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Nephylim

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  1. Haha. i love the way you SO get it. Pour one for me
  2. Of course it wasn't. And what on earth makes you think that anyone in a position of power in this county are competent.
  3. Well... say it as it is innit When I said about Sam 'sacrificing' his son I think it was about it his views and beliefs were more important to him that his son and he was prepared to let him go to keep them. That's all River is being a complete shit. i think he's come to the end of his tether and without even knowing it he's hitting out at Silver. When things are going badly I think people tend to look for people to 'blame' and it's alwasy those who are closest to us that we hurt most.
  4. Well, thanks to cruella de ville River doesn't really feel that he can get too involved in the funeral and other things. I have to admit that I did consider putting in more about dealing with his parents affairs but I figured that it was more important to tell the story of what's going on in his own family, so I got the family solicitor to deal with all that.
  5. You know me so well I think that when you get to chapter 15 you'll have a better understanding of what's going on in Silver's brain and it isn't something that surgery can fix unfortunately
  6. That's why I don't want to be a grown up
  7. Ben is a lucky boy. He hasn't really had an unhappy childhood except for missing River. He's not so happy now though... and it's going to get worse before it gets better... of course it is, this is my story after all
  8. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Sometimes it never does and that's the true tragedy. Thank you for your comment.
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 9

    I often do bad things without thinking... but not in this way Thank you for your comments and I'm really glad you enjoyed the story
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    Chapter 9

    I worried that it might be a little too 'gratuitous' but I thought that I really needed to show that Ash is more than a schoolboy and this is more than a crush. He needed to 'grow up'
  11. haha. i hope I'm not THE man It would be good to say that this was a complete charicature but it's not. There are too many people like that around... and even around here. Working as a solicitor I see the best and the worst. What is about to happen, while it may seem incredulous is based on something I see again and again, day in and day out. Please stick with the boys PLEASE
  12. We...ell there are dungeons and then there are dungeons Why on earth woould I want to be politically correct? Why would I want to be political at all? Politics are ruining the world. As for the story. Jake, Ben and Silver are a wonderful trio. They take care of each other.
  13. As someone who yesterday make my first application ever for Social Security I can testify to how bleak it is. It seems as if society values only people who can contribute to its pockets and never mind those who contribute, through words, music, art, love; to its soul. Keep faith. Maybe one day....
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    Computer scans...

    Ummmmm.... really didn't understand that. What does the little box mean?
  15. I wanted people to realise something about Silver and I hope it is starting to come through. He's damaged and he's childlike but he's not a child and he has an emotional maturity that I think everyone underestimates a lot of the time.
  16. What on earth makes you think that i don't like Sandi? I absolutely love her. I think she was very cathartic for River and Silver both but, looking back this was the start of a whole lot of trouble.
  17. Well, particularly in the beginning this is such a dark story that I try to inject humour whenever i can
  18. Why on earth would River say no Would you?
  19. RIP Jeff. You were a classic
  20. :music: HAPPY BIRTHDAY :music: :wub:
  21. Nephylim

    Chapter 8

    That's what the men are like around here. They'll show emotion but if you ever mention it again they'll kick you in the balls
  22. Nephylim

    Chapter 8

    That's what the men are like around here. They'll show emotion but if you ever mention it again they'll kick you in the balls
  23. Well, I don't know if I have made a huge mistake with this story. Too many people have said that it's too hard to read. That's not what I intended. I appreiate that it is hard to read but I think that if you bear with me it does get better
  24. Nephylim

    Chapter 7

    Of course there is If there wasn't where would be the fun in that.
  25. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    Well, there is that but I think that in circumstances like this it's hard to see the wood for the trees and it was always on the cards that Josh was going to quit so I thought it would be fun if he did it dramatically
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