Will's opportunities with the other boys/men in his life... LOL Seriously, I have to agree that both of these story series have been so great that if our Mark feels a lack of inspiration for whatever reason to write, then so be it. It only makes the return to the story that much better... Thanks for sharing these fantastic stories with us!
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I think Stefan said it best or was it JP? Teen drama! Yep, a pretty tough weekend for Will it was surprising but not too much so that Robbie banned him from Anders Hayes though I would've thought Will agreeing not to go to the party would've somewhat eased the issue between Robbie and Will. I guess though with the major players of the family making their displeasure known to Robbie that it may have just reinforced Robbie's displeasure with Will... I'm looking forward to Robbie and Will finally being face-to-face to see just what happens next; and will JJ be lurking in the wings ready to throw gasoline on the fire? Thanks Mark and team - Happy New Year!
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I love this story and my only regret is the wait for the next chapter! LOL... Thanks Don - Happy NewYear to you!
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Circumnavigation (99+46) Now It's Personal
KevinD replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
No - ABSOLUTELY not a movie treatment. This is is worthy of a muti-night episode mini series... :-) -
Circumnavigation (99+46) Now It's Personal
KevinD replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
I hate to think how she might be stepping up for game, taking her gloves off…shivers! Welcome back CJ, get well soon – great to have you home! ;-) -
Another great chapter. It was great to see Will and Brad together talking through their concerns, and especially nice that Will had a resurgence of feeling love for his father. The scene with Robbie was interesting; let's see what Robbie does next. How will Brad react when Robbie brings it up? Probably a little bit frustrated but given that it might just wake Robbie up, he should be happy that he did not have to play the JJ card himself. It is a good thing that we know that Will is a good kid, not evil. Otherwise, Will would've been like a spider spinning his web around Alastair to get back at JJ. I just don't read Will that way. Thanks Mark and team for another job well done!
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So do you suppose that Trevor placed Gray's transmitter somehow with the VCR tape? Not quite sure how that might've been done but how else would the police be able to close in on Bridget while she is watching the tape? Too bad about Julie...but reading how Bridget put together her web of surveillance on Trev, she sure seemed to have covered all eventualities...
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Will & Noah...that intangible something that Will can't figure out. Perhaps that little piece will grow into an irresistible pull that brings some normalcy back into Will's life and let's him focus on where he should be emotionally vs where family wealth/means and emotinal 3-ring circus has taken him... I can hardly wait to see where Marik's next chapters will take us… Thanks for the continuing ride Mark!
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Have to agree that it was sad to see Will get his Tony wake up call but for the best...
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Nothing like Hurricane Will to bring in a breath of fresh air...nice to,see him back relating his story! Thanks Mark & team!
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Was surprised to see Cochrane sent home but after reading Grangers reasoning it certainly makes sense... And what do we make of the Bacchante's newest passenger rescued from that captured ship?
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Not quite as much excitement as the last chapter but at least we see the senator getting his freedom from Elizabeth. Let's see if Wade is right about his mom using her alcohol as a screen to hide behind... It was nice to see Carl getting his comeuppance as well! That was a nice little scene between Wade and Gathan, thankfully Matt took it very well. ;-)
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Now that the queen bitch has been exposed, I wonder if/when she will try to expose other deeper and more dangerous aspects of recent past story lines...didn't she cotton to Brad's Godfather-like cleanup of messy family issues? There are some really exciting thins that can come up and I can hardly wait for Mark's next chapters and future story lines... Thank you Mark & Team! :-)
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Hi CJ, FYI I have received two system notifications indicating new chapter postings but when the link is followed there not to be found. Per your posting schedule there shouldn't be anything out there until November 26 so something strange is happening with the system... Is this evil Bridget messing with our minds? LOL Safe travels to you!
